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The Unforgettable Birthday

Book By: catsarecool

Tags: Mermaids

Crystal knew her parents were hiding something from her. She could hear them through the vents in her room. She was 12 and her birth day was the next day she had a lot to do, but what she didn't know is that her parents planned a bigger suprise. She didn't know that this was going to be her biggest adventure yet.

Submitted:Feb 27, 2013    Reads: 20    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

Chapter 1

The Birthday

Crystal was pacing back and forth. She could hear her parents speaking but she couldn't make out a single word. Crystal thought to her self, "If only I could hear what they are saying." She decided to get some rest so she could think about it in the morning. Happy Birthday!!! yelled Crystal's parents the next morning. Crystal looks at her clock and checks the time. Why in the world did you wake me up at 3:00 in the moring Crystal asked. We have a suprise for you, sorry we had to get you up so early but we had to make sure nobody was at the beach said her parents. The beach, why Crystal asked. Well we thought because you love the beach so much we thought you would like it if we took you there her parents said. Oh, ok I'll get my swimsuit on and then meet you in the car. Ok sweetheart see you later. Later in the car. Ok, ready mom. Ok lets go. When they get to the beach they decide to surf board first. Crystal grabbed her surf board from the back of the car and started walking twoard the water. Soon enough she saw a huge wave. She started to swim twoards it. When she was near the wave she stood up on her board. She rode the wave with such skill and passion that it was beautiful to watch. Then Crystal came back to land to go swimming with her parents. When she got in the water she swam out until the water was very deep. Crystal turned around to talk with her parents and to thank them for bringing her here. Then gigantic waves formed and came straight for her. The first wave knocked her underwater and the others didn't allow her to come up. Then all of a sudden Crystal started to sparkle. She looked around wondering why in the world she was sparkling, but she couldn't see her parents anywhere. Then the sparkling stopped and Crystal relized that she wasn't wearing her swimsuit, she noticed that she had a blue mermaid tail! At first she was shocked, then she was amazed, then she got mad at her parents for not telling her. She looked around and saw her mom with a pink mermaid tail and her dad with a green tail.


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