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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19

Submitted: Aug 31, 2007    Reads: 387    Comments: 15    Likes: 11   


 

Chapter 4 - Sage

 

Sage helped Rignid to her room and called for the docter.  She posted a guard at her door with the instructions that Vappu was not allowed to enter the room or come near Rignid again.  She asked a servant to fill her bathtub with warm scented water. She sat at Rignid's side for a few minutes before walking to her private room.

 

 She pulled away the silver velvet curtain that separated the main room from the bathroom. Her elfin feet touched the cold ruby floor.  The floor was made of ruby tiles imported from Alusesdi, a birthday gift from her father.

 

 She slid into the square shaped tub and sighed.  She allowed the water to ease her sore muscles.  The sweet aroma of roses filled the air.

 

She thought about her mother.

 

 Her mother always loved the smell of roses. A cool breeze played with her hair and a single teardrop slid down her cheek.  She missed her so much.  Her beautiful mother.

 

 Sacha-Gailia had hair as gold as honey and eyes as clear as water.  Long elegant fingers used to play with Sage's hair while her angelic voice sang songs of hope and love.

 

"Sage, my love" her mother once said "never do something that is law or is accepted if you know in your heart its not right. You have to fight for the truth and the good in life.  If you don't, evil with triumph. We stand for love, Sage.  Love and harmony."

 

After her bath, Sage took a nap for she was exhausted.

 

It was well after sunset when the door silently opened.  The intruder sneaked to where Sage was peacefully sleeping.  He looked at her serene face and touched her full lips with his rugged fingers. 

 

"Soon little one" it whispered to the dark and with that the figure turned away and vanished just as unnoticed as he appeared.

 

Sage slept silently. 


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Comments:

OMG!!
The guy in her room...Who is he...
And that Elf with the dwarves, has to be Sages big brother, he has to be!!! OMG, I love this story, MUST read MORE!!!
OMG, when is the next chapter coming, ohhh, I so want to be your fan, please???

Posted: Aug 31, 2007

Author Comment:

LOL! You'll have to wait and see. I'm working on the next chapter - will publish it this weekend I promise. I already accepted you as a fan and THANK YOU SO MUCH!! Eileen

now i'm curious. lol

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

LoL. This character is going to be very interessting i promise you that. thanx for reading. eileen

I must admit you have picked my curiosity. Who is the man in her room? what will be done about Queen Vappu? I can't wait to keep on reading.

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Just a few more chapters and you will start to understand a little. I haven't gotten to revealing the man's indentity but I think you'll pick it up along the way. And again, thank you for reading!!!

Lionheart
(not registered user)

That was a beautiful piece of guidance that the mother gave :)

Its not always bad when people are in your room while you sleep......right?

Posted: Jan 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahaha depends on what people...

i agree... he could be a good guy. mmmm speculation!

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

speculation indeed! thanx for read & comment

sliver
(not registered user)

well i'm shocked u just keep getting better. a man in her room. this girl is good and brave i love her. i chose this name sliver because i like snakes and the way they move.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

ha i'm totally in to this story. i need to find out more now. holy cow that was good. excellent writing!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you alice. I hope you like the rest

Ooh I'd love a nice rose scented bathe, I do have vanilla cookie, hmm. Anywho, I love the advice, that should be like a rule for life.

Next chapter here I come.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Ooh I love rose scented baths!!!!!! vanilla cookie sounds nice! I want some!

Love and Harmony rules. Great advice from a mother. I'm so excited now.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanx Indiefreak

I liked this one. It was a good way to bring up some more information about her mother without boring or confusing the reader. Though I felt that she should be shedding more than just one tear for her mother. After all, her father just did in front of her.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the comment.

loren
(not registered user)

you sure know how to keep your readers wanting more...
the suspense is killing me...

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe thank you

ewokey
(not registered user)

Spooky! Full of suspense! Still awesome!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

Loved this chapter. It was very discriptive, great imagery. :D

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank you

Holy shit, a ruby floor? Talk about extravagance. Now I want one...

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yep...me 2

I have a fealing that guy knows here destiny and where her brother is. As for the step-mother she probly was the one who dropped Sage's brother off to the dwarves...she had someone do it for her she's too lazy to do it herself. Lazy butt queen, lazy butt queen.:D lol

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahaha...oh you'll see



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