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Mcfly Changing my Life

Novel By: shaz77
Fan fiction

its a fan fiction about Mcfly. But I don't own them though. Girl goes to a Justin Lee Collin show but will this show change her life forever. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Mar 10, 2013    Reads: 64    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

I looked right into his eyes. His deep blue eyes. I melted. He leaned forward, not taking his eyes away from mine. I could'nt do it. I moved further on to the worktop, tearing my eyes from his. He understood and backed away.

"Sorry, I just can't", I stuttered.
"It's ok, I don't know what I was thinking", replied Danny shyly.
"It's fine", I said awkwardly. Then we heard a click.
"Water's boiled", shouted Danny.
He sure knew how change the atmosphere in a room quickly. I laughed as he spun round, boyband like and poured the tea. I watched him while he got the milk and finished making the tea. He turned round agian and placed the two cups of tea beside me on the worktop. He then jumped up on the worktop beside me causing the tea to spill over the edge of the cup a little. He grabbed a cup and took a sip.
"Ahh nothing like a good cup of tea", sighed Danny, "I hope yours is ok".
I took a sip of my tea "Nope this is shit", I laughed.
Danny sulked and I laughed. I hopped down from the worktop and grabbed the sugar which Danny had left out and put another two teaspoon fulls in and stirred.
"Sorry didn't think you needed sugar, I thought you were sweet enough", Danny flirted.
"Aww that's cute", I replied.
My heart melted. I jumped up on the worktop and moved back until my legs were crossed on the worktop. I grabbed my tea and took a sip.
"Much better" I smiled.

Me and Danny just sat in the comfortable silence, only hearing the occasional sip from us drinking our tea. I enjoyed it. I finished my tea so I placed it carefully beside me. I looked at Danny who turned just as I did. I smiled at him and he smiled back. I grabbed his mug and mine, got up and shoved them in the dishwasher. I took Danny's hand and pulled him off the worktop. He groaned as I did so.
"I need to go", I spoke.
"And you had to pull me up why?" Danny questioned
"So I could get a hug", I simply replied.
Danny pulled me into the hug I wanted. I took in his sent. It was sweet but not to sweet. I liked it. I didn't want this hug to end. But I suppose it had to. I let go and took a step back. He walked me out of the house
"Thanks", I said.
"No bother, I shall see you soon", Danny replied
I smiled in return.

Once Danny went in I walked down the path and into my car. I just sat there for a minute. Am I in love?


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