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Journey to Kalroh

Novel By: blu227
Fantasy


This story is about this monster i made up that iam now scared of. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Nov 12, 2008    Reads: 14    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


"Rose, i want you to keep this necklace. It is special. I wouldn't give any 4 year old a special necklace like this."

"ok grandma..."

Grandma took the necklace off herself and put it on Rose.

Roses' grandma died that night.

Part 1

10 years later...

There it is. Its slim teenage body hunched over. Its black poisoness spikes all the way down his back. It turns around. Its gils wiggle. It looks weird without any eyes or nose. I gasp. It hears me.

I start to run and he keeps tripping over his big feet. I dive into a trash bin. I know he is right next to me. Heavy breathing...

There is a hole in the bin where i can see out. I know he is next to me, but i cant see him. Only the venom, dripping from his mouth onto the hard cement ground. The purple goo swishes around on the cement.

From afar i hear a high pitched screech. Another beast calling it. The exphora beast replies. I cover my ears. It runs off to the hills. Bounding. I hear it crash into several bins and carts, holding vegetbles and fruits.

It took my necklace... The special one.  I didn't want to come out of the bin. But i did.

Mr. Fischer the baker wanted me to get back to work.  " Rose! Hurry up! Bread doesn't bake itself!"

 

Dear Andy,

I'm running away, but my parents don't know yet. Please don't tell them.

After I get my necklace back, I still won't go home. They will be all annoyed and then they will go into

lock down mode. Meaning: They will not let me have friends over, they will make me come home early etc.

I may be coming to your town once i get my necklace back... If i get it back.

I warn you, the exphora beasts may invade your home. They invaded mine.

 

Thats all for now,

              Rose

Kreldon 8994 frelda street

That night i ran away to get my necklace back.

 

Part 2

The warning bell goes off. People are screaming and running. I start running into my street, Frelda street.

I see them, the beasts! The black spikes make them stick out.

Small black dots, running down that hill to the valley. I'm talking about the Exphora beasts running as fast as cheetahs! Ok... not that fast because they kept on falling over their big feet! I'm serious! Big as fridges! Ok... not that big.Thank god, because that gave me loads more time to get inside! Ok... Not that much. About 10 seconds more. I bolted inside.

 

The postman darted in and tried to stop really suddenly that he couldn't stop! He crashed into the table and got a bruise that was so big! Nearly the size of a toster! OK.. NOT that big. But big, alright? He handed me a letter. It was from Rose. My friend from Dramold.

I read her letter.

"Andy!"

I hear. It was mums voice! I run outside to see my mum on the ground... Then I scribble a quick letter.

I drop the letter on the ground.

I look next to me to see a girl and a beast coming towards us about 1/2 a kilometre away. She was about 5. She was crying. I took her hand and ran towards a secret passage which lead to Kalroh, a city with great walls and great security. You need a code to get into the tunnel. Its super hard. Well... Not Exactly that hard... A tear dripped down my cheek but i kept on running.

Part 3

 She'll be coming round the mountain when she comes,  She'll be coming round the mountain when she comes, She'll be coming round the mountain, coming round the mountain, She'll be coming round the mountain when she comes... I stop walking. I see the beasts. So I am catching up to them. As soon as i reach them. I will get my necklace back.

Kreldon? The city of Kreldon looked a wreck. I run over and up Frelda street and scuttle up to Andys' house. He's not there. No surprise. But there is a letter on the ground.

Rose

I am writing this in a hurry.

The exphora beasts came and we had to flee Kreldon. I am heading to Kalroh.

I hope to see you in the near future.

Andy

Part 4

Rose approached Kalroh to see Andy at the gates. He jumped up and down and waved his hands. Rose waved back. Where were the beasts. The Kalroh gate was big and open. It looked welcoming for Rose. Rose heared running feet. The beasts were following her to Kalroh. She ran into Kalroh. Andy and other men tried to close the gates. The beast got in. There was only one. Several guards took him out. The beast lay on the ground. It had Roses necklace. After that experiance. Rose missed her family and decided to go home. Andy had decided to stay at Kalroh, he had made friends with one of the guards. Andy and Rose held hands. "Bye Andy"... "Bye Rose"...

They hugged and Rose gave Andy a litle peck on the cheek. Andy promised to keep in touch.

Rose headed out the gates. She heared rustling in the bushes...

An exphora beast lashed out at her...

She didn't feel a thing. She was ok! The necklace made a forcefield around her.

She skipped merrily home.

 She'll be coming round the mountain when she comes,  She'll be coming round the mountain when she comes, She'll be coming round the mountain, coming round the mountain, She'll be coming round the mountain when she comes...

In her heart, Rose knew there was something special about Grandmas' necklace.

 

 


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Comments:

this story is kinda cheesey

Posted: Nov 20, 2008

hi! kim. grandma's necklace is magical and protects rose from the beasts. i like andy's character too. what's next. this is interesting. lol. ;-)

Posted: Nov 22, 2008


Heheh! Update soon, then tell me! I like this story!! Can't wait to find out what's next!!

~Ying

Posted: Nov 26, 2008



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