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Change of blood

Novel By: AddieWestwood
Fantasy


this is a story of a girl who moves to Galesend, where her father has a new job.
Then her world turns upside down...
she gets lured into a mystical world of vampires and other creatures that is having its very own war in the heart of Galesend... and she has stepped right in the middle of it while intensifying it, in becoming the object of a game of tug of war...
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Submitted: Jun 22, 2008    Reads: 546    Comments: 17    Likes: 4   


One

It all started a year ago.

When Kingston Boys' Academy packages addressed to my father arrived. At first I thought nothing of it; “just a package".

But it wasn't 'just' a package; it was a whole new beginning; and not a good new beginning either. My father, who I have been told to address as Robert now, was offered a teaching position at Kingston boys' academy which he would "be crazy to ignore". But that means moving all the way across the country to an inconceivably small town calledGalesend and start a new school that’s a 20 minute drive from Galesend.

"Addison?" Da-Robert called over the intercom, something I used only when forced.

I closed the email I was reading and made my way down stairs.

"Yup?" I answered when I saw Da-I mean Robert in his study perched over his laptop; surprise, surprise.

"'Yes' Addison, 'yes', not 'yup'" Robert sighed, not even looking up from the screen.

"Yes Robert" I answered, my voice drenched in sarcasm.

“Careful with that tone young lady.” Robert said sternly, finally looking up over his glasses perched on his nose. "Just reminding you about the bus tomorrow, it’ll be here at 8 sharp, so be out there about 5 minutes early; just in case.”

“What bus?” I asked.

“The school bus Addison, I have to be at Kingston’s at 6 so I couldn’t drop you off, Oh and don't forget that tomorrow is Wednesday."

"Oh,” I said, trying not to sound too disappointed, “What’s so special about Wednesday?”

Robert's eyes flickered up to mine again.

"The formal dinner at Kingston's with the whole body, so be ready at 5.30 I'll pick you up. The dress code is quite formal." Robert explained a matter-of-factly.

"What? You mean I have to go to an all boys' school just to eat dinner? You’re kidding me right?" I asked, not bothering to hide the spite I my voice.

"Addison I am really busy, and no I am not kidding." Robert said in his monotone again. "Is that all?"

My eyes skimmed over his desk, glasses and computer, which his eyes were focused on; his focal point of attention these days.

"Yes" I answered sharply, leaving without another glance in his direction and ignoring the pit in my stomach; knowing that tomorrow I’m going to dine with all the staff and teachers at Kingston Boys' Academy, along with 650 adolescent boys'. Great.

I stomped outside letting the cold air engulf me. I tightened my arms around me and headed down the path down to the river. It was dark, but I was beyond caring about my surroundings. I heard the low rush of water before I saw it. I rounded a corner and although I could not see the river clearly there was enough light to sharpen the features of where it surged. I inhaled the crisp smell and took another step, intending to dip my feet in.

I heard a small crumbling sound before the entire bank I was standing on caved in and I was hurled into the river that swallowedme whole. The tide pulled tug war with me as I frantically clawed at the water. I didn’t know if I was close to the surface, but the cruel darkness enveloped me.

I was going to die.

I closed my eyes and surrendering.


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Comments:

I love the opening

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

:)

hi my name is shelby and i am pretty new to booksie..i don't have any of my stories posted on here yet...i will some time soon though..lol..bu ti love th story so far!! its great...loved the opening hehe

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks and welcome to Booksie!

nice.....I'm off to read more.....:)

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

haha...cool

This is great stuff! I like the realism of the girl's thoughts, and the predicament she faces as a minority. And the end of the opening has me wondering what's coming next. Great stuff!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! i have a real defined idea of my character in my head(yes i am normal...or am i?)...thanks for the thought on the character!
haha you have no idea...dun dun duuun!

AHH, i love this.
cant wait for more..
i think i shall go read the next chapter :)

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot! :)))

wow...thats a pretty dramatic opening, but it got me hooked...i'm off to read the next chapter :)

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Yup thats what i was going for...thanks!

hi im new to booksie so i dont have much posted but this is pretty awesome!! tottally awesome read my stuff when i post it plz :o)

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks and welcooome! wil do, just post me when ya do!

This story is very intriguing. I was captivated as soon as I started reading it, and I am excited to get to know Addison better. If you have time would you look at my stuff too please? -off to read more-

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! Good to know my writing has that sort of effect! cool!

this is very well writin i really enjoyed reading it

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

:) phew, i'm glad to hear it!

Loved it

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading it!

Lol. Interesting :)

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

i would hope so...lol

oooh this has a good beggining so far! cant wait to read the next chapter! yo kiwi friend -Renee hehe

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you..i cut it down lots and edited it so it's a relief that it's a good start.lol

Nicely done. The first chapter drew me in. Though, and I don't want to sound like a an ass here, you need to edit it a bit more. I noticed a few missed spaces between words that confused me at times. The core is there, and it has a wonderful artistic feel, just needs a bit of tightening up. Keep it up Addie, you're doing well.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks,and yeah don't worry about it...i would rather you be honest than lie and say..wow great, perfect, blah blah...cheers...i try...lol

That was Awesome. =] Now i'm ready for chapter 2! lol

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks..enjoy!

An engrossing read.

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks...ooo i love that word...engrossing! lol

YAY!!!! I WOULD so EAT AT AN ALL BOY'S SCHOOL! AHAHAHA. ♥ dANI.

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Author Comment:

of course you would who wouldn't...lol...*sighs*
lol

Well written

Posted: Oct 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you.. :)



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