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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 5, 2007    Reads: 236    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   


 

CHAPTER 11

 

Sage finally climbed into bed feeling drained.  She talked with Saira but the girl wouldn't say anything.  Sage is convinced Vappu has something to do with Saira's behavior.  She's like a puppy who has been kicked over and over again.  Terrified the one moment and then herself the next.  She's only ten years old, for goodness sake! What problems could she have except from their father and mother's passing.

 

But Saira is a strong elf.  She talked to Sage about their parents.  That wasn't the problem.  Sage was sure of it.

 

She turned around and tried to sleep. 

 

 

 

Sage opened one eye and wondered if she was dreaming. 

 

She listened carefully.  No, there it was. 

 

A distant sound.  She couldn't quite make out what it was.  She sat up and listened again for a few minutes.

 

The sound came closer and closer.  It sounded like thousands of drums nearing the city.  Sage could hear her heart beat in her ears.

 

This is not good.  Not good at all.

 

She got up and ran to the window.  In the distance she could make out what seemed like a sea of flames.  The drums kept coming closer and beating louder.

 

Sage's door burst open and a frightened Saira appeared.

 

"Sage, whats going on?  Can you see it? Can you hear it?  What is it?" she whispered.

 

"Hush now Saira! I'm trying to listen."

 

What sounded like drums, Sage now identified as footsteps.  Thousands of marching feet.

 

Oh no!  Sage thought  This is it. The end.

Once again her door burst open and this time the barely clothed Rioghnan appeared.

 

"My Lady, I'm sorry to enter your chambers unannounced but I think we are under attack!"

 

"I realize that, Rioghnan.  Have you alerted the Olivier?" Sage couldn't keep her eyes off his washboard stomach.

 

"I have, my Lady but I've come to take you and Lady Saira with me.  You will be safe."

 

"I don't doubt that for a second, Rioghnan." I'm flirting with him? Are you insane?  Sage thought.

 

"Come, My Lady." Rioghnan urged.

 

"But I'm not dressed, Rioghnan"

 

"How could I have not noticed" he muttered under his breath. "My lady, there is no time. Just put on a coat and let us go!" he said more clearly.

 

Sage grabbed a coat from her chair, caught Saira by the arm and ran out the room after Rioghnan.

 

The army kept coming closer. 

 

The threat more real.

 

Vappu stood in her room, looking out the window towards the army.

 

She smiled.


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Comments:

O_O omg!!!!!!!!!! =3

Posted: Sep 6, 2007

Author Comment:

I guess you like it?

Thank you for reading and comment!

OMG!!!
Army's coming!!
RUN!!
DARK ELVES, AHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Rioghnan sounds dreamy, I hope they fall in love, and ohhhhh.... O_O .... Barely clothed in the princesses room.... WOAH!!!
I LOVE IT!!

FORTY-TWO STARS!!!

Posted: Sep 6, 2007

Author Comment:

LOL! I hope its still interessting?
Thank you for my forty-two stars!
I'm still working on next chapter - writers block - hehehe

Phenomenal chapter to a masterpiece novel, the description of how she heard the army was particularly well done. It's not everyday one gets attacked by an army so its normal to be a little confused. And I adore how you added a comical/romance withing all this intensity, Sage still flirting with the commander despite the eve of possible doom for all inhabitants within the castle, I love it. You are an artist, there's no better way to put it!

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

The point was for Sage to feel out of control - the attack, the commander, her sister.

thank you for your wonderful comments!

sliver
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something tells me that the step mother had something to do with the attack. i'm starting to see why saga likes Rioghnan he's funny even when he doesn't relise it he is so caring.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

GASP
vappu!! GRRRR!!!!
she makes me so mad
but really, the story is phenomenal. just vappu... she's... grrrr...

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice! Yes Vappu is EVIL.

OH MY GOSH!!

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAHA! Enjoy!

MORE! MORE!

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

THanx

She's flirting with him? Is she insane?

I wonder why the commander of the army is helping Sage escape instead of, I dunno, commanding the army in defense of the city. I'm sure he could have sent his most trusted lieutenants to see the royal family to safety.

How's it going to look if Vappu stays in the palace (unless Rioghnan is rescuing the queen, too) while Sage runs away with the commander of the army?

I guess I'll have to read more to find out!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comment and input.

ewokey
(not registered user)

3 'words" to say; Perfect, Omg, 10/10 (there is really nothing else to say

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww sweet thank you

Let me at em, let me at em. I'll fight till the end against Vappu and her evil army. ROAR

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

like I said...I should include you in the story haha

Ah, warfare, how intricate and bloody it is...

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

We'll get to that



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