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I am not too sure how I will segue this into my Peach story...but it's a coolio piece of erotica. Fantasy....use your imagination. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 2, 2008    Reads: 922    Comments: 11    Likes: 4   


The Chinese Antique Gild Canopy Marriage Bed was found in Shanghai…A bed produced from deep wedding red camphor and baimu wood fashioned like a chamber and adorned with gild.  The grand and visual stature unmistakably affluent with ancient Chinese culture and craftwork holding forbidden stories memorized into the grain of the wood. Patchwork panels on the wooden walls of the chamber canopy bed detail eighteen cranes dancing around the goddess of wealth, engraved trellises of golden wisteria fasten the timber stratum and tiger dragon scrolls with deep character faces furrowed into thick feral eyebrows arched to show their epic strength.  The interior ceiling of the primordial, canopied and wooden enclosed pod is festooned with carvings of mountains representing long life, and water conducive to the sea of happiness and when in harmony symbolize a Long Happy Life. Surrounding the sinister chamber steam steeps from hot springs sadistically mixing into the crisp midnight air and phantoms its existence. White sand plots the bed and is bordered with weeping cherry trees just beginning to bloom. The garden, where this bed is, in Shanghai… is called Subliminal Pleasure. Deep evergreen foliage contrasts the deep hanging cherry fuscia blossoms. The bed is the centerpiece of Subliminal Pleasure Garden. And the only time the cherry blossoms fall off the trees … anticipating new buds, is when lovers synergize in the bed in the Garden, called Subliminal Pleasure. The main chamber of the bed is saddled with 2 ante-chambers, one for disrobing and one for the servant.

……she’s just closed her eyes again. She spends her nights in the 2nd chamber. Her bliss, her deep love and endowing gratification…is serving. Not daring to think she could ever enter the main chamber of the bed, her mind and senses would surfeit with stimulation, even simply at the thought. She lies in divine reflection of her duties, massaging feet, pouring sake and keeping the manor…fresh. Not one thing could please her more than tending to the supremacy, brilliance and radiance lying so close, in the main chamber of the canopy bed, simply two panels of visual privacy away, but not sound.

….The two lovers lay in splendid satisfaction; they cannot get enough of each other…he keeps bringing her to ecstasy not possible in this realm…in the main chamber of the canopy bed. She lays spooned in front of him, the scent of their passionate expression suspended profoundly in the air, in the darkness. Her back slowly bows forward and her buttocks responds amid muscles tightening as his strong fingers gently trace her spine with featherlike buoyancy. Her eyes fight to stay open to revel in their cosmic connection played out in now tangible love. He blissfully embraces her soul and she is warm.   His hand craves the small of her back and she rolls onto her tummy to indulge him. She turns her face and he nuzzles his whiskered jaw against her porcelain skin. She sighs affectionately and he nestles into her neck with passionate words from Komachi ….”Though I Go To You; Ceaseless Along Dream Paths; The Sum Of The Trysts; Is Less Than A Single Glimpse; Granted In The Waking World.” She feels his heart strike in the force of his brawny chest and his hand snakes the length of her feminine curves and twists into her soft hair. Her eyes widen with desire and then flare into a seducing pattern of enticement upon her prey. In the dark he doesn’t see the ruse of his tigress but certainly feels it and he cups one of her breasts to show his gratitude with a tight caress to her nipple. He constricts his grip on her hair as her body starts to quiver. The quivering reminding him of earlier in the day when she had laid in regal stature on their bed.  He had dug his fingers into the freshly bathed flesh that silkened her delicate ass. His strong hands saddled her cheeks and bit in with a demanding grip.   It amused him how well her ass fit his hands as a grandeur and sly smile slipped over his lips. Her cheeks. Skin scorched red after a long secluded immersion of erratic bubbles and delusion, and a body weak from heat and desire. Before leaving the hot spring, her hands let a cascade of water dribble and extinguish each of the lily votive candles that surrounded her sanctuary. Lily votives lit for the sheer comfort of the fragrance while bathing. Each candle back lashed it’s dousing by spitting wax that landed and solidified into mounds.

“I’ve got something for you”, she arrogantly cooed as she cuddled her knees into her chest and laid her face sideways down on the bed. Her ass displayed at his face like a cat in heat waiting to be stroked. She giggled at the thought of her gift to him…her ass, like this.

“And I’ve got something for you” he replied while adjusting the volume to the Lakme Opera before turning back to fill his hands with a little flower unfolding before him. He strengthens his seize on the crease where her thighs met her warm torso and with his thumbs began a deep massage into the contours of her still crimson behind. He raised himself onto his knees, while behind her and leaned into her inward curved back, his lips landing on her ear and whispered intensely, “You are not allowed to turn around no matter what I do”. And with that sentence, she melted. 

Feeling the vibrations from his herald-some whispering voice rattling through his strapping chest onto her sleek and curved back she closed her eyes and blurred her imagination to be unfocused and to search through a profound dream periscope dawning in her mind.

His two strongest fingers followed the soft line that parted her backside as he swiftly moved his body back to his original position of stimulating her from behind. He burrowed his lips onto her lower back and softly rested a kiss. She gasped a wonderful "Ohhhhh"  and her Romeo sifted back to the moment at hand of that evening. With the pleasure of his hands she murmurs into the heavens …“Let me bring in the servant…” . He brings his face into hers to hush their words and kiss the mouth of his vixen, “….and what would you do with her?” he whispers back, almost commanding like. She suckles his lips….slowly starting on the bottom, forceful tongue stroke from one side to the other, and then plume like, back along the top.   And repeats…

tBc


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Oh my!

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh my! is way better than Oh No~!

Well, you defineately have the art of subtley down pat! I always admire the trait. I don't share it, but I admire it.

Posted: Feb 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww...I've never thought of that being admirable. Thank you so much. Thanks for commenting, i really need a kick in the ass right now to get writing again...

well well well...

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

oh.
um.
is that good or bad sighing?

red camphor and baimu wood, I have not idea what kind of wood that it but a good image.

This was a little steamy for me this early in the morning but good job.

I am beginning to see you have a distinct style of writing the more I read and I like that.
Being consistent is a good way to find your true voice instead of being all over the place.

I will keep reading

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Well am I ever pleased that you read some erotica to start your Tuesday.

EEEEyep....I do speak to a different audience with my writing. I often prologue that I just can't write normal which is why I appreciate that I certainly write with my emotions guiding.

Thanks so much MTC. I re-featured this story to get my flow going again and see how much my writing has grown since I initially wrote this.

oh my goodness me . the things one learns

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

God I love this little erotica piece.

Detail, detail, detail. The Flower duet from Lakme by Delibes? The plural quality of this gets me straight away. Remarkable

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

For some strange reason I cannot take this one any further! What the hell! I have a love/hate with this story. I adore the Lakme. Me and the Lakme are good friends.

Cool Ken. And thanks but I think you're over-rating me.

The flower duet is my second most erotic piece of music. You will have to ask me what the first is.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey...I was gonna guess!!

Bull! Overating my arse.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

:)

The complex sensory stimulations of your words are perfect match for the bed and the act. Brilliant, intricate symbology, grandeur ritual. What other couplings can I make to describe how I feel this? We should all have such a magical opportunity. Wonderful.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Some days you leave me speechless with your litany to me.

*coughs* Damn your story is so complex and so many emotions. *pink face* I've got to stop loooking at this before something happens to the hubby... *runs away* :)

-DD

Posted: Sep 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Go jump on him.
And then wiggle.
Thanks!

funny what makes us write or read for that matter. I guess i had to read this curiosity got the better of me and so i did and thank God i did or my life would have been missing a link of interest or experience. Some people can write well and others cannot: you can. This is a prime example of what a good write is all about.

Posted: Nov 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, I doubt your life would have missed a link.

Thank you so very much, one of my first writing expeditions.



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