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The Amazing Spider-man #1 With Great Power

Script By: Peter File
Fan fiction


My first modernization is of probably the best Marvel superhero out there. The Amazing Spider-man! Enjoy!

PS: Before anyone asks, the tragic accident in New Mexico refers to The Incredible Hulk.


Submitted:Mar 25, 2013    Reads: 33    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


(Boy narrating)
New York City. My home. My playground. My gymnasium.

(Spider-man overlooks NYC streets on top of building. Spider-man jumps from building & free-falls until he swings across NYC. Spider-man swings past man reading DB & wind it creates blows man's hat off revealing bald spot. Spider-man grabs streetlight & does several flips. Spider-man releases streetlight & resumes swinging across NYC)

(Spider-man)
WHOOOOOOOO-HOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

(Boy narrating)
It's typical NYC traffic at this time of day. Tons. Well actually now that I think about it that's all the time around here. Anyway. I bet many people are on the phone with their husband or wife or whoever saying "Hi honey. I'm gonna be late coming home because of traffic." To them I say "You wish you were me." I can avoid all of that by pretending to be Tarzan swinging across my concrete jungle.

(Close-up of Spider-man)

(Boy narrating)
Yep. That freaky looking guy swinging over the city? Me. No I am not an alien. No I am not a mutant. Underneath that costume is a perfectly normal human being. Ok maybe not perfectly normal. But still.

(Spider-man ends up in Forest Hills ny & sticks to side of small modest looking two story house. Spider-man opens upstairs window & crawls inside. Inside bedroom with science related things in it Spider-man quietly closes window jumps down from wall & removes mask. Close-up of face under mask which turns out to be 15 yr old boy)

(Boy narrating)
See? Normal.

(Knock on door)

(Voice of old women)
Peter? Are you in there?

(Close up of Peter who has worried look on his face)

(Boy narrating)
Maybe I should start from the beginning.

(Flashback to about two weeks ago. Peter asleep in bed. 7:00 am. Kind old clean shaven man barges into bedroom & shakes Peter awake)

(Man)
Rise and shine little porcupine! Don't want to deprive the school of that big brain of yours now do we?

(Peter groans sleepily)

(Man)
That's the spirit!

(Man throws covers off Peter. Peter rubs eyes trying to wake up)

(Man)
Hey. Aren't you supposed to get your test back today?

(Peter nods still barely awake)

(Man)
Well then all the more reason to get up!

(Man opens window curtains & lets sunlight pour in)

(Man)
Up and at 'em.

(Peter shields face w/ arms & laughs)

(Peter)
Ok ok! I'm up.

(Man)
Good. Breakfast is waiting for you downstairs.

(Man leaves bedroom & closes door. Peter gets up from bed puts on glasses & prepares for day ahead)

(Boy narrating)
My name is Peter Benjamin Parker. This is my story. I was just your average 15 year old kid. I went to school did homework and was lazy on weekends.

(Peter comes downstairs into kitchen/dining area)

(Peter)
Good morning Aunt May. Uncle Ben.

(Aunt May)
Good morning dear.

(Uncle Ben)
Morning kid-o.

(Close up of aunt may & uncle Ben. Show scenes of Peter's history w/ them)

(Peter narrating)
Aunt May and Uncle Ben. Raised me since I was six. What was supposed to be a weekend away from my parents ended up being 9 years so far when a plane crashed taking mom and dad with it. But hey. These guys are the best.

(Peter approaches table looking hungry)

(Peter)
Mmmmm. Waffles.

(Aunt May)
I know they're your favorite.

(Peter sits down & prepares to eat. Aunt May kisses Peter on forehead)

(Uncle Ben)
You're spoiling my nephew you know that?

(Aunt May)
Well of course I do. After all he's my nephew as well.

(Uncle Ben)
Yeah but I'm the one with the same blood as his.

(All three laugh as Peter eats)

(Later on at the end of science class in Midtown High School Peter seems to be only one paying attention)

(Teacher)
Before the bell rings I've graded your tests from last week. Some of you did well. Others not so much.

(Teacher passes out tests)

(Teacher)
Peter. Another A+. Well done.

(Peter)
Sweet.

(After teacher hands out all tests bell rings. Students leave class. Peter approaches female student at locker)

(Peter)
Hi Sally.

(Sally ignores Peter)

(Peter)
So I was wondering. Um. There's this really cool presentation on radioactivity down at-

(Sally)
Are you serious? omg. I love radioactivity. We should totally go after school.

(Peter)
Really?

(Sally)
Oh yeah. We'll go just as soon as pigs fly.

(Peter)
Aw man.

(Tall blonde football jock approaches w/ angry look on his face)

(Jock)
Hey puny Parker!

(Peter)
Aw crap.

(Jock)
This freak n geek bothering you Sal?

(Sally)
Ugh! You have no idea.

(Close up of jock. Show scene of kid playing w/ punching bag)

(Peter narrating)
How can I explain the relationship between me and Midtown High's combination super football star/local bully Flash Thompson? Let me think. You ever see little kids play with those inflatable toys that you push over and they get right back up? Yeah. Need I say more?

(Crowd of students begins to gather around Peter Sally & Flash. Flash pushes Peter to floor)

(Flash)
Get lost nerd!

(Sally)
Loser.

(Students disperse as they laugh at & taunt Peter. Peter groans in pain & sits up)

(Peter thinking)
One of these days Flash. One of these days.

(Later on at science hall Peter attends radioactivity presentation)

(Peter narrating)
So I'm a 15 year old science whiz with no parents or friends. Ok. So maybe I wasn't that average. But compared to now I was pretty normal.

(Scientist)
Welcome everyone. The scientists here have made an important discovery on controlling radiation. Science involving radiation has become so controversial ever since that tragic accident in New Mexico. Still it is so necessary in many things such as finding cures for diseases. We here at the Manhattan science hall have spent many weeks working on a way to make this dangerous field of science much more safer. And now we're ready to demonstrate how we did just that. Enjoy.

(Audience applauds. Scientist turns on machine. Electric radiation generates between two poles. Close up of small spider descending toward electric radiation. Spider gets irradiated between two poles. Spider glows of radiation. Spider continues to descend to audience. Spider lands on Peter's right hand & bites. Peter grabs hand in pain)

(Peter thinking)
Ow! What was that?

(Peter releases hand sees spider & spider bite)

(Peter thinking)
Yikes! A spider. But why is it glowing? That can't be good.

(Spider jumps to floor & scurries behind table to die. Peter holds forehead in pain)

(Peter thinking)
I don't feel so good. I've gotta get outta here.

(Peter pushes through audience)

(Peter)
Excuse me. Pardon me. Move!

(Peter runs outside & into street)

(Peter thinking)
Oh my head feels so weird. Now it's tingling.

(Tingling turns out to be spider sense. Car horn honks. Peter turns around w/ panicked look on his face just in time to see car heading straight for him)

(Peter)
Whoa!

(Peter jumps out of way just in time. Car turns corner & continues on)

(Peter thinking)
Whew! That was way to close for-

(Peter looks back & down. Peter discovers he is sticking to side of building)

(Peter thinking)
Comfort? What the heck? I'm sticking to the side of this building. Like glue. But how?

(Peter looks closely at fingertips. Close up of tiny barbed hairs on fingertips. Peter puts hand back on side of building & begins to climb)

(Peter thinking)
And now I'm climbing?! This is crazy!

(Young boy w/ mother sees Peter climbing)

(Boy)
Mommy! Look at that man climbing a building!

(Mother)
You watch too much TV.

(Peter climbs to top of building)

(Peter thinking)
Wow! I made it all the way to the top! Pretty easily too.

(Peter grabs onto metal pipe to pull himself up & crushes it)

(Peter thinking)
Holy crap! Hope I don't have to pay for this.

(Peter pulls himself onto roof of building & looks at pipe in amazement)

(Peter thinking)
I did this with one hand too!

(Peter looks at spider bite)

(Peter thinking)
It's gotta be that spider. It must've been radioactive and when it bit me I guess it gave me its abilities. So how do I get down from here?

(Peter looks around & notices next building is very close. Peter approaches edge of building)

(Peter thinking)
Here goes everything.

(Peter jumps off building & sticks to side of next building but lower)

(Peter thinking)
Well that worked. Let's try it again.

(Peter performs feat again w/ same result)

(Peter thinking)
Hey. This is actually kinda fun.

(Peter performs feat again & again until he lands on dumpster. Peter flips off dumpster & lands on ground)

(Peter thinking)
That was awesome! I gotta think! What am I gonna do with these powers?

(Peter heads for home. On the way Peter sees newspaper on ground. Peter picks it up flips through it & sees advertisement for a chance to win money for defeating wrestling champ crusher hogan)

(Peter thinking)
Well I guess that answers that question.

(Peter rushes home. Peter barges into Parker home & runs upstairs to his room)

(Aunt May)
Peter!

(Peter!
Sorry aunt may! Can't talk!

(Aunt May)
Peter wait!

(Uncle Ben)
Peter you come back down here.

(Peter stops dead in his tracks turns around & comes back downstairs. Peter hides spider bite so as not to worry aunt may or uncle Ben)

(Uncle Ben)
Did you enjoy that science presentation thing?

(Peter)
It was even better than I thought it'd be.

(Aunt May)
Really how so?

(Peter)
Actually guys. I've got a lot of homework. I better get to it.

(Aunt May)
Oh ok dearie.

(Uncle Ben)
We'll come up later to see how you're doing.

(Peter)
Alright. I'll see you guys later.

(Peter goes into room & closes door)

(Peter thinking)
I hate that I lied to them like that. But I don't want them to worry about me. Now. If I'm gonna fight a wrestler I'll need a costume. Let's see here.

(Peter goes to closet & picks out old clothes somewhat resembling future Spider-man costume. Peter removes glasses to put on shirt. Peter notices something strange about his vision. Peter puts glasses back on & takes them back off. Peter repeats this until he realizes glasses are no longer needed)

(Peter thinking)
That spider bite even affected my eyesight. I don't need my glasses anymore. Too cool! I should probably wear a mask just in case things don't go as planned. I get made fun of enough as it is.

(Peter finds ski mask & puts it on)

(Peter thinking)
Corny yet original.

(Peter sneaks out bedroom window & heads for wrestling stadium)

(Later on at wrestling stadium tall muscular bald clean shaven man finishes defeating challenger)

(Announcer)
Ladies and gentlemen your champion once again crusher hogan!

(Crowd cheers)

(Announcer)
Is there no one who can defeat our long time wrestling super star?!

(Peter's voice)
Yes there is.

(Everyone faces Peter in full wrestling costume)

(Peter)
Me.

(Crusher laughs)

(Crusher)
You? Yeah right.

(Peter)
Come on. Don't tell me your scared.

(Crusher)
Me? Scared? Nab. I could beat you in less than a minute.

(Peter)
Well then. Prove it.

(Crowd cheers crusher on)

(Crusher)
You asked for it. Step up here.

(Peter enters ring. Both competitors go to opposite corners)

(Announcer)
Let the battle begin!

(Announcer moves out of way. Bell rings)

(Crusher)
I don't much like picking on little guys so I'll make this quick.

(Peter)
Oh it'll be quick all right.

(Both crusher & Peter run toward each other at full speed. As crusher tries to grab Peter Peter jumps & flips over crusher's head. Crowd gasps)

(Peter thinking)
I am loving these new powers.

(Crusher turns around w/ surprised/confused look on his face)

(Crusher)
Hey! How'd you-

(Peter turns around & faces crusher)

(Peter)
That's my little secret. Now come on crusher! Show me what you got!

(Peter dodges & counter-attacks every move crusher makes. After a blow to stomach crusher is down for the count. Peter hoists crusher in air & w/ one hand spins him around like pizza dough)

(Peter)
Round and round and round he goes. Where he stops nobody knows.

(Crusher)
Whoa! Hey! Easy now! Put me down! I'm afraid of heights!

(Peter)
Ok.

(Peter throws crusher across ring. Crusher is down for the count again. Peter approaches crusher & puts one foot on chest)

(Peter)
Ole!

(Crowd goes wild)

(Announcer)
Ladies and gentlemen your new champion!

(Peter basks in glory. Crowd cheers. Close up of one spectator in business suit w/ satisfied look on his face)

(Later on backstage spectator approaches Peter still in full wrestling costume)

(Spectator)
Hey you!

(Peter look at spectator & points to himself as is to say who me?)

(Spectator)
Yeah you. Come over here.

(Peter approaches spectator)

(Spectator)
Son. Anyone ever tell you how amazing you are?

(Peter)
Yeah I've been told that once or twice.

(Spectator)
Well you're gonna here it a lot more often. Why? You may ask. Because I wanna be your manager! My card.

(Spectator pulls out business card from suit pocket & hands it to Peter. Peter takes it & reads it)

(Spectator)
Listen. Stick with me and I'll make you rich. I'll get you on Letterman. You'll be famous. Your videos will be more viral than that sneezing panda.

(Peter)
I like it.

(Spectator)
Oh but uh. You might wanna work on that costume of yours. It's kinda corny.

(Peter)
Yeah. I literally threw this together last minute.

(Spectator)
So what do you say?

(Peter)
I say Mr. You got a deal.

(Peter & new manager shake hands)

(Show scenes of Peter later on that evening mixing chemicals to create web sewing Spider-man costume & building web shooters)

(Peter thinking)
Whew! Where's Tony Stark when you need him?

(Knock on door)

(Peter)
Come in.

(Spider bite on Peter's right hand has healed so Peter no longer needs to hide it. Aunt May & uncle Ben enter room)

(Peter)
Hey.

(Uncle Ben)
We thought you might be getting hungry so we brought dinner up for you.

(Peter)
Oh thanks.

(Aunt may places food on Peter's bed & leaves room w/ uncle Ben & closes door)

(Peter thinking)
Good old Aunt May & Uncle Ben. Now let's test this baby.

(Peter puts on web shooter & loads web cartridge. Peter fires web. Web shoots & sticks to wall)

(Peter thinking)
Yes! It works! With such a sticky end on it I can swing all over New York. All right!

(Peter pumps fist in air & web stuff shoots everywhere)

(Peter)
Whoa!

(Peter releases trigger & web stuff stops spewing. Peter cleans up mess)

(Peter thinking)
Guess these things still need some tweaking.

(After a few minutes Peter perfects web & web shooters)

(Peter thinking)
There. My two inside fingers are now the only fingers that can fire a web. And just in case the webs will dissolve after about an hour or two. This is perfect! Let me see. I got the costume the web and the web shooters. I'm ready for the big time! Let's see how I look.

(As Peter becomes Spider-man he thinks of a name)

(Peter thinking)
I need a name. It's gotta be something unique. How about the sensational arachman? No that's stupid. Maybe the spectacular man bug? Closer but still no. I got it! It's corny yet original. Ever hear that before?

(Peter puts on Spider-man mask thus fully becoming Spider-man & jumps up & sticks to ceiling)

(Spider-man thinking)
I'll wow the world as The Amazing Spider-man!

To be continued..........








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