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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 10, 2007    Reads: 179    Comments: 10    Likes: 5   


 

CHAPTER 12

 

Sacheverell kissed Milne on the head.

 

"Now, you sleep tight my Darling.  All will be well.  I'll be gone for a few weeks at the most. Mother will take care of you."

 

Sacheverell got up and walked towards his mother.

 

"Mother, has there been no improvement?" he asked

 

The wrinkled old woman shook her head of grey hair.  "No, my boy.  Everyday the same. I don't think she will improve."

 

"Mother! Don't be so negative.  Milne is strong.  She always has been.  She ruled Moulingsu Mountains by herself for years!"

 

"Yes, yes, I know. But sooner or later you have got to accept what is happening! You are ruler of Moulingshu now and you are no use to our people if you keep on doing this!" the old woman hissed.

 

"My wife is my first priority, Mother. You know that.  I've lost my daughter and I'm losing my wife."

 

"Oh don't you start speaking of that...that thing you call a daughter! It's your own fault.  I told you to never get involved with an elf. You brought shame on this family with your slapdash lifestyle. You ruined Milne's reputation as Queen."

 

"She agreed to marry, Mother. Nobody forced her. She knew about Mishae.  She knew my daughter was an elf."

 

"I never could quite understand why your offspring looked like that elf-woman you had on call. No hint of dwarf in her at all."

 

"Mother, I will not allow this! Her name is Mishae.  Her mother was not "on call". We had a relationship and we made a mistake."

 

"Yeah, I know.  The child."

 

"We made a mistake by thinking it could work but not Mishae.  Mishae was no mistake."

 

"Face it. It's your fault Milne is like this.  Too much pressure from the dwarfs.  Too much pressure from you.  And when that child of yours vanished, she just...fell apart."

 

Sacheverell moved across the room to his mother.  Eyes blazing he said:

 

"Mother, you will not blame me for Milne's illness.  Don't you think? This hurts me. My daughter is gone. I have an elf prince in my protection.  I'm about to join him in battle.  I'm petrified."

 

With that, Sacheverell walked towards the door.  Just before leaving, he looked back at his sleeping wife.

 

I'm so sorry, Milne.  Please forgive me.


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Comments:

Wow! spectacular chapter on Sacheverell the dwarf king, you have done something incredible wether you know it or not. You have broken the boundaries of all fantasy stories, an elf and dwarf falling in love is superbly unique( in a good way). And I love how you show that even a mighty king, a king whom all dwarfs look up to has problems with his personal life, this is a remarkable chapter and I am honnored to be the first to comment upon it.

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

*FunnyBunny blushes yet again*

I didn't know how you would react on the dwarf and elf romance but thank you for liking it. Means so much to me!

i think this is amazing twist. woot woot! *reads on*

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hey hey!! thanx a lot! i'm glad u liked it. thanx for read & comment

sliver
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is saga his daughter? it seems so strange.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

This is not the conventional Fantasy. Elves and Dwarfs with children? Doesn't really happend but I don't care what the people think. This my story and I like writing about weird things. You'll just have to wait and see.

absolutely positively love it
=]

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice!

Superb chapter. I'm wondering who the elf he had the child with was, she seemed to sound very important. Oh I'm getting closer, hehe.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe indeed you are. Enjoy! Thanx again

What a cool twist.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

teehee...indeed

love this book wish the chapters werelonger but thereok theywaytheyare lol

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

lol - i dont want to babble on and on. thanks shining star

I think the two dwarf soldiers are by far the most interesting and deep characters in this story. Vappu is too one-dimensional while Sage hasn't really done anything except whine about how evil Vappu is. Your dwarfs, though, are complicated with their personal lives and little ambitions and desires.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

ewokey
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yet another unexpected twist! still awesome

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thank you

Dwarves and Elves... It's gonna take me a while to wrap my head around that. Excellently done all the same.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx a lot. Glad you liked it



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