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Poem By: yellow daimond
Erotica


this is my first erotic poem View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 30, 2007    Reads: 91    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


As i stand there staring at him i can see that he wants me

he says come here as he pulls me near

rubbing the back of my thigh while he passes me pot to get me high

he grasps my ass pulling my body hard on to his taking off my clothes telling me do you know

do you know what time it is?

i reply yes baby as he gets me ready

he kisses my lips as i grab his dick he knows how bad i want this

he grabs my hands slamming them over my head making sure im pinned to the bed

squeezing my tits saying i know you like it when i fuck you like this

i moan softly as he continues to enter my body telling me have you been naughty

yes i reply as he lets out a sigh flips me over slaps me on my ass; he begins to fuck me fast

fucking me harder each time, i scream! he says shut up bitch this pussy is mine

he flips me over again lifting me by my thighs pulling my hair

as he lifts me toward the sky's

bouncing me up and down, i cum and he gently lays me down fucking me softly listening to my

sweet sound, he sets the rhythm according to my voice i realize i have no choice as he

quickens the pace our hearts begin to race then he gently touches my face

as i wrap my legs around his waist squeezing him tight i await his release

then i feel it peace!


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Comments:

hi there... nice first attempt.. it wasnt bad... at first i was a bit turned off by the language but by the end i liked it

Posted: Feb 3, 2007

Author Comment:

my language isnt for the overly sensitive its raw and daring but thank you

Overall, good...I mean, yeah, most people irl do say it that way, and I see what you are getting at, but maybe a tad sweeter would do

Awaiting Judgement

Posted: May 9, 2007

Author Comment:

ya sweeter would have been more apealing but i wasnt going for sweet i wanted raw feelings this poem was writen foe a friend befor i went to see him!

Arthur
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primal passion. i hope you lived it for your friend.

Posted: Nov 27, 2007

Author Comment:

of course i did!!!



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