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Everchanging Eyes

Novel By: BreakingDawn
Fantasy


Jalyn Marie Reign is a girl with no future. Her father’s in prison with a life sentence, her mother’s a hooked alcoholic; and her sister ran away from home three years earlier; and was found dead two days after in the woods; said to have been attacked and eaten by some kind of deranged bear. Jalyn’s failing school, and has no one to go two but three close friends. The teenage runaway thinks her life is over; it couldn’t possibly get any worse….

Oh how she was wrong.

Saved by silver eyes, she finds herself getting deeper and deeper into something she had no control over entering.
The mythical world.
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'Everchanging Eyes' is a novel written in 4 different P.O.V's... (Jalyn and her three friends) giving you a better view of each important charater.

The other novels include:
'Silvering Eyes' (Chris)
'Crimson Eyes' (Kyran)
'Violet Eyes' (Searona)

Be sure to check out each individual story!
View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Submitted: Oct 5, 2008    Reads: 140    Comments: 8    Likes: 2   


Chapter 1: 'Like a Predator...'

“No!” I screamed, my broken voice echoing on the walls and into my mother’s room were she stood glaring at me through narrowed eyes.

“Fine Jalyn!... But you know what happened to your sister when--!” She screamed at me, sending me yet another painful jab; but I was already out the door; running as fast as I could away from the house. I didn’t know where I was going, or what I was doing… but none of that mattered.

I was leaving.

I smiled through the tears as I ran like a mad women through the narrow streets of a neighborhood I hoped I’d never see again.

It was the final straw, the last time I could take it; I was finished with her.

It’s not like it was unusual; a seventeen year old runaway…

Of course… usually the next thing you heard about them was either that they had committed some kind of horrible crime, or died.

But on a positive note…

The next sound I heard somehow wasn’t even a shock to me. Why not? Of course it would be my luck to get run over by a U.PS. truck the moment I ran away from home… WHY not?!

My eyes peeled wide as I turned around; my mouth gaping while a huge truck honked its horn over and over again; the headlights flashing in my eyes; disorienting me.

Reality struck not a moment to soon. I sent my entire frame flying to the woods; trying to avoid death… while it stalked me like an angry predator.

I was it’s prey… and I kept getting away.

I hit the ground with a thud and I could almost hear the ribs cracking. Gasping in pain; I pushed my arm down onto the hard surface.

“Perfect.” I breathed; staggering. Instead of landing ‘gracefully’ on the grass beside the road. I had landed in the other lane… on the ROAD; nearly avoided the oncoming truck.

To tired, to stressed; I laid my head back onto the cold pavement. Not even bothered by the fact that I was laying in the middle of the road at night.

I didn’t care at this point.

It didn’t matter.

I closed my eyes; breathing in the scent of burning wood. Winter had just begun, the cold, crisp air nipping at my skin… while I waited for my breathing to slow; for the adrenaline to calm.

It didn’t.

I sat up slowly, taking in my surroundings like a new creature. I was prey; and I was more careful now.

I stood up; gasping in pain when my sides reacted like stabbing knives; cutting into my chest.

Yep… broken ribs.

Groaning; I limped into the forest… yearning to lay down. I didn’t care that it was dark, that I was in the woods alone, that there could be wolves or something in the woods right now; I was too tired.

“…Or something.” A low voice murmured quietly into my ear. The shock and fear that voice sent through me was unimaginable, unexplainable. I, myself couldn’t even comprehend what I was feeling in that moment. My eyes peeled wide; while a shiver ran silently down my spine.

“What are you doing out here so late at night?” The voice asked; feigning sympathy.

“Who are you…?” I asked, my voice shacking; while my teeth rattled together. I strange, unnatural breeze began blowing through the forest …
One time,
Two times,
Three times,
Four times,
Five times,
Six times,
Seven times,
Eight times…

It continued on and on until I finally stopped counting around twelve times.

My breathing sped while I waiting for an answer.
I didn’t get one.

Slowly, I turned around, not wanting to catch whoever it was by surprise. I’d been under attack enough times to realize when you’re caught, you don’t surprise you captors unless you’re absolutely positive you can escape by doing so.

“I wouldn’t do that..” A voice cautioned me; a clear smirk in his voice when I was almost halfway around.

I froze as it’s hot breath blew down my neck.

Yes. It’s.


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K.V.M... WAZ HERE

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Wow! I loved it =)

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Author Comment:

SWEET! Thx 4 checking it out! I'll have more chappy's ssoooonn! : D

i love it tell me when you post plez

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Author Comment:

kk.. and the title is going to be different..
Soon to be 'Everchanging Eyes'

U NEVER SAID THERE WERE 4 POV'S THAYS THE MOST IMPORTANT PART!!!!!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

WELL DUR!!! I just havn't done it yet stupid! : P

lol.
Wow,
Random Commenting... TEHEEE!
RANDOM LAUGHTER!!!!

~Sarah Rain // BreakingDawn

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

wow that was sooo good. i cant wait for the next chpter. i got grounded so i couldnt come on sorry!!!!!!

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.. SOOOOooOOO sad!!! U must NOT be grounded! : O

Wow, you never cease to catch my interest. I always love your work. Keep up the great work and update soon!♥

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

YAH!!! lol, I'll let cha know when i have more up. Thx girlly!

Luv ya,
Sarah Rain

NFW! I LOVE THIS! On to the next chapter! (PS:NFW stands for No Fucking Way)

Posted: Oct 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ahh.. thx for the clarifacation!
lol. Glad yah liked it! Thx for checking it out!

L8ER!
~Sarah Marie Rain // BreakingDawn



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