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Submitted: Mar 20, 2008 Reads: 251 Comments: 6 Likes: 4
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Ok all, I have revised this storie. and yes there will definately be more to come!!! I am working as we speak! I have been a very busy bee!! LOL!! but there will be more I promise!
Posted: Mar 20, 2008
Hey! Glad you're back! This was wonderful - very sensual. Loved the "pleasure rod". That brought a smile to my gace. Great job!
Posted: Mar 21, 2008
only the two of them could unlock...very good phrase.
You've chosen great action words that keep the story moving (other than the great sex of course!) wheeling. glides.
Posted: Mar 21, 2008
Not my typical reading choice, but I have to say that I might have to refer my wife to your stories!
Posted: Mar 28, 2008
Every time I read your work I can't help but tell you how much I love it.....I hope this doesn'tget anoying
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
Really liked this, not cheesy at all.
Awesome choice of words. I know I got something out of it ;]
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Posted: Sep 15, 2008
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