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Twisted Reality

Novel By: DarkFairy8907
Fantasy


Finally what you have been waiting for the sequeal to Unwanted Destiny. Twist of Fate continues the lives of Hayden and Nerisella. There's a new member to the family and evil is brewing. What is going to happen, I guess you'll have to read to find out. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Mar 26, 2008    Reads: 418    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


Deep within the confines of the Underworld a shadowy figure lurks through the endless caverns and tunnels; searching for their master. The atmosphere gradually becomes hotter and hotter.

“I must be getting closer.”

Further the being traveled into the fiery furnace. Cloaked in a deep violet hooded robe, the Sorceress Monica approached one of the Underworld pits. Every pit around bubbled and spit fiery, molten earth rock. But this pit was seemly different. It spewed molten earth, but it also had a black substance mixing throughout it. This substance was what Monica had been searching for. She raised her hood revealing an aged woman. From beneath her robe she withdrew a book. She stroked her hand across it’s cover feeling the engraved lines and curves of letters. These letters made up a language long forgotten by man, only surviving by the hands of black magic. She opened the book, carefully turning the fragile aging parchment. Turning to her page she looked over the title of the spell. “Diavol Reincarnare.” Raising her hand over the pit she recited the spell.

“A se ridica din nou pierdut suflet. O data din nou a putea voi stapanire aceste lume.”

The black substance separated itself from the pit. It rose into the air and gently settled onto the ground, the slick black substance began to mold and shape itself into a familiar form. It had solified presenting the form of a person in a long black hooded robe who had long silver hair, pale skin and blazing red eyes.

“Welcome back to the world of the living Xanamros.”

Xanamros turned toward Monica and sneered a wicked smile. “Yes it is. Now then, there is work to be done.”

Chapter 1: Reality

Nerisella awoke to Hayden shaking her.

“Nerisella wake up it’s a dream, it’s a dream.”

Nerisella sat upright in bed, soaked in cold sweat. Hayden sat next to her on the bed, she reached over and braced him tightly, shaking and trembling.

“It was just a dream Nerisella.” He brushed his hand across her back soothingly, then pulled her away and kissed her upon her forehead.

“I know it was, but this one I never had before. It was my Aunt Monica and she brought Xanamros back to life. When he looked at her it seemed like he was staring past her and right into my mind. But your right, let’s get back to sleep.”

Nerisella settled herself back down as Hayden went around to his side and laid down. He moved closer to her and draped his arm over her. She relaxed and let her mind drift off to sleep.

The sound of metal meeting metal filled the morning air. Hayden stepped back avoiding Nerisella’s lance. She was improving greatly. But the previous night’s activities began to take its toll in her accuracy. She blocked his lance and took a step back, raising her lance. She left herself wide open for a hit and Hayden saw his chance. Thrusting his lance forward he caught Nerisella off guard and touched the tip of his lance to her suit.

“Touché’ my lady.” Hayden stood back and bowed humbly.

Nerisella removed her face guard and let her sandy, golden locks down from their uplifted position. “You just got lucky. If I wasn’t so tired I would have won this round. Now we’re tied, feel like one more round.”

About to answer Hayden was interrupted by a little voice.

“Daddy! Mommy!”

Running across the green lush castle grounds came a little brown curly haired, green-eyed boy. The five year old pride and joy of Hayden and Nerisella.

“What are you doing out here Tameron,” said Nerisella. To think just six years ago her life was in total chaos from Xanamros. Since then she had gotten married to the man of her dreams and had a blessed baby boy.

Hayden reached down and lifted Tameron onto his shoulders. “Tameron your mother’s right. Aren’t you suppose to be taking your nap?”

“I was Daddy,” remarked Tameron as he swung from his father’s hands. “I had this amazing dream and just had to tell you ‘bout it!”

Nerisella giggled at her beaming son. “Alright Tameron tell us, what was your dream.”

Tameron leaped to the ground and began spinning his tale.

“I was playing outside, a rabbit hopped by so I began to ‘ase it. I ‘ollowed it around the castle, but when it went into the garden it wasn’ the garden any’ore.”

Nerisella raised a brow and glanced toward Hayden who resembled her expression in every way. Was this just a dream Tameron was telling or more. “What do you mean Tameron?”

“Mommy the garden had huge twees with tees green things all over them. I could no find the rabbit, but I hear this nice lady’s voice. It say Tameron come here I have somesing for you. It sounded lot like you Mommy. So I looked for the voice, I ‘ollowed it to a cave. I no liked the cave it was dark and scary looking. But the lady’s voice was inside so I went in. The cave was really warm inside and some red stuff was coming out of the gwound. It was hot so I no touch it. Then I saw the lady with the nice voice. She pointed at me and told me to come to her. I went over to the lady and asked her ‘You said you have somesing for me yes?’ She said yes and told me to turn around. When I did there was a tall man wearing a robe. He waised his hand over me and made me look him in the eyes. His eyes were really red. He then told me somesing, ‘You will obey my every command and become my servant for eternity.’ Then I woke up.”

Tameron was breathing heavily trying to catch his breath from his seemly endless tale. Spinning arms spread out wide he made his way back to the castle.

Nerisella walked up to Hayden putting her arm around his waist and raised her other hand to his chest. She held him close. “Hayden that didn’t sound like a dream.”

“I know, he just described Xanamros to us. Maybe your dream wasn’t a dream either?” He placed one hand on her shoulder the other across her hand placed on his chest. They held each other tightly as they watched their son play with a castle guard.


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Comments:

OMJJ!!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeeease keep writing. Youre so amazing!!!!!


Please write more????

Posted: Mar 26, 2008

Author Comment:

OMGJJ, I'm glad you liked it.

I'm working on it, I'm working on it, lol. I'll start on it tonight okay :) I'm in a really chipper mood.

~DarkFairy~

Gendral Sulamani
(not registered user)

wow-this is amazing-ur writings r soo mysterious!
^^

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow, thanks, I'm glad I give a mysterious feel to my writing. I don't try to, but I guess I come back it naturally when writing.

~DarkFairy~

Hey, I love it. Awesome start already, looks like you took my idea of the kid getting harassed by Xanmaros, lol, I'd completely forgotten that you mentioned putting a child in the story, its genius. Your story seems to have order, and yet still unpredictable. My story is pure chaos, But I live in chaos. I love how you can keep a story completely unpredictable, give it such deep meaning and quality, perfect dialogue. I happy they got married, it was evident they loved each other and the fact they got married shows that even more. So I guess her son is inheriting the curse eh? poor kid, I wonder what's going to happen, I can't wait to read more.

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm kinda stuck with how I'm starting the second chapter, it sounds so blah. But I do have ideas written down, don't worry.

I'll probably pick up the sequeal after I finish the revised Unwanted Destiny.

I'm not telling you where it's going, but believe it or not I already have the ending and an epilogue planned out! But yes I did use your idea, one because I couldn't think of anything else, two it helped motivated me into getting some ideas. Thank you so much Wobster, you don't even realize how much you've played a part in this yet.

~DarkFairy~

Tor Steinsland
(not registered user)

Nice first chapter. I got the characters quickly, and I understood that a lot of bad things have happened in the past, and the parents fear that it might happen again, and involve their son.

A lot to build on here DarkFairy.

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, check out Unwantd Destiny it's the first book to the series.

I'm working on finishing Unwanted Destiny while organizing my thoughts on the chapters after this one, thanks again.

~DarkFairy~

First Nerisella and now her son??? Not the poor child...

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes her son, I'm still working out my plot, but it's coming along, thanks for reading.

~DarkFairy~

You got a grip on fantasy. keep writing.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, partially due to that's what I love to read!

~DarkFairy~

Lol, that last comment inspired me to write this comment for fun, don't get a grip on reality, fantasy is way better than reality, I know I've said this countless times, but your so superb in everything you do and I am going insane with curiosity in thinking how your going to portay me, lol, its gonna be awesome. I know I portray small aspects of myself in each character, but still, its gonna be cooler than elvis.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, yep, you'll definitely be cooler than elvis. I know some people already(mostly girls) are in love with the description I have for your character :D

~DarkFairy~

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....lol yeah im a fast reader ^^ lol keep writing!!! your an amazing writer

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you love it, this is actually the second to the other novel. So you can see how I've actually improved between the two.

~DarkFairy~

superb? ah but what an understatement! ~tilts his head~ alright. I might be slightly bias on where I stand with you but what the hell ^_^

Brilliant as always, and a huge leap and bound with your descriptions, the conversations are very much more fluid in the way they run. ~grins~ well done Dark, heading onwards to chapter 2 of this invigorating tale.

Your Hawk ^^

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, kinda caught you off guard on how much I've improved ^^ I'm glad you think it's still brillant as alwasy ~grins~

~DarkFairy~



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