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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 2, 2007    Reads: 204    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   


 

CHAPTER 9

 

Vappu smiled as she finished reading the letter.

 

Finally my plan is beginning to work! Liskin is on his way and there is nothing anybody can do to stop it!

 

She walked out of her room and down the passage.  Only a few more minutes then the meeting with the elders would end.  She had to wait for Saira to come.  Vappu entered the little girl's bedroom and sat on a chair. 

 

She started thinking about her mother.  Oh how she hated her! Al those years of abuse and for what? Because her father mistreated her mother?  What a stupid excuse to ruin your only child. 

 

Saira ran into her room and came to standstill when she saw Vappu.

 

"How was the meeting?" Vappu asked

 

"I have the notes right here." Saira gave Vappu the papers with the childlike handwriting on.

 

Vappu walked up and down while reading the notes.  Her anger grew with each step she took.  She threw the notes on the ground and screamed.

 

"How dare they! They will not work me out of my own Kingdom.  Those rotten elders.  They will be the first to go!"

 

"Go where?" Saira asked

 

Vappu grabed her by the hair and yelled into her face "NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS, BRAT!" She flung the poor girl to the side.

 

"Why did you hurt me" Saira cried

 

"Because I don't like you, worm.  Your parents didn't like you and that is why they left you. I've told you every single day since they died.  Nobody likes you"

 

"Sage loves me Vappu and y...ouch!"

 

Vappu had her by the throat and started lifting her up.  Saira's feet dangled in the air.

 

"You sister only likes you because she's stupid" she snarled.

 

"Now if you say one word, I'll choke you and break your precious little neck.  Do you understand me?"

 

Saira couln't breath let alone say something so she only nodded her head.

 

With that Vappu threw her against the wall and walked out the room, leaving behind her a little heart broken and confused.

 

 A little heart so desperately yearning for a mother who loves her, she would do anything to please her.


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Comments:

ugh i soooooo hate vappu. keep writing. i love it

Posted: Sep 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comment! Appreciate it!

This is so good! I just cant get enough, the way you make the characters come to life is amazing.
Jy gaan beroemd wees en ek gaan oral saam met jou toer!!!

Posted: Sep 3, 2007

Author Comment:

Hehehe! Ek weet nie so lekker van die beroemd storie nie, maar dankie. Hope you enjoy the rest!

OMG...
Ima gonna put a dragon in my story and have him eat Vappu for you!!!
GRRRR...
I hate that Evil woman, poor Saira...
Where is Sage...
She should be a lil more attentive than that.... Oh well, not her fault I guess...
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
TWENTY STARS!!!
I love it!!!

Posted: Sep 3, 2007

Author Comment:

LOL! Thanks! I'm working on it. You'll see why Sage doesn't realize whats going on.

Thank you for rating and comment!

Anoter piece of art you have written. This only adds to the cruelty of Vappu and to her character, Vappu would not be who she is if she was a nice polite snob. Keep up the good work, everything you've done so far is superb. And if I may note how well you showed the reactions to the sudden betrayal of Saira's new mom, very realistic. A child would not understand why someone who claims to love her would hurt her so.

Posted: Sep 11, 2007

Author Comment:

I have no more words but...

thank you!
thank you!
thank you!
thank you!
thank you!

hehe

sliver
(not registered user)

the bitch i'd kill her if i was saga and found out she hurt my sister. i have four sisters and i'd died fighting before anyone hurt them i mean it. you are brill its like a film in my mind reading this i love it well done

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. and yes she is a cow.

oh...my....goodness..
GAH!!! i hate vappu. she is EVIL!!! poor saira!!!
i seriously have been sucked into this story. you are amazing!!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice. I hate Vappu to but at the same time I pity her. Complicated story.

We all pity and love our own characters :)

Can I please reach into the story and strangle Vappu?

Poor Saira all she wants is a mother, someone to love her, I hope she gets a real one someday.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes you may! We all hate Vappu!!!!

Poor Saira... Vappu is a cracked woman! There's no reason for her to be mean to others just because she's got a mean mother. She's nut!

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Nut indeed!!!! ohhh i like your style! Saira is so innocent. It's horrible

That last line was really milking it, I think. We get that she's a child abuser.

I would like to see how Vappu acts in public because so far I've just seen her with the sisters and the slave. It would also be dramatic if Vappu had some redeeming qualities.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

i'll work on it. thank you

ewokey
(not registered user)

it's hard to believe sage hasn't found out cause wouldn't saira wear her new necklace? cause then wouldn't sage be suspicious?

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

nope Saira hides it

Good work.

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you



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