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Book By: Moonie
Fantasy


This new story is about a Sarah and Sam. These two lovers are soon torn a part by a disaserus war. Soon a killing has happend during this terrible war Sarah learns it might be Sam. Will it be? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 30, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Sarah and Sam you could never find a happier couple in the world. Sam was a kinght for the king, a master at armsused for teaching new squires and leading battles. Sarah was a wonderful seemstress. Soon would be their wonderful wedding in the early days of spring, but a week before their weeding Sam was called out to war. Although Sam tried all he could to leave later than called the king refused this request. Sam and Sarah's wedding would have to wait. Weeks went by. One early morning while Sarah was out working with her fellow steemstressess at Feelows Washings her friend Melissa came rushing in through the big wooden doors screaming Sarah's name over and over. Her friend came rushing over to her "Sarah!..(gasp) ..Sarah!!..(pant)..They......(pant).... They think...Sam is dead......" Sarah gasped " No!" she thought to her self "It can't end now after all the planingwe have forour life TOGETHER and all the happieness we had! ". She bolted out of the washery up twords the castle only to see them starting to carry the body of her beloved Sam on a stecherinto the castle. When she got up to themSarah screamed" Put him down!!.....Put him down!!". The soldiers did as they where told........they knew this was Sam's to be wife. Sarah bent down over him weeping in silence she reached over to remove his helmet when a soldier grabbed her wrist " Don't take off his helmet" the solier scoleded " But I need to see his face....." Sarah whimpered still on her knees " Sorry ma'm" letting go of Sarah's wrist and motioning to the other soldiers to pick up the strecher with Sam's body on it " That would be disrespectin' the soldier". Sarah sat there stunned the man she was suppose to spend the rest of her life with was gone for ever. Melissa helped her friend to her feet and took her home without a word. The next day Sam's funeral was held it was very large Sarah saw many people she knew and others she didn't one of the strongest tuffest Masters was crying loudly while Sarah cryed quietly to herself as the pastor said the last few vows it started to rain then Sam was quitly lowerd into the ground. After the funeral Sarah started home but the solider who had grabbed her arm yesterday stopped her, he introduced himself as Solider Eric. Eric said that he was fighting with Sam when he died and said that if Sarah would ever need anything he wouldbe there to help. Sarhathanked him and whent on her way. A couple a days later Eric came over and invited Sarha to dinner with him. Sarha stood there in agast Sam had just died two days ago and now one of his knights was asking herto dinner! She told him no and started to close the door but he held the door open and said " NO one tells me no your coming!" Then Sarha slamed the door closed while Eric's foot was still in the door. After yelling and muttering to himself he went away. The next day it seemed so hard to get through her live with out Sam so she went down to the cove and ended her life slowly. Sam came riding out of baddle. Sam wrode over to Sarha's house: She wasn't there he found Melissa and begged to know where Sarha was she said Sarha was down at the cove last time she saw her. When he go to the cove he saw Sarha's body laying on the sand. He quickly got down there and scooped her up she was gone. He took her to the crypt and lay her down in an old abandond section where a little sunlight was showing though a crack in the ciling and patch of grass was growing and placed her there.He went home and cried himselfe to sleep. That night he had a dream that Sarha told him to go to the old witch and beg for her help so the next day he did. The witch told him to Put one drop from the contents of the bottle into her mouth Then read a section of the book out loud and then she would awaken from her dead sleep. So he quickly ran back to the crypt and he found her there; her face was slightly sunken in but other wise she looked as beautiful as she always did. He put the drop in her mouth and read out the book and all of a sudden a glorious light fell upon Sarha. Her eyes opended and she smiled. They were married May 13 and happy together (for now......)


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Really good. I know you know what im typing because your reading my message over my sholder.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

YEP!!! dude why did you post the same message three times??

lol
iggysgirl posted the same thing 3 thimes.
lol

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya She tends to do that but scence she's my best friend i can forgive her!! ha ha ha!!

hi! moonie. wow. this is a fantasy tale. sam and sara made a neat couple except they were torn apart by 'death'. but were miraculously reunited in life again. amazing. i liked the fairy tale ending. the old witch is loveable for her part. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks you and a coulple other people are the only ones who've read it. Your comment means a lot!

it kinda confusd me, but then I got it!Good work!
Justine

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Sorry it seems confuseing, but I'm glad you liked it!



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