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An emotional account of a music lover.Sometimes things that seem trivial to us are of immense important to someone. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
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So true...in pursuit for money, fame, and name, we leave aside our parents and their desires...AND then ONE day when they are gone ...we realise....OH MY GOD ! I LOST EVERYTHING....lovely story...touched and stirred heart and soul...
keep me informed...u know I would come....i liked ur style and choice of topics...keep it up...
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
Hi
Thanks for dropping a Hello!
Sorry, I am bit caught up in the same situation as you have penned down in your story.
I have been just fulfilling father's wish to pursue PhD from IIT and when you go against your wishes you are likely to fall sick. So, I am under medication for depression/hypertension/psychological counseling.
I revolted against the system and al last I had to write to Ho'ble P M Sir and so the things got solved but my wish to leave the institute couldn't get solved.
I was accused of being mad and was given a forced leave for 8 months and to get t/t from a mental asylum. Funny. Isn't it?
No, one came to help, my friends ran away in fear. 14 September shall be the last date for my comprehensive exam and then I shall be bringing these events in a story form.
A N Y W A Y S
Your story completely reflects the contemporary society and the grand son too unable to play guitar was a very sarcastic remark towards the parents how they have completely rejected their parents and think that their hobbies, culture, knowledge, etc. is completely irrelevant and how the young ones are being deprived of their rights. This part was very touching. and
on 8th march mother expired and so I an understand how it feels when I couldn't fulfill her desires and mine too to do something for her. She died because I got struck in the Banking system of our country.
C U Soon, logged on today after a long time an found your comment.
Bye, write more and more, you write so less, don't try for the best but write to write, let others choose the best not you.
Lastly, please do some editing in it or next story like
[One day when Atul was playing guitar, Chirag shouted,”Atul, you have bunked your Physics lecture for playing this.Are you crazy? What about your career?” “Dad, today is Grandpa’s birthday and he asked me to play it for him”, explained Atul. “ Oh, I don’t want this useless thing in my house anymore.”] can be written as:
”Atul, you have bunked your Physics lecture for playing this.Are you crazy? What about your career?” Chirag shouted when he found Atul has bunked the class and was busy playing guitar.
“Dad, today is Grandpa’s birthday and he asked me to play it for him”, explained Atul.
“ Oh, I don’t want this useless thing in my house anymore.” Saying this Chirag snatched the guitar and distorted its strings.
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
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