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Bloody Red Kiss chapter 3: Goodbye!

Novel By: Bachi
Fantasy


Bachi's adventure is just starting! And her questions are yet to end!
chap 1 pic:Bachi
chap 2 pic:Bachi waking up in Yuki's mansion
chap 3 pic:Yuki View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jan 5, 2008    Reads: 81    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


"V-vampire! Impossibul! Th-this can't be real!", Bachi yelled, her neck was throbing more than her head.

 "O', It's very possibul. You did just talk to Yuki after all!", said Margret.

 Bachi looked at Margret, she forgot someone else was in the room.So many questione raced through her mind. Did Yuki bite me? Are the rumors about vampires true? Was I turned into a vampire? Do other magical creatures exist? For some reason Bachi couldn't ask these questions.

 "Margret are you a vampire?"

 "No.....I'm a Monto"

 "Monto?"

 "Monto are people with mostly human blood but some vampire blood in there vains. They serve true blood and half blooded vampires."

 "What are true blooded vampires? And do Monto have any special powers?"

 "Stop Bachi! Monto are looked down on by other vampires and are treated like servants! Like we have to serve them!"

 Bachi was quiet."Sorry if I offended you."

 "O', you don't have to apolagize. Now get up and change into these cloths. You can't go down covered in blood.",Margret said giving Bachi a white dress that went down to her knees, had thin straps, and was covered in lace. "Why you look like an angel!", Margret said after Bachi put on the dress. "Now you gotta go eat, I'm sure you're hungry. Then Master Yuki wishes to speak with you."

 Yuki.That name made her heart stop."I'm not very hungry Margret",this made Margret give Bachi a look as if to say 'You were almost killed and lost alota blood, how can you not be hungry?!'

 "O', ok then Bachi", Margret then lead Bachi down endless stair cases and hallways. With every step Bachi's stomach curled into a new knot.Finally they reached a large double door entrance. "O', well time for me to go, Master Yuki said to get you back onto your feet and then leave imidiatly. So goodbye Bachi!"

 "What... O' wait Margret! Goodb...", she was gone, "Goodbye Margret, Goodbye." Bachi said as she opened the doors in front of her. "Goodbye!" 

 


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Comments:

Too short, I'm sad. Nice so far though.

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

what happens next

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

Author Comment:

well the action part comes in later, but Bachi finds out y Oujou attacked her



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