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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 14, 2007    Reads: 307    Comments: 10    Likes: 7   


 

CHAPTER 14

Sage followed Rioghnan through the dark passageways. Trying to keep her eyes off his particularly nice behind, she tried to figure out what to do.  She had to keep Saira safe.

 

"Wait!" Sage shouted and stopped "What about Vappu? We can't leave her here."

 

Rioghnan looked irritated and muttered something about why not let her rot her, but Sage couldn't make out what he said.

 

"You Highness, you and Lady Saira are my priority. I will send guards to find her. But I have to get you to safety at once!" Rioghnan practically ordered.

 

He led them to the basement where they kept all the artillery and body armour.  The Elf armed services were busy putting on their armour and gathering weapons.

 

"Donene, give me a sword for Lady Sage. And a dagger for Lady Saira."

 

"But Rioghnan, I have no intention of hurting anyone. I do not fight.  The only reason I took defence classes, was to please my father."

 

Rioghnan took Sage gently by the arm and walked a few feet away where they could have some privacy.  The moonlight shone through the top windows and onto Sage's face.  Rioghnan had to catch his breath. He has never seen anyone so stunning as Sage at that moment.  His eyes softened and he cupped her tiny face in his strong hand. He tipped her chin up so she had to look him in the eyes. 

 

Sage couldn't breath.  Her kingdom was on the verge of being destroyed and here she was with Rioghnan.  She had never felt so safe before.

 

"Sage" Rioghnan could hardly speak "I need you to listen to me.  Take the sword.  I will be with you the entire time.  I promise."

 

"But why do I need it then" Sage was still shocked by his boldness.

 

"Because I need to know if something happens to me, you can at least defend yourself." He simply answered.

 

"No, no, nothing will happen to you.  Nothing can happen to you.  I will not allow it.  I want you too m..." Sage shut her mouth the moment she realized what she was about to say.  It was inappropriate for the Crown Princess of Ikriam to have a relationship with her protector.  Her father would never approve. If he was alive.

 

Rioghnan frowned.  Could she possibly have feelings for me? he wondered.

 

The soldier moved closer to Sage and put his arm around her tiny waist.  Ever so gently he pulled her closer until her lips were against his chest.  Sage could feel his heart galloping like hundreds of horses.  Could it beat for me?

 

Once again he tipped her face towards him and slowly moved down so his lips could meet hers. Sage was feeling dizzy and there was a buzzing sound in her ears.  She had to put both her hands against Rioghnan's chest for support.  

 

"Sage!" Saira tugged at her sister's robe, unaware of what she just interrupted. "The noise is louder.  They are coming closer.  What is going to happen to us, Sis?" Saira cried.

 

Before Sage could answer, Rioghnan got on his knees and held Saira's hands in his.

 

"Lady Saira, we will make it. I will fight and die for you." Saira only cried more. Rioghnan wiped the silver tears from her soft cheeks and held her tight.

 

Rioghnan got up, softly touched Sage's face and turned around.  He walked to where the rest of the soldiers were and started putting on his armour.  He glanced back at Sage and saw her sitting with Saira on her lap.  She was looking at him.  Intently.

 

The moment their eyes met each other, Sage knew.

 

She knew she found her Prince.


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Comments:

OMG!!
Dont kill him Vappu or my dragon (The one in my head!)
Is going to eat you!!!!
EVIL VAPPU!!!
If Rioghnan dies, Vappu will get it..... :(

FIFTY-FIVE Stars!!! (I forgot the number I put last time! So it is ten stars higher than that K?!?!)

Posted: Sep 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Haha - you gave me fifty-five last time but thank you! I hope the novel is getting better. I really like chapter 14. Thank you for reading!

i've had to do some reading to catch up but i love this story. cant wait to see what happens next

Posted: Sep 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Hi! I thought you didn't like the story anymore. But thank you for reading and commenting. I'm gonna try and make every chapter from now on more interessting than the last. Hope you like it.

Hey funnybunny, I was unaware you had continued this amazing novel. This chapter is another work of art on your part, the chemistry between Sage and Rioghnan is very well done. I could feel the emotions coming out of the computer screen, but of course their kiss was disturbed by the sister. Are they truly going to get married? Or will her dear future prince die, or will she die? Anything is possible, I am going to read the rest right away.

Posted: Sep 19, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm a bit stuck now but i'm really working on this. I don't want this to be a predictable novel. Thank you x1000000 for still reading!

it kinda seems to easy to me. its like, if it was this easy for them to fall in love, why haven't they done it in the other i dunno.... however many years (10 or so?) that they've known each other? love is never this easy. but maybe i'm just cynical. it does make me warm and fuzzy though. it made me happy just to read it.

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Sage is royal and he's not. She always had feelings for him but never acted on them because her loyalty was with Ikriam and her family. the war brought them together. thax for read and comment

ahhh they were so close to a sweet kiss!
i love this story and i love your writing!!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice! I hope you enjoy the rest.

Darn little sisters, but it is always funny having something interrupt a first kiss. You pull the reader in then give them a slap in the face to draw the back to the seriousness of the situation.

I loved the chapter. Onto 15, on of you most popular chapters according to Booksie.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I used to be the little sister! haha always interrupting my big sister and her boyfriend.

Awww... So sweet (Rioghnan and Sage). Just forget the royal thingy and let them get married.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha You'll see *wink*

So romantic.

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Susan

awww a kissy how sweet though I wonder why would her father not aprove?

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Cause she is royalty and he's not. crap one

Methinks the author has a crush on her character...

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

you thinks wrong...



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