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Silent solace

Short Story By: Kinkyboots
Erotica


I think this represents contentment with myself. :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 2, 2008    Reads: 258    Comments: 7    Likes: 7   


There in an open room she walks with a piece of white cotton in her hands. Her footsteps barely grazing the floor as she makes her way into the open space. Her body is a marvel to the darkness, her warmth startling even the dust from the furniture that lay covered against the wall.

Standing in the centre where space is permitted she closes her eyes and lets her head fall back, her hair tickling from shoulders to her shoulder blades. There the solace begins, as the sound of silence plays against her soul. And so she begins dancing with the white sheet of linen allowing it to glide over her skin, as soft as her shadows against the walls. Her movements are composed perfectly in time to the sound of the linen beating against the air.

The cosmos welcomes her naked body so baring her flesh for all to see she lifts the linen up and brings it down, brushing it over her breasts where her nipples answer at her will as she continues to move. A gift to the dry air stricken for weeks without chance of escape.

Again she repeats the action this time whimpering a sigh of relief. Again and again, the cotton runs across her milky skin, bringing back to life to all that was lost and all that was forgotten until as if in a trance, she starts to sway left and right, spinning in circles and throwing the linen into the air! Her body floats, coming and going, she is consumed by desire, enjoying her body and the pleasure only she could bring.

Then, as if the universe were answering her call, a bright light from outside once blocked by old curtains begins seeping into the room! And there the dusty furniture now uncovered gleams in the ray of a new day!

Her body glowing against the warm colours in the room, she abruptly stops in awe to search this new place.

There are no shadows left, only a reflection of herself as she leaves the room smiling.


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Comments:

hehehe, I liked it! The description was perfect, your style of writting can be described as nothing less than lovely.
Awseom KB!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah, such a sweet comment Steph! You're always there to top up my smile huh? :) Thank you for that. ~ KB

I feel like you were whispering in my ear when reading this. So serene. Enjoying one's self is one of the best things in life. The cotton....whipping her senses.

KB. Wow.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww, shucks! You know, If I had a place of my own and I knew no one would catch me, I'd do exactly this! LOL Ok, TMI? Hah! Would be fun though. Thanks for reading it Mushy Pe... Opps I mean Classy! :) You know it means a lot. ~ KB

There was magic, in the shadows, and a strong sense of self beauty and sensuality of movement. Allowing the flow of music and touch of cotton to bring about that personal pleasure to its finality.

I could actually create a photo essay of your imagery created there.

Well done.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Rodney, I couldn't ask for a greater compliment! You've managed to catch the emotion and the intention of this piece, and made me one happy gal! Thank you! ~ KB

Love yourself first and everyone will follow, it was beautiful and true;) I loved the simplicity of it. I'd hang it on my wall anytime! *smiles

You paint a pretty picture KB
~rain

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw, thank you Rain. And yep, you took the words right out of my mouth, a little self love is all you need. :) How big is your wall? lol Thanks again ~ KB

I like it. It really is deep and I love the way you describe it all. Excellent job KB. I am always amazed by your work.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow, thank you Michael, that's is a huge compliment. I'm so pleased you think so much of my work! Thank you again! :) ~ KB

once again i would add ....this is soft and spiritual rather than 'erotica'....

ur writings reflect maturity and control and so write fearlessly without inhibition....owkie??

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yep, I got ya! And I agree, not really erotica. I think this was me in renewal. :) Thank you for the support Pratibha!

J Paul
(not registered user)

Wow. I was right there

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

That's a perfect compliment! thank you for that! ~ Kb



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