Tags:
erotic,
romance,
sex,
make,
love,
lust,
wanting,
desire,
passion,
love,
embrace.
This is about the very first time one experiences the kiss of passion and the embrace of desire.
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Submitted: Sep 7, 2008
Reads: 516
Comments: 8
Likes: 6
Under the veil of the night
Kindles a fire so bright
Senses are set afire
Bodies rocked by desire.
The shyness of her first kiss
Melts into the depths of bliss
Yields to passion's sweet allure
Alight eyes once so demure.
Tongues engaged in frenzied dance
As eyes lock in searing glance
Shy hands fulfill their ache
Of longings newly awake.
Fingers roam with candor
Succumb to strange ardor
The feel of every caress
Ignites a hunger long suppressed.
Lips quench their raging thirst
Bodies drowned in heat immersed
Passion voiced in soft sighs
And simmers through hooded eyes.
Bodies coiled in sensuous dance
Limbs locked in intimate romance
Lips roam across every sinew
Lust roars ablaze anew.
Softness yields to heated hardness
Succumbs to his skillful caress
Soft breasts seek a cradle
At his hands so gentle
Bodies lost in the moment
Sway to a rhythm vibrant
Bodies slick with sweat
Give music to a new duet.
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Comments:
This is enjoyable.
Fav line: Soft breasts seek a cradle
At his hands so gentle
Posted: Sep 7, 2008
Wow that was beyond fantastic. Definatly one of my favourite poems yet! Congrats on a job VERY wel done.
By the way, I think you're taking to the style quite expertly.
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
excellent job..i really enjoy it when ppl can write about stuff like this without being vulgar about it :) keep up the great work. your very good with words and as GeminiGirl87 said your taking to the style very well :)
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
that is a really,really nice poem.you wrote.
keep up the good work.and i'll be looking forward to read more of your poems...
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
i love it it carries so much passion and so sensual i can almost feel and see what is in your writng bravo
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
Nicely written, tightly versed with some good lines.
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
Gave it an I Like It - some excellent lines
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
great poem, the rhyme,the passion! it's incredible how a kiss sets up such a fire and desire.
Posted: Oct 6, 2008
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