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My Last Wish

Poem By: Itania
Fan Fiction


WHELL! If I do say my self, being a vampire would be interesting. Another Twilight based poem! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 22, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 10    Likes: 2   


The hours are drifting,

and I lay here

wind sifting,

through the trees.

~

I hear a noise,

a creak,

a groan.

You're here again.

~

Why don't you get it over with?

It will take less time,

to explain what is happening,

instead of waiting.

~

I will grow older every day,

and you'll still wait.

Graduation

is four years away.

~

So make my wish come true.

You're waiting,

scaring me,

tempting me to tempt you.

~

It's true my life is like no irritible grizzly.

and I know about you.

but even then.

My wish will not come true.

~

The night is calling,

the moon rising,

your cool breath

is on my neck.

~

I can't wait

until the date.

When my wish

comes true.


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Comments:

i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

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i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

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i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

see previous.

i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

you already said that.

i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

cool! Thanks!

i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thans for the mulitple encoruagements.

i like it!! well written, and it rocks! two thumbs up!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

how long does this go?

Very Very different and just SUPERB....

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. It doesn't really follow my normal pattern so it was a streach to write this.

hi! justine. may this night never end. for such a passionate night is meant to carry on. loved it. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. Have you ever wondered if some one is watching you as you lay in bed awake? It's a creepy feeling. And when you've been reading vampire books, it just increases the tension.

really liked it i like Twilight a lot! i also have a twilight themed poem lol. =]

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I know you like Twilight! I'll have to read yours!



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