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City Of fate (Real one)

Novel By: Chumb
Fantasy


Lacey has the bestest handsomest best friend in the world called Seth, but when Seth decides to tell Lacey his darkest secret how will she react. Will Lacey risk everything to help out him out View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6

Submitted: Jul 1, 2008    Reads: 194    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


Wake up.’

“No I wont let myself” I growled,

‘It’s almost ten O’clock’

“Lacey we were just…” before Claire could finish Seth interrupted “..talking, um about things.” By the look on his face it didn’t seem like things it felt like everything. “Seth what is it?” I growled “Shut up Lacey don’t yell at him like that, well Seth are you going to tell her” Claire murmured Oh no I thought Claire an Seth together, “No, you can’t how could you…” I broke in tears it should be Lacey and Seth, not Lacey’s little sister and Lacey’s best friend. “Lacey look at me why are you crying?” Seth said, “I’m not crying, there’s just something in my eye,” I mumbled.

“Well haven’t we heard that before” Claire said under her breath. “Claire do something useful and go clean your room” I sighed.

“Lacey if your not cool with it, or if you have a problem you can tell me” his smile made my heart sink, his eyes that changed colours from green to hazel to grey to silver andhis beautiful black hair, looking at Seth made me feel like the luckiest girl in the world but i didn't feel lucky with him being with Calire.‘Tell him you have a problem, tell him to break up with her tell him you love him’ the voice urged

“No, Seth if she’s what makes you happy then I don’t have a problem just answer this one question how long, I mean How long since you two were together”'two, they’ve been going onfor two weeks’

“Never mind don’t answer that question, I already know the answer, Seth I got to go do some thing’s, I think right now’s not a good time please leave” The sweat in my hands were irritating as I could feel more and more sweat rush into my hands. “I’m sorry Lacey but..” I put my finger on his lips before he could finish “don’t Seth, just go” I complained, tears quickly ran down my cheeks, I turned to run but Seth quickly grabbed my hand.

“Let me go, Seth Hill you let me go NOW” I screamed. I tried so hard to break loose but Seth’s grip was to strong. “Seth your hurting my arm, please let me go” I whispered the grip disappeared and I was loose I ran upstairs not looking back at Seth once, I ran straight to my room ’I’m sorry’ the voice whispered in a cool-calm voice “Don’t say sorry it’s not your fault” “who’s fault is it exactly?”

“No ones I’m just upset.” I felt very uneasy I needed to talk to someone, but it was Seth who I always talked to. “humph” I grumbled “Seth’s not my only BFF, okay he is but I do have BF’s” I whispered ’BF’s?’ the voice sounded puzzled “Best friends” ’Oh I thought you meant Boy friends’ I was quiet for a moment thinking about what I had done “No I really think I should call Seth and apologise I was such a jerk” I got my cell phone out and dialled Seth’s number so fast my heart raced it, two rings was all it took for someone to pick up “Hello” My heart sank it wasn’t Seth it was Lee, I felt glad to hear Lee’s voice I hadn’t heard from him or seen him in a while “Lee, hey it’s me Lacey can I talk to Seth please” I murmured he was quiet for a moment “sure” he sighed.

“Hey Lacey look I’m so sorry but” he stopped for a second “can I come over I need to tell you something important” before I could answer the phone line was dead, it only took 10 minutes for Seth to get here in his Mercedes bends, “look Lacey I have something very important to tell you, please understand this, don’t freak please Lacey, whatever you do don’t Scream here it goes I’m a… Half werewolf half shape-shifter.”

I sighed with a heavy heart.It was my annoying inner-voice telling me to wake up. “Put a sock in it” I grumbled. ’Seth’s here and Claire’s getting comfortable.’ My eyes were wide open at the sound of his name, I got up and got dressed, As I was to ran down stairs I whispered Thank you. I got down stairs to find Claire curled in Seth’s arms “aren’t you two getting cosy” I mumbled, that should be me curled in Seth’s arms I thought.


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GRRRR.

Booksie why do you keep messing up my storys okay, now listen to really read it properly

1.After reading ‘It’s almost ten O’clock’ you read: It was my annoying inner-voice telling me to wake up. “Put a sock in it” I grumbled. ’Seth’s here and Claire’s getting comfortable.’ My eyes were wide open at the sound of his name, I got up and got dressed, As I was to ran down stairs I whispered Thank you. I got down stairs to find Claire curled in Seth’s arms “aren’t you two getting cosy” I mumbled, that should be me curled in Seth’s arms I thought.

2.after reading 'two, they’ve been going on for two weeks’ you read: I sighed with a heavy heart

okay, that's how it is... =]]
if you have questions i'll answer


Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Very cool Chumb one.
So sad how booksie does this to you. Fill me in with another chapter soon, I'm dying here!
*+*Peace*+*

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

hha,!!

okeyy, chapter two out 4/07/08 =]]

you need to seperate more paragraphs and use more grammer. I'm not good with grammer either, but you should deffinently try a little harder.

now, about the plot, it sounds incredile. it interests me. I hope you continue this.

L ♥

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

hha,!!
i was in a bit of a rush,
so yeha i'll look on that next time
thanxs for reading =]]

~Chumb bum~

Very interesting, and nice storyline.. can't wait to read more

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanxx`ss...

~Chumb bum~

Okay!! Booksie doez dat 2 me 2. Like da story so far. Can ya PLEASE tell me when u make ch.2?

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

sure thing...
I'm glad you like it,
Thanks for reading =]]
Chapter 2 out 06/07/08


~Chumb bum~

Wow, I Like It Alot. You Should Keep Writing. I Know This Maybe Too Much To Ask, But I Was Wondering, If You Could Check Out Some Of My Writing? Keep Me On The Update!

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank'ss

=]]

yup i'll check them out now

~Chumb bum~

I really like your plot.
But I agree with xxemoxbfsxx about the grammar.
But other than that.
Keep me updated?
:]

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay, will do.

Thanks for reading

~Chumb bum~

i agree with xxemoxbfsxx, you should work on the grammar. sumtimes i have that problem too. but other than that, its a good story. keep writing and don't ever stop :) you're really good.

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank's
=]]

~Chum bum~

Umm....well...I like it so far...but it was kind of hard to read. Each time someone new talks, you should put an enter between them. It would be a lot easier to read, because right now it's just kind of jumbled together. Other than that, it's pretty good. ~Lauren

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank's (=
glad ya liked it.


LOVE ♥



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