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Twilight. Bella's want from Edward. If you haven't read Eclipse, it won't make a whole ton of sense...just a heads up. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 21, 2008 Reads: 67 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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a bit rushed and short (in my opinion) but there is room for more details and better flow & imagery.. you could help the reader understand the meaning of the poem better if you put in more hints or clues.. although i get this because i've read the book =)
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
A good woke if I do say so. I do agree with tin2twinkling about it being a bit short and rushed but you already said yourself about it being just a quick thinking work. I do understand it all being as I keep up on tabs with the Twilight Series.
You have a great style though regardless. Keep up the good work!
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
This poem is really cool, and elicpse was my favourtie book of them all.. i think ^^
Posted: Jul 23, 2008
To my opinion, it was well written. I can surly relate to this.
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
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