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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 31, 2007    Reads: 421    Comments: 20    Likes: 11   


Chapter 3 - Vappu

After leaving her husband's chambers, Vappu ran to her private quarters and slammed the door shut. Laughing, she danced around the room. Finally she fell on her bed and thought to herself:

Well, well, well. At last I have what I've always wanted. Ikriam is all mine! Oh Sage, have I got plans for you. Ever since the first day I saw you, I knew you were trouble. But now I'm Queen and all of Ikriam belongs to me. Including you.

A gentle knock came from the door and Vappu shrieked; "What is it?"

"It is I, Your Majesty. Ragnid." The petite elf entered the chambers with caution. She's had first hand experience when it comes to the Queen's horrifying temper.

"What do you want, slave? Or perhaps you want to know what I want, don't you Ragnid?" Vappu said with a malicious smile.

Vappu jumped off the bed and took bottles from her cosmetics chest. One by one she started throwing them at Ragnid.

"I want all traces of that man and his family erased from this house. This is my house now. Everyhing. You go and tell Zavier I want Gadwalader's room burned down to the ground. All his clothes except the jewels. Bring them to me."

Ragnid couldn't understand what was going on. Why would the Queen destroy her husband's personal items? Does she not weep for him?

"Your highness, when will we bury His Highness? Surely we have to arrange a feast in honour of the King. And then we have the two week mourning period. You have to go to the Elders and they need to walk with you up the path of Zvonko so you can rid yourself of all the sorrow." Ragnid babbled unaware of the Queens rising temper.

In one simple movement, Vappu lunged forward and grabbed Ragnid by her waist length blue hair. With a shriek of fury, she threw Ragnid against her cupboard. Ragnid connected with the furniture and could only moan in pain as she hit her head on the stone tiles. Eyes blazing Vappu bent over Ragnid's battered body and said;

"Don't ever tell the Queen of Ikriam what she should and shouldn't do. Do you hear me you little worm?" with that she kicked Ragnid in the stomach "You are nothing but a slave. That's all you'll ever be. Now get up and do as I tell you."

Vappu grabbed her by the hair and pulled Ragnid up. Blood streamed down her face.

"MOVE!" Vappu yelled

Ragnid fell down again and crawled towards the door like an injured animal.

Sage heard the commotion and ran towards Vappu's room. What she found appalled her. Ragnid was crawling out the room and Vappu stood behind her with an wicked look in her eyes.

"What has happened, Ragnid?" Sage asked

"None of your business Sage" Vappu said "I was just teaching a worm how to obey her master. No slave will tell a Queen what to do."

"How dare you Vappu?" Sage hissed. She walked closer to Vappu. "How dare you treat a fellow elf like a dog. Have you no respect? We are not animals that attack others. We respect each other. Slave or royalty."

"Aaw! What a noble elf you are Sage. Just like your father was and look what happened to him."

"What do you mean? Father was ill. He did nothing wrong nor did anybody hurt him. He was ill for almost a year."

"You see Sage" Vappu said a smile playing on her thin lips "You trust others too easily. You are truly...uhm...what do they call it? Gullible. Yes, gullible. You exist in your perfect little world where everyone is pleasant and pure. You think you can fix all things but you can't. And now you can't even control your own Kingdom because you don't have it anymore. It belongs to me. Ikriam and everything in it. Mine. And there is not a thing in this world you can do to stop me."

Sage looked at her without a hint of fear in her eyes.

"Vappu, you will not take what is mine. Over my dead body."

"Oh well, that can be arranged you know" Vappu laughed.

"Are you threatening me, Witch?"

"Darling, I don't threaten. I get rid of elves like you. Now, as you know I'm your new Queen not to mention Stepmother. You are compelled to show respect. Now bow and accept your fate."

Sage stepped forward and with their noses almost touching she hissed "Never and don't you ever use the word mother before me again. You know nothing about being a mother."

Sage turned around, helped Rignid up and started to walk away. Just before leaving the room, Sage looked back at Vappu and said:

"And another thing Vappu. If I were you, I'd better watch my back. Things have a way of turning around and when that does happen, you are going to be right in the middle of it all. With nobody to help you. Get ready Mother, for your time is near."


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Comments:

lol i think i like sage. she's feisty. ha ha

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

She is. Her personality is more of a soft and tender kind, but when she has to be, shes like you said feisty.
thanx for reading!
Eileen

Hey, another job well done. The discussion between Vappu and Sage was extremely well done, I could almost feel her anger as I was reading.

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Qcontinu! I really appreciate your comments! I do hope you enjoy the rest.

Lionheart
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[shocked face] hahaha, i was laughing, even though i know it was the wrong time, when Vappu was throwing things at Ragnid... but then she violently lunged and i felt everything change. The conversation was done well and I fell in love with the way Sage stood up to Vappu :)

Good ol' cat fight, going to read the next chapter now hehehehhe

Posted: Jan 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe i laughed while writing it. can just imagine pots and kettels being thrown around hehehehahahaha

i almost feel bad for vappu. i mean, i know she's an evil, horrible, greedy, hateful elf..... but she has good reason. its the only way shes ever known. i'd kind of like her defeat to be by someone finally loving her and showing her how to be kind-- that would be a twist. anyway, well done, i read on!

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

nice idea! i'll keep it in mind. thanx for read & comment

i hope vappu gets whats coming to her

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

oh yes she will!! evil woman!! thanx for read and comment

I hope Vappu gets what she deserves, though, like all other villains, she's a victim of her environment, so she needs to be pitied.

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I agree. People are like the place and situations they grow up in. Thanx for reading and comment Cathy!!

sliver
(not registered user)

omg u are good i write too but this.. this is something else i write of vampires, pirates werewolves and blood but this anyone at any age can enjoy this ur as good sherrilyn kenyon one of my favort writers.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the lovely comment.

wooow
i must say, i this is my favorite chapter so far. i could feel the tension between sage and vappu. i loooooved it.
sorry its been a while since i last read. been busy. i plan to read several chapters. keep up the amazing writing!!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments alice!

Yes more time to read for me, lol. Got really busy there with the booksie plan. I'm back though. I was just like Lionheart, I couldn't help but laughing, I pictured Vappu as a cartoon character throwing a tantrum, lol. I love Sage she is awesome.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

Tor Steinsland
(not registered user)

Nice chapter. Sage is tough.

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx Tor.

Sage is so cool...

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Sage rules! I'm glad you like her.

good chapter things rellypicking up now

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Shiningstar

I think I may have the feel of this story wrong. Is it supposed to be realistic, like the Lord of the Rings, or not so realistic, like the Emperor's New Groove? Vappu seems like the classic cartoon villain. If she doesn't follow some rules (such as pretending to honor her husband, acting sad, etc) then the people will hate her. The nobles will plot against her. She will have no one protect her when even the mistreated guards join the aristocracy to put Sage on the throne. Who would ally with such an obviously selfish person?

If she doesn't realize this then she's more comic relief than scary villain. Unless this is supposed to be funny ('cause this scene did make me chuckle a bit).

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

She is a comic villain. No, its not supposed to be realistic at all! It's a weird story comming from a weird mind... Thanks again.

NightingGale
(not registered user)

OMG!!! Can I kill Vappu? *gets down on knees and starts to beg* Can I? Plllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeee! I'll kick her butt Lucky 13 style.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Permission granted. Thank you

loren
(not registered user)

wow... you write really good..
I was reading the first 3 chapters... and i'm always having the same thought... YOU WRITE BRILLIANTLY...
And for that, I envy you... hehe...

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thank you so much. I loved your comment

I've never read a fantasy novel before, but I am addicted to this one. I like Vappu, she reminds me of one of the characters in my story.

Powerful women are to be feared!

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank you! There is a side of me that likes Vappu. thanx

Ewokey
(not registered user)

I felt exactly like sage would. This is a really book/chapter keep on writing! Can't wait to read more =)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

Ewokey
(not registered user)

Sorry i meant it's a really good book/chapter

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx

A peek into the world of bitchy elves... and political power struggles. Next chapter!

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I love bitchy elves....mwaahahaha

Hmmm... I smell a cat fight getting ready to blow up
(big explosion) urrr my bad ;P

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanx zera.



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