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My Version Of Twilight Book 1

Novel By: JenCullen28
Fan fiction



This is a story about me Jennifer Rose Swan and the Cullen's. I am changing Bella's name to mine and I also have changed the story up a lot to the way I want it to be. I hope you enjoy. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Aug 18, 2011    Reads: 27    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


Hey its me again here is chapter 3 I hope yall like it. All thanks go to the writer of all the Twilight Saga books.

Chapter 3: Going home

                                                                                    

I woke up and looked around and I saw no one, so I just laid there and turned the TV on. It was on the news so I sat there and watched it. I was sitting there and then the door opened up and Dr. Carlisle came in. “Good morning Jennifer how are you doing this morning”?  He asked me. “Good morning Dr. Carlisle and I feel great thanks. Can I go home today, don't get me wrong I like seeing you but I just don't like hospitals”. He just laughed and told me that “was OK, everybody says the same thing”. “Well lets see” and before he could say anything mom and my dads came in and saw that I was a wake. “Hey mom and dads” and they told me “hey”. “Well lets see Jennifer, if you eat some breakfast and keep it down then you can go home later today”. “Nick is there room in your house for a hospital bed”? Dr, Carlisle asked my dad. “Um mm no but if you give me a bit I can make room in our living room and well I guess I need to build a ramp so we can get her in and out of the house”. “Nick me and Ryan can come and help you get it ready for her if you want”, my mom told dad. “OK sounds good to me, honey we will be back before you come home and we will see you later”, my mom said. “OK yall have fun”. “Oh one more thing, when I let her go home she will be going home in an ambulance and they will help yall get her in”, Carlisle said.

                                                                              My mom and dads left me with Dr Carlisle and he was talking about when I will be having physical therapy and stuff like that. There was a knock on my door and I said “come in”. The door opened and Edward walked in with flowers and some candy and a beautiful smile on his face. “Hey Edward how are you today”? I asked him. “I am doing good just thinking about you and wanted to come and see you”. I gave him a smile and his dad got up and told “me that they will being me some food in a min”. I looked at him and told him “thank you” and then he left. “So when do you get out”? Edward asked me with a smile. “Well your dad said that if I keep breakfast down. then he will let me go later today”. “Oh well that is good, how are you going home”? He asked me. “Oh a ambulance will be taking me there and my mom and dads are there making room for my hospital bed and making a ramp for my chair”. “Can I ride with you when they take you home, I wont if you don't want me to”, he said. “No you can if you want”.

                                                                                “Jennifer I got a question for you”? Edward said. “Yes what is it Edward”? “Well I was wondering if you like me”? “Oh well yes I do, I have liked you when I first saw you on the plane and I did not even know you”. I then blushed a bright red and he laughed at me and gave me a kiss on the forehead. “Edward I have a question for you now”? I said. “Yes Jennifer what is it”?  “Well you do not have to answer if you don't want to but I really want to know. Why do you have paler skin than I do and your eyes change colors and your skin is very cold”?  I asked him. “Well Jennifer I will tell you but let me get my dad, I will be back in a min”. He left me and then someone brought me my food and I was eating and then Edward and his dad came in and sat on either side of me.

                                                                                  “Jennifer if we tell you about us you have got to promise us that you will not tell anyone about us. And if you and Edward are going to be together you need to know what we are”, Carlisle told me. I just looked at him and told him to “go on”. “Well Jennifer we are not human, well we are but ummmm well we are vampires”, Carlisle told me. I sat there and looked at both of the guys sitting next to me and I gave them a smile and said “OK”. I was a lost for words and they just sat there and waited till it all sank in, I sat there for a min thinking about them and I looked at Edward and he had a worried face. I looked at him and asked him “if he was OK”? “Well I will be if you say something about what my dad said about us”. “OK well I was so not expecting that and if yall are vampires how can you be around us humans”? “Well Jennifer if you notice our eyes and how they change different colors, form gold to a darker color and then sometimes black, we are what we call each other vegetarians. We only drink animal blood that is why our eyes are gold and when they turn black that means we are thirsty”, Dr Carlisle said. I just sat there and let all that sink in.

                                                                   “Well OK that is real cool, that mean yall wont hurt me”. “No wait a min Jennifer I did not say that. We may not drink from humans but we do have to be careful, see we were wondering why Edward was so connected to you and we found out that your blood sings to him and it is very hard for him not to take you right here and now”, Carlisle told me. “But Jennifer, I will not hurt you I can resit your blood its just very hard to be around you but I don’t want to say away from you”, Edward said. I just looked at him and gave him a big smile. “Well Jennifer that’s enough for now we will talk more about it when we can OK”, Carlisle said. “OK” I told him and I thanked them both for telling me and then my door opened up and my mom and dads came in. “Hey yall did yall get the stuff done”? I asked them. “Yes we did and that is why we came back to tell Dr Carlisle”. “OK well I guess you can go home then, you have kept down your food and you look like your not into much pain”, Carlisle said. “OK I will get an ambulance and your discharge papers and I will be back in a min”. “OK doc” and then he left.

                                                                                   “Is it OK if I ride with yalls daughter”? Edward asked my mom and my dads. They all just looked at each other and then mom said that “it was up to me if I wanted him to”. “Yes I would like for him to ride with me” and I gave him a smile. Carlisle came in and had me and my mom and dad Nick sign some paper work and then he told us that “the paramedics were on there way to get me”. “Thank you so much Carlisle for taking care of me for so long”. “Your welcome Jennifer, I will be over to your house a lot to check on you and to help your parents with you”, Carlisle said. “OK”, then the door opened up and the paramedics were here to load me into the ambulance. They picked me up very easily so not to hurt me and put me on a stretcher and everyone fallowed us out. They loaded me in and I asked Carlisle “where my bed was”? and he told me “it was already heading to my house”. “Oh OK thanks again” and then Edward got in with me and they closed the doors.

                                                                        That was not a fun ride, I felt every bump in the road and when they hit one it sent pain all over my body and two I was not comfortable because I had a neck brace on and I hated it so much. Edward  held my hand and kept telling me “it wont be long and we will be at my house” and I just smiled at him and told him “I know I just wished we were there now”. Then the ambulance stopped and a second later the doors opened up, and then the paramedics got me out and wheeled me into my house and they helped get my bed sat up and then they lifted me very carefully and put me in my bed, but even tho they tried to be careful it still hurt very bad because of the road. I told them “thank you” though my teeth because I was in a lot of pain and then they left me there with my family and my new boyfriend. Awwww my new boyfriend  I thought to myself. I got settled in my new bed and boy was I hurting a lot. “Mom I need my medicine please, those bumps in the roads hurt me and being moved hurt a lot”. “OK Sweetheart I will be back in a min” and then she went to the kitchen.

                                                                                    Man I did not want to take my med because I did not want to go to sleep but I needed them. So mom brought me my med and I took them and then I thought again how am I going to use the bathroom. “Hey yall how am I going to use the bathroom”? “Well Carlisle told me that we will have to put you in your chair and then help you use the bathroom”, mom said. “Oh OK I was just wondering”. Then another question popped into my head, “what am I going to do about school? Don't it start Monday and this is Wednesday”. “Well Jennifer if you can go you can but if not I am sure Edward will bring you your homework and other stuff to you”, mom said. “Yes I will bring anything you need Jennifer”, Edward told me. I gave him a smile and told him thanked him and then the med kicked in and I told them that “I was going to go to sleep and I will see them soon because it was just 2 in the afternoon” and then I fell asleep.

                                                                                           I woke up and I looked at the time and it was 6 in the after noon and I heard people talking. I saw Edward  and I said “hey” and he came over and gave me a kiss on the forehead and told me “hey”. “So how do you feel sleepy head”? He asked me and I told him that “I would feel better but I am so about to use the bathroom on myself”. He just laughed and he went and carefully picked me up and put me in my chair and he told my mom that “I need to go to the bathroom”. She said “OK but she would need help getting me on the toilet”. J”ennifer who do you want to help you”? My mom asked me. And I told them that “Edward could if that is OK with them” and mom said that” would be OK”. So they pushed me into the bathroom and helped me get on the toilet and then mom helped me wipe me and then Edward picked me up and mom got my clothes on and then Edward put me in my chair. He pushed me up to the sink and then mom asked me “if there was something going on between Edward and me”?. I looked at him and he nodded and I told her that “we were boyfriend and girlfriend” and she just looked at us and said “OK that she was just wondering”. Then they pushed me back to my bed and Edward put me in my bed and covered me up.

                                                                                          “Jennifer we need to talk to you”, mom said. “OK what is it mom”? “Well Ryan needs to get back to his band and we wanted to know if it was OK for us to go back”? Mom asked me. I looked at her and told her that “she can, that I have dad and Edward and his family here to help me”. “Are you sure Jennifer if you want me to I will stay and let him just go back”, mom said. “No mom go with him, I will be OK with everyone here so you do not have to worry about me:. She smiled and gave me a hug and told me that “they will be leaving tonight”. “OK mom I will be OK and you know I will”. It was going on 8 at night and mom and Ryan gave me a hug and told me that “they love me” and then they left. I started to cry and Edward and dad both gave me a hug and told me “it will be OK”. We sat there and watched TV till I was about to fall asleep and dad asked Edward “if he and if he can call Alice over and stay the night with us to help him”. Edward said “sure” and gave Alice a call and she said she “would stay with us tonight”.

                                                                         Alice got to my house around 9 pm and she and Edward sat on the couch with my dad and then dad told Alice that “if she wanted she could stay in my room tonight and Edward can stay on the couch”. “I will stay in Jennifer’s room”, Alice said and then Edward told us that “he will stay on the couch”. “Well guys I am going to bed, Jennifer if you need anything I will be in my room”, my dad said. “OK dad goodnight and we will see you in the morning”. Then he went to bed. “So do yall sleep or what”? I asked Alice and Edward. “No we don't sleep so we are just going to hang here and I will go to your room in a bit to use your computer and to call Jasper”. “OK Alice, I am going to go to sleep now and I will see yall in the morning”. “OK Jennifer goodnight”, they told me. And then I fell asleep.

Well this is the end of Chapter 3 I hope you like it and tell me what yall think. Thanks.

                                                                                            

 

                                                                                            

 





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