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The First Embrace

Poem By: zarakmez
Erotica


This is about the very first time one experiences the kiss of passion and the embrace of desire. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 516    Comments: 8    Likes: 6   


Under the veil of the night
Kindles a fire so bright
Senses are set afire
Bodies rocked by desire.

The shyness of her first kiss
Melts into the depths of bliss
Yields to passion's sweet allure
Alight eyes once so demure.

Tongues engaged in frenzied dance
As eyes lock in searing glance
Shy hands fulfill their ache
Of longings newly awake.

Fingers roam with candor
Succumb to strange ardor
The feel of every caress
Ignites a hunger long suppressed.

Lips quench their raging thirst
Bodies drowned in heat immersed
Passion voiced in soft sighs
And simmers through hooded eyes.

Bodies coiled in sensuous dance
Limbs locked in intimate romance
Lips roam across every sinew
Lust roars ablaze anew.

Softness yields to heated hardness
Succumbs to his skillful caress
Soft breasts seek a cradle
At his hands so gentle

Bodies lost in the moment
Sway to a rhythm vibrant
Bodies slick with sweat
Give music to a new duet.


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Comments:

This is enjoyable.
Fav line: Soft breasts seek a cradle
At his hands so gentle

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much...I am still experimenting with the style as you can see... will post more soon.Thanks for reading.

Wow that was beyond fantastic. Definatly one of my favourite poems yet! Congrats on a job VERY wel done.

By the way, I think you're taking to the style quite expertly.

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much for the great review...I am really glad that my writing is appreciated...I hope that you'll like my other poems just as much. Thanks again for the great encouragement.:)

excellent job..i really enjoy it when ppl can write about stuff like this without being vulgar about it :) keep up the great work. your very good with words and as GeminiGirl87 said your taking to the style very well :)

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for the kind words...It was my intention to try and portray it in an elegant way:) Thanks again for the appreciation.

that is a really,really nice poem.you wrote.
keep up the good work.and i'll be looking forward to read more of your poems...

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much for the encouragement...I'll try to post new poems as soon as I can. I am so glad to get such nice feedback:)

i love it it carries so much passion and so sensual i can almost feel and see what is in your writng bravo

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I am so happy that the poem seems vivid to you...I try to tantalize without being crude. Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poems. I am truly grateful:)

Nicely written, tightly versed with some good lines.

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks very much for the heads-up... I try my best to keep it simple but meaningful. Thanks for being appreciative of my efforts.

Gave it an I Like It - some excellent lines

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much...maybe you'll like my other poem 'Desire's Serenade' which is more recent:) Thanks again for the good feedback!

great poem, the rhyme,the passion! it's incredible how a kiss sets up such a fire and desire.

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I am very glad that it's being appreciated...i wanted to portray that incandescent feeling of all-consuming arousal which can be lit by just one kiss! Thanks for reading and the nice comments:)



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