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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 28, 2007    Reads: 1695    Comments: 20    Likes: 10   


CHAPTER 16

 

Sage couldn’t keep her eyes of Rioghnan.  He looked so handsome in his uniform.  His defined muscles made her heart beat faster.

 

Rioghnan gave Sage and Saira daggers to protect themselves. 

 

“Don’t leave this room.  Do you hear me, Sage?” Rioghnan said.

 

Sage knew she couldn’t promise.  She was the Princess.  The rightful Queen of Irkiam.  There was no way they were fighting this battle without her.  She knew Rioghnan wouldn’t let her fight.  She didn’t want to but she had to lie to him.

 

“I’ll stay here.” She said, feeling rotten.

 

“Good.  Now don’t try and be a hero.  You’ll get killed.  And I need you alive.” Rioghnan said touching her cheek.

 

Sage’s body responded to his touch and put her arms around him.  Looking up, she invited him with her eyes to kiss her.  Rioghnan bent down and ever so softly pressed his lips against hers.

 

****

 

Vappu was escorted to Liskin’s tent just outside of Ikriam. 

 

“Vappu, my dear friend.  How have you been?  Thanks for inviting me!  I couldn’t wait to put my party hat on and destroy this…this filthy place.  Get rid of all the rats.”  Liskin said.

 

Vappu looked at him and tipped her head to one side “You have got to be kidding.  Party hat?  Aren’t you supposed to be the most dangerous Dark Elf in the whole country and here you are talking about party hats?” 

 

“Vappu, my dear.  Don’t mock me.  You know nothing!” the elf spat.

 

“Listen here Liskin.  I paid you and you work for me.  I told your little helpers earlier.  They seemed to have a problem answering to me.”

 

“I work for no one but myself. Remember that.”

 

Liskin turned around and walked to his commander.

 

“Now listen Dark Elves!” he shouted “We have waited a long time for this. Today! Today we destroy Ikriam!”

 

The army shouted.  It felt like the whole earth started shaking from their screams. 

 

Thousands of armed elves started walking towards Ikriam with one thought in their minds.

 

Destroy.

 

****

 

Takvor was walking as fast as he could.  He couldn’t shake the feeling that something was wrong.  Sage and Saira was in trouble.

 

And Ragnid.  His beloved Ragnid.  She saved his life.  She knew about Vappu.  She knew Vappu was trying to kill him.  He got sick and Ragnid tended to him.  She was giving him this mixture to drink.  He started forgetting things.  Important things.

 

It was too late when he realized what happened.  When he woke up in Sacheverell’s cell, he thought Ragnid tried to poison him.  He was wrong.  She helped him.  She tried to save is life.  Make him forget and start over again. 

 

Drastic measures but he knew she meant well.

 

“Hurry up Takvor.  I can see Ikriam’s tower” Sacheverell said.

 

Takvor looked up and saw it.  The great tower of Ikriam.  Made entirely of gold.  His father liked beautiful things. 

 

“Oh my! Oh my! Oh my!” Eachann started saying.

 

“Eachann, what is your problem now?” Sacheverell said sarcastically.

 

“L…l…Look!” and he pointed with a trembling finger towards the Castle.

 

Takvor looked and he saw thousands of flames.  And even worse, dark elves holding the torches.

 

Takvor knew he was going to fight to the death.

 


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Comments:

Amazing chapter, its good that you keep the romance going between Sage and Rioghnan. And I love the boss of the dark elves, he's evil and yet has a sense of humour. Vappu got told, I bet she's not uste to being disrespected, being loyalty for so long. She had it coming, but will Ikraim be saved. The dark elves seem pretty bent on destroying it, but a cornered animal near extinction fights viciously. This shall be very interresting.

Posted: Sep 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you but the story isn't finished yet. Not by a long shot. I had writers block... Liskin is absolutely crazy. No, Vappu isn't. I'm quite excited about where this character is going. I'm glad ur still reading. thank you so much again!!!

This is just getting better and better, I'm on the edge of my seat, I don’t know what I’m more excited about the battle itself or the romance! Cant wait for the rest.

Posted: Sep 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you kittycat. I'm working on a new chapter. I know its been a while since we both wrote something. Thanx for the comment and read.

i vote for romance over battle

Posted: Oct 1, 2007

Author Comment:

We'll see what happens. Sage is a very difficult character cauze she knows her kingdom comes first and she doesnt really want her life confused now more than it already is. but you never know. thanx for comment

OMG!!!
I love it!!
I cant wait to read more Bunny!
I love the romance, And Ragnid? Ohhhh... Takvor is sooo gonna get mad when he finds out what Vappu did to her... Ohhh...Heheheh... Cant wait for that part! YAY!!!
Maybe he will be the one to kill her... Hmmm...

Posted: Oct 2, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you!!! I'm not gonna be able to write for a long time but as soon as im back in my normal dept at work ill write like a crazy person

love the ragnid twist. saw it coming, but only a little, and it made me happy. i'm analytical like that anyway. i have to figure the story out befor ei'm told or ill go nuts. i'm also a big fan of this liskin fellow. he knows how to handle vappu, and he's funny. i have a feeling that he's the real evil here.

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hmmmm u'll just have to see but i promise a few more twists. i'm glad u liked it. thanx for read and comment

are you going to update. i cant wait to see what happens next. i hope that sage and her brother are reunited and that vappu gets what she deserves

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes but i was on leave so its gonna take me a while to start writing again but i promise the novel will go on!! hehehe thanx for comment and read!

Camisado92(too lazy to log in)
(not registered user)

Everyone has told me that my fantasy story sounds a lot like yours. I have just read every chapter and see only few similarities. However, I an very much enjoying this!!!


Bitte keep it up!!!!

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

whats ur story called? id like to read it. thanx for the comment and i'll write more soon

thats really good!!! keep it up!

check out my new story vampiress...wont be the title... and comment please!!!

good job!

Posted: Mar 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx a lot!! I'll take a look.

I love it. Please keep writing! :)

Posted: Mar 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'll write the next chapter when I have the energy and courage hahahaha thanx

sliver
(not registered user)

in the face of death you will find great strength.

writers block why now? my god this is good i need more what happens does saga get her happy ever after?

darkness will sweep across the great land turning the once beautiful land to a deathly, lifeless waste.
the roses will bleed, wither and die with so many others and in fear will scerts be unleashed.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHA! Yep now. I'm not finished with this. not by a long shot. but i'll write soon.

this novel is awsome love the ideas and the imagination you have its amazing if you have time look at my profile ;)

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and will do.

ahh! next chapter!!!! omg!
i love this story!
you have me glued to my screen!!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice!

I made it, I hope you can over come writers' block and anything else that is holding you back from this amazing novel.

I have me entranced, I can't wait for the day that there will be more :)

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx DarkFairy! I'll try and work on it this weekend.

Great story, the character developement is pretty good. Can't wait to read the next chapter, if you have the time maybe can you read my featured story its also fantasy.

Ur a great writer

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and I'll do so!!!

Tor Steinsland
(not registered user)

Great story so far, so you got to continue writing new chapters.

Sage seems less tough than in the beginning of the story, so you could make her less lovesick and more warrior-like when you continue the story.

If you want a tough chick, read my story about Alice.

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the advice. I'll be posting the new chapter soon. Thx for read and Comment

(squealed with delight) Takvor and Ragnid? Ikriam's going down? Things are getting too exciting now. Where's the next chapter?

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

It's comming....I've got writer's block but I'll try and finish it tonight. thanx

oh my god! i hope the kindom is all right!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the comment

it's getting more and more exciting ooh i can see Vappu's face when she's dead by either A.Takvor or B. the dark elf king.

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

haha oohh you'll be surprised...

Made entirely of gold? I'm sure you realize the physics of that make NO sense... but, then again, neither do elves and magic, so it's okies!

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Great, I'm glad you realize that ;)

Whoa...I'm surprised at every turn. Now there's some one eviler than Vappu. Great plot!

Posted: Dec 21, 2008



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