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(My first erotica)

Short Story By: Adamhatter
Erotica


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Submitted: Apr 3, 2008    Reads: 142    Comments: 5    Likes: 4   


Jack stood staring at his wife.

He had come home from work early, she had been waiting for him in her sexiest lingerie.

His eyes slowly ran over her body from bottom to top. The sexy red heels, the black leather stockings running up her long legs, strictly gartered  to her small black thong, the red and black bra accentuating her curve of her perfect breasts...God he was getting hot.

Jill slinked sensually over to him. Her hand ran slowly down his chest and slipped into his trrousers, gently caressing his large erection

Her eyes met his with a devilish smile"You've been working hard Jack, let me help you unwind".

Kneeling down slowly she unzipped his fly and slowly eased out his big throbbing cock.

"My Jack, what a big pencil you have...let's sharpen it"

Gently she licked the end of his penis, slowly circling the head  and driving Jack wild. She then eased his member between her moist red lips and slowly began to suck him off.

"God Jill" moaned Jack "that feels so good baby".

Jill's mouth worked his acheing shaft like a pro, slowly getting faster and faster hungry for the creamy hot cum she wanted so bad. It was making her pussy so wet.

Jack begant to pant and moan "Oh god Jill, I'm...gonna...cum".

He wasn't lying his cock throbbed hard in her mouth, Jill gave one last thrust and was rewarded as he shot his salty ecstasy.

Taking his still hard penis out of her mouth she kissed him, long and passionately.

They undressed each other slowly savoring the revalation of their naked forms.

Jill laid jack down and straddled him, Gently guiding his erection into her tight moist pussy.

She began to ride him hard and fast, her pussy burning with pleasure.  he was so thick filling her completely, giving her what she wanted...no, what she needed.

Faster and faster she fucked him, she could fell how close she was and also how close he was.

With one final thrust her orgasm ripped through her, met by his. His hot cock spraying her full of his sperm filling her up.

Exhausted, they collapsed and held each other tight.

A marrige made in heaven.


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Comments:

My, that was erotic wasn't it! Well done Adam, a superb piece. ~ KB

Posted: Apr 4, 2008

Ha! Erotica is addicting isn't it! Sweet!

So, what did Jill do next? Tell Classy Peach. Classy Peach is listening. I'm Classy Peach.

*meehee*

Posted: Apr 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm pretty sure it was kinky and involved plastic toys nd soft cheeses.

I had fun writing this one, really I did.

Whew! Great job! I'm off to take a cold shower now. :)

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Well, LC said you were good, but I had to see for myself. She was right. Very nicely written.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. And a big thanks to Lacey for the reccomendation.

wow. [:

Posted: May 2, 2008



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