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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 10, 2007    Reads: 181    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


 

CHAPTER 13

 

 

The following morning, Sacheverell and Takvor were reading and waiting. 

 

"We will follow the secret paths of Moulingsu.  Its faster.  Stay in formation. Be attentive. And for the love of Pete, Eachann, CALM DOWN!" Sacheverell shouted.

 

Eachann was not impressed. Not impressed at all.  He was just about shoved into formation. Did they consult with me? Nooooooo.  Just get into formation, Eachann.  Be alert, Eachann. They'll be bloody well alert when this dwarf-killing elf prince hacks their heads off!

"Right soldiers! March!" the commander-in-chief ordered.

 

Their deafening footsteps could be heard through out Moulingsu.

 

Thousands of dwarfs armed with hammers), lances and swords marched towards Ikriam.

 

Takvor has gained some strength in the past few days but he still tired quickly.  He was determined not to let Sacheverell notice so he made conversation.

 

"Commander, how long have you lived here?"

 

"Twenty-three years.  I lived in Danisy when I was young."

 

"One of the guards mentioned a wife? I don't want to be nosy, but you knew my father and I know nothing about you."

 

Sacheverell walked along the dirt paths of the mountain.  Beautiful grass pastures and striking flowers everywhere.

 

Takvor, who also noticed this beauty softly said:

 

"Sacheverell?"

 

"Huh? Oh, forgive me. I was just thinking. Yes, I do have a wife. Milne. Queen Milne. Her father ruled Moulingsu before we got married.  After he died, Milne had to take the position as she was an only child."

 

"Children?"

 

"Yes, I had one daughter, Mishae but she was abducted when she was still a baby."

 

"Your wife must have been destroyed."

 

"No, no, not really.  You see, Milne wasn't Mishae's mother.  An Elf was."

 

Sacheverell told him everything. From Mishae's birth, her elf-mothers death and Milne's illness.

 

After a few moments of silence, Takvor tried to lift the tension and Sacheverell's foul mood.  Without thinking he asked:

 

"Sacheverell, is it true dwarves can't be above ground during the daylight or they'll turn to stone?"

 

"Son, do I look like a stone-dwarf to you? If you haven't noticed, we've been above ground for hours.  In the daylight." Sacheverell smiled.

 

 


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Comments:

Another job well done. I love Eachann, after all this time even if the king himself trusts the elf, Eachann still distrusts the elf. I just love it, and the fact that the King could discuss the sensitive subject of his relation with the elf shows he truly is courageous. And you add a splash of humour in the end, or what I perceived as humour for it is trolls I believe who cannot be in sunlight( according to the hobbit). You are just such a remarkable writer, I cannot wait for further chapters from your ingeneous cave of creativity.

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm not totally updated on the fantasy scene so thank you for the correction! Thank you once again for your stunning comments. I'll publish asap but I really need to go rummaging through my ingeneous cave of creativity as you put it!
Thank you!!!

LOVED IT!!
YAY
WHERE IS SAGE AND HER PRETTY BOY????
AHHH
DWARFS ARE FUNNY!!!!

FIFTY STARS!!!!

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Hey - I was beginning to wonder where you were!!
Sage and the Pretty boy (wwwwwhahahahahahhah) will entertain you asap. Dwarfs are funny, hey?
Thanky you for my FIFTY stars Ape!

I'm so into this story! I'll never speak to you ever again if ever stop writing. Its really amazing.

Posted: Sep 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Kittycat! I'll keep writing.

i, too, have a deep fondness for Eachann-- i think he may even be my favorite character. i wasn't entirely convinced, however, that the dwarf kind would open up so completely, and so quickly to a basic stranger. dwarves are supposed to be such strong, quiet, private beings.... still and all, i liked it, and esp. the humor. every story needs to lighten up once in a while.

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Eachann is quite a character. the story behind these dwarfs will make sense later on i promise. thanx for read & comment

i haven't heard that saying before. dwarfs turning into stone. but it sounds really cool. like... just the concept of that is interesting.
five stars
another brilliant chapter

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

"We've been above ground for hours. In daylight." That was funny.

Eachann is funny to, a comical and informative chapter.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! Eachann is funny. I love his character.

I think I love Eachann. Are dwarves always this funny?

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Eachann is so cool! I don't know actually but I wanted him to be this funny...afraid of everything.

loren
(not registered user)

is the prince really a drarf-killer? I can't remember you mentioning it... I think only Eachann thinks so...yet agai, i may be wrong..

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

No only Eachann thinks so. He's paranoid.



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