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Layla The Kinamo

Novel By: Artimous
Fantasy


Layla is training to be a Vojak, which is the most honored warrior of her people, unfortunately, her trainer Xander is the last person she wanted to spend every day with...Layla is fighting to become a great warrior, but she is finding it hard to reach into herself and grasp the great power within, and as she struggles with the feelings she unwillingly has for Xander, she learns what it really means to be a Vojak. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 91    Comments: 8    Likes: 1   


Layla is thrown into the wall, it webbed out behind her with fresh cracks formed from the pressure of the blow. She jumped back up, and grit her teeth at Xander, who stood a good two yards away with a smug little grin on his face. With all the strength she could scrounge up, she formed a power ball and threw it at Xander with an angry yell. It flew into Xander, knocking him back just a few feet, where he landed gracefully on his own two feet. 
"Fuckin' show off..." Layla hissed under her breath.

"Nice try, Layla. But that was supposed to be a Power Ball...I didn't feel much power from it." Xander called from across the arena.

"Well, if you hadn't kicked the shit out of me already, I would've been able to put more power into, you little prick..." Layla growled angrily back at him.

She could see him roll his eyes, thanks to her advanced sight and hearing, she also caught his frustrated sigh.

Layla blinked, and Xander was standing infront of her, she heard an 'oooh' from the crowd that watched from the sidelines, she glanced over and found a small group of girls had formed, they stared with googoo eyes at Xander. Layla faught back a gag of disgust.

"I wouldn't be kicking the shit out of you, if you would just stop being so damn stubborn and pay attention when I tell you to do something, it's called learning. Look it up." He hissed back, not paying any attention to the girls as they giggled and tried very hard to get his attention, Layla assumed it was because he had gotten used to it. Ever since he showed up a year ago, every girl at the school was stumbling all over themselves to get him to notice them, well every girl but Layla.

Layla couldn't think of a reply, probably because he was right, she should be listening to what he was telling her, but she didn't want to. They stood there, staring each other down, neither one of their gazes faultered, until,that is, one of the giggling girl pack pranced over.

"Xander! Oh Xander, do you think you could come and show me how to do that Whip thingy again? I forgot." The blonde bimbo giggled as she put her hand on his arm, forcing him to look away from me.

"Whiplash, Nani, it's called a Whiplash. And sure, me and Layla were done here anyways. Same time tomorrow Layla." Xander said walking with the girl named Nani towards the other end of the arena. Layla scowled at the giggling group and Xander as he explained one of the easiest moves in the history of Kinamo Fighting. 

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Layla stormed into her apartment, spitting out every curse word she could think of and make up. She threw her duffle bag on the floor and screamed through her clenched teeth. 
"Well, it sounds like you had more fun with Mr. Sexy Xander." Said Ria, Layla's roommate. Layla glowered at her. "Don't. Call. Him. That." She said angrily, still clenching her teeth, and now even her fists.

Ria laughed at Layla's anger and grinned, "Oh come on...you know you think he's hott. I mean seriously, there is so much sexual tension between the two of you, if I walked between you, I'd have an orgasm." Ria said grinning mischieviously at Layla. 
Layla's jaw dropped and all the anger flooded out of her, as she stared dumbfounded at her roommates words. "What?!" She managed to blurt out.

Ria laughed again, "Hello! Wake up honey, I love you, but sometimes...seriously. I've seen you two together, the only reason you two get on each others nerves so easily, is because you like each other." Ria said rolling her eyes, annoyed with Layla's ignorance.

Layla sputtered out a laugh, "I can't stand him! And he can't stand me either! I don't know what you're smoking Ria, but please...stop. It's starting to effect your brain functions. " Layla walked over to the fridge and pulled out a water bottle and chugged almost the whole bottle before turning back to Ria, who stood there shaking her head at Layla.

"Whatever...but you know I'm right. I just hope there's a tape of what happens between the two of you when you finally jump him. That is going to be one hell of a sex tape!" Ria said grinning.

Layla choked on her water. Which only made Ria burst into a fit of laughter.


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Comments:

wow, im already hooked :) cant wait for more!! the ONLY problem i saw was "The blonde bimbo giggled as she put her hand on his arm, forcing him to look away from me."
just a typo im sure since the rest of the story is third person
let me know when you update please! :)

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Lmao..man I thought I caught all of those..haha..thanks for pointing that out to me..guess I'll have to check a bit more thoroughly..lol..

Please Update! This is REALLY good! Like BlackPointe....i'm hooked. =) keep me posted.

+Hecate+

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol..thanks! I don't think I've heard of BlackPointe, but I'm assuming it's a compliment to be compared to it..haha..:D

BlackPointe is the other person who commented. =D she said she was hooked as well.....Please update when ever it is possible for you! Keep me posted!

+Hecate+

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha..yeah I figured that out like...five minutes after I posted that reply..haha...I felt really dumb..lmao..

hehe Im hooked too lol, update soon please!

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha..k

:D gud.i thnk iam going 2 like this.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

haha...thanks!

ppppooooosssssstttttttt

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, I'm busy right now, but I'll probably post sometime later tonight! Sorry for the delay!

Update....please :( You didn't stop did you? O.O

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

No I didn't, I was going to update yesterday, but after I had typed up the entire next post, my computer freaked out for some reason, and I didn't have time to retype it. I'll try and post in the next couple of days though.

lol...loved the line about walking in between them and having an orgasm....

Posted: Nov 9, 2008

Author Comment:

haha..thanks.. I thought it was funny too...



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