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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 1, 2007    Reads: 174    Comments: 13    Likes: 7   


 

CHAPTER 7

 

Saira walked to Vappu's room.  She was summoned yet again by Vappu.  Saira wondered what mood Vappu will be in.  The last time she sent for her, her stepmother was extremely rude to her. 

 

Saira entered Vappu's chambers with a cold hand gripping her heart.

 

Vappu was looking out the window and when she noticed Saira, she smiled.  Saira relaxed a little. 

 

"You sent for me?"

 

"Yes, yes I did little one.  Now come here and sit on your mommy's lap." Vappu said while sitting down.

 

Saira walked to where Vappu was sitting and carefully climbed onto her lap.  Vappu put her arms around the tiny elf.

 

"Now honey.  You know what day it is today, don't you?"

 

"No, not really" the girl replied.

 

Trying to hide the irritation in her voice Vappu said "Today dear Saira, is the meeting with the elders."

 

The monthly meeting with the elders were very important. They would discuss all the kindom's future and new laws.  Only blood related royal family members were allowed to participate, and Vappu wasn't blood related. 

 

"Oh yes Vappu.  Now I remember" and the little girl's eyes lit up.  Everytime there was a meeting, Saira had to attend even thought she didn't understand most of it. 

 

"And you know what to do, right honey" Vappu asked

 

"Yes I know"

 

"Now, here is your present" and with that Vappu gave Saira a tiny velvet pouch.

 

Saira carefully took the pouch and opened it.

 

"Oh Vappu!  Its beautiful!" Saira held the pearl necklace in her delicate hands. Feeling kind of guilty, Saira looked up at Vappu and asked:

 

"Is Sage still not supposed to know about this? About me going to the meetings and writing everyting down?  Why isn't she supposed to know that I tell you everyting they say?"

 

"Because its our little secret.  And you know what will happen if you tell her don't you?"

 

"Then you aren't going to be my new mommy anymore" she peeped.

 

"Yes and we both know how much you want to have a mommy again right?"

 

"That's what I want the most in the whole wide world.  A new mommy."

 

Vappu smiled to herself.  Everything is going according to plan.  Now all she must do is wait until the meeting is over and then contact Liskin.  Liskin can't wait to sink his teeth into Ikriam.  And Vappu couldn't wait to destroy it.


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Comments:

OHHHH....
I cant believe Vappu is using Saira!!!
Poor lil girl!!
I cant believe that evil lady!!
GRRRRR... Kill her please!!
Find a dragon and have him eat her for me would ya???
JK!!
Still, it would be funny to see her eaten.....
Heheheheheheh... Cant wait to read more!!!

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Hehe! I can just picture it! I'll publish chapter 8 2day or 2nite. Thanx again!

i think someone should boil vappu in oil or something

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeah, she is kinda troubled, isn't she? LOL
thanks for reading!

I know Vappu is a twisted elf, but one must respect her ingenuity in manipulating a little girl in extraplating information she would otherwise be incapable of obtaining. No one would ever suspect the child of working for Vappu, therefore I hold my judgement toward Vappu because I respect her cunning mind as a prey respects its predator, seeing its power in everything it does. Very well written, and the motives in which you gave Saira are very realistic for a child, because all a child wants is a mommy. Excellent once more.

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoy it and the fact that you can see far beyond the words i've written.

poor saira! all she wants is a mommy, and she'll take the first person that steps up to bat. thats so horrible and sad, however i still maintain pitty for vappu, and i do (fairytale girl as i am) have respect for her, as qcontinu said, for her cunning and resourfullness. well done, i'm impressed at the range you can make your readers feel and understand without telling them to.

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah vappu's situation is a difficult one. u dont know if u want to hate her or pitty her. thanx for read & comment

sliver
(not registered user)

Vappu is such a bitch. using the little girl. all she wants is a mum who loves her. i thought i wwould cry the poor kid.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Yep she's a cow alright.

*sits with jaw dropped*
i just want to slap vappu!!!
grrrrr!! and shes using saira!!! aaaarggg!!

excellent writing by the way. i adore this story!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you alice

What is she up to, no good of course, I worried for Saira and Sage now....

I'm so happy I'm reading this, excellent job so far.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx!

I don't like people manipulating children. I hate Vappu evenmore (eventhough she's got a sad past).

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I dont like it either. Vappu's a big cow. Thanx

Suspense is building

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

It is indeed. Thanx

I don't see why a council of elders wouldn't invite the new queen to their monthly meeting. How much power does the queen have? Could she not just dismiss the entire council? Vappu seems like someone who would do such a thing.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

nope, she's not royal because she's not blood related. They still had to decide if they would crown her as queen

NightingGale
(not registered user)

Pardon my french but VAPPU YOU EVIL SON OF A BITCH!!! BURN IN HELL!!! Heh heh heh... *scratches head* I, ummm, don't like Vappu.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

O_O I don't like Vappu either. Teehee. thanks

Ewokey
(not registered user)

Can you make Sage's brother come back and cut of every one of her toes then her fingers. Then get a bow and arrows pin her to a wall and shoot her with out killing her then chop of her head feed it to a dragon then cut of her limbs and boil them in oil and then burn her heart and take all pieces possible and give them to her evil ally person to do as he pleases with them!=)Then tell Saira that her siblings will take care of her.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

O_O Geez you have an imagination. I love it

I'm imagining Vappu's eminant death... Her intestines are ripped out her front, tied in a noose, and is hanged by her own intestines... Mmm...

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

O_O vivid picture....lol thank you



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