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They F**ked in my bed. I was inspired. Kinda short for a short story. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 23, 2007    Reads: 326    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


Sex.  Is me lying on the floor.  Hearing the heavy breathing above me.  The tremble in each inhale.  Then exhale.  Hearing the almost silent squeak of that one spring in the bed.  Not exactly a steady rhythm.  The inability to tell who's on top.  The imagination tosses around a few ideas.  There is no cresendo.  No great peak.  No amazing climax.  Just wavering breaths.  And a final squeak.

Afterwards I contemplate faking sleep or laughing.  I laugh out loud at myself for even thinking that.  The two are startled by my sudden outburst.  Possibly forgetting that I was even there.


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DARN GOOD!

Posted: Jul 23, 2007

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Thank You Very Much. One of my first tries at this kind of writing. Glad somebody likes it. :P

hehehehe i know who they are ^_^

Posted: Jul 26, 2007

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i'll bet you do

like 2 little fairies playing in the blades. more on this maybe sometime?

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Really good....kinda creepy though...just a bit. But again I say, REALLY GOOD!
~Artemis

Posted: Nov 10, 2008



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