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Clouds Above Chapter 1:Kumo

Novel By: Bachi
Fantasy


No one cares that I cry
No one cares if I die.
-Kumo

Kumo is in her second human life and has fallen in love, now she must join DarK Angels to stay with her true love, but can she kill Ashi, her brother, before he kills her or Kokoro? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jan 5, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


 Hello, I am Kumo. I am 183 years old. I only look 15. I was sent to Earth for commiting treson against the hevans. I did what I know was right. Forgive me, you see, I am a fallen angel. I still battle demons which adds thousands of years to my sentance on Earth. I do not care. I was once a Gardian Angel. The boy I guarded was ment to die one day. I had guarded many before him but he was different. I fell in love with him. I saved his life and gave him the ability to see angels. His life was enlongated by many years. His last name was Omoi. He has past away already. He has a son named Kokoro. He is 17 years old. Kokoro has inherited the ability to see angels as well as the wings of fallen angels. I am secretly guarding him. I am afraid I fell in love with him as well. He can never see me because he will see my wings that disappeared long ago. My only chance to be with Kokoro is to join the DarK Angels, fallen angels rebeling against the angels in hevan. It is the only way to destroy the contract in Hevan that says if a human sees a fallen angel's wings that human will be removed from the FA's life forever. I cannot allow Kokoro to be taken out of my life like his father was. I must kill Ashi, my angel brother who reported my treson against hevan. I must kill Ashi, guard Kokoro, and defeat the hevans. I am Kumo.


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Comments:

it looks good

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

Kathy
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I want more! I want more! lol ... Keep up your good work!!!

Posted: Aug 16, 2008



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