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Gazers (Part three...)

Novel By: Iggysgirl
Fantasy


The pic is of Raid. p.3 View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 27, 2008    Reads: 226    Comments: 14    Likes: 7   


"Woah, woah. Training? Guys, I dont think so. She doesint know whats going on, the poor thing." Plum said. It was raing harder. "Now lets go, I know Lex hates getting wet." It was weird, how both though, dangerous, older looking guys were folowing a little girls orders. Lex seemed to read my mind. "Plum is a one of Zees two sisters.  He's the leader. Shes younger then the other, Levi, but shes still 3rd in charge." "Oh, okay." We were under a large tree, and Raid had taken off his shirt, drying his hair with it. He had a wolf tatoo on his chest. I couldent help but stare, "What are you looking art?" He glared at me "Take your hood off, Lex." Plum poked him. "I dont know why you wear it all the time." "Exuse me, but its so people dont see my ears." "Whats wrong with your ears? I think they're cute." "No offence, but your 5, and everything is "cute" to you." "What?" I wondered how could his ears possibly be "cute". "show her, Lex," Plum pulled down his hood. He was blushing, and he quickly put his hands on the top oh his head. "put them down." Pulling his arms back, I saw he had little grey cat ears. "Woah." My eyes grew wide. He glared at me. "Just shut up, okay?" Looking up, he jumped, grabed a branch of the tree, and sat down. "He can be a bit touchy." Raid mutterd. "Just stay away from him." "So, Phoenix, right? Are your parents going to be alright? You might never come back." Plum was sitting on a large root. "My step dad woulent give a shit if I was dead." "Oh... your mom?" "She is dead."  "I see.... what about your real dad?" "I..... dont really know." She patted me on the head. "You went though alot in the past few hours. Go to sleep, okay?"

Lex wached them. He didint know her mom was dead. He sighed. Huh. She seemed strong, actualy. Too bad she probly hated him now for over reacting. He couldent help it. She was so preaty, and the was she looked at his ears.... like he was some kind of.... creature, a monster..... Plum also seemed to like her. Probly because she was nicer then Rika or Levi, and older then Sheeva. He tossed around his golden ball. "I wonder what weapon she'll get from Zee... " He whispred to himself. "Maby a whip. Or an ax, like mine...... Or a dagger." He grinned, curling up like a cat.

I yawned. Morning time already? Plum was sleeping on the root, Lex was in the tree and Raid..... had his head on my leg. "Get  off me!" I pushed him. "Wha? Huh?" He jumped up. "What was that for?" "You were sleeping on me." "No I wasint." He crossed his arms, dusting off his pants. "unghh...." Plum got up. "Ugh... oh, your awake? Well, lets hit the road."


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Comments:

lex has a heart! lol
jw is this the story u wanted me to make a character for?

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Actualy, I wanted u to make on for "Oak Willows" And this. If thats okay....

hey! :) i love it

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I love the name Raid.....

Awesome!
Lex is like a cat?
I would so date him!
:)

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

^^ yay. id like to see what would happen if a dandled a mouce in his face...

gross!
But still!
HOT!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

XD I know. I wonder if he purrs....

That i wouldn't mind, my cat does it all the time when we sleep together, im use to it.

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

XD It would be cute. I bet he'd kill me if I went : "Here, kitty, kitty, kitty"

Oh yeah, hey kitty kitty, that would rele work. and christina would so date him. you should have lex purr when he is like rele happy or something! that's would be funny!

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

He hisses too.

awwwww X3

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Sweet, huh? lol. ^^

That is so cute that he has gray kitty ears. And that you said he curled up like a cat that is so cute. He is my favorite character.

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Lex is a bigger hit then I thought there would be.

Lex is so hot.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

0.0'
.......
Okay. He's cute, yah. *scraches head*
Yup. lol

*gasp* Lex has gray cat ears too?!?! So we're like relatied......OoOoOggggglllleeesss

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Well, I guess.

intherain
(not registered user)

ok now im in love with lex not only does he have silver hair and fangs but he has cat ears!

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

XD Everyone seems to be in love with him. (exept the guys. That would be weird)

looooooove iiiiiiiiit

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

tthhhhhaaaannnnkkk you

Awesome!
Lex is like a cat?
I would so date him!
:)

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

I'm just saying...

Posted: Oct 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Yah, I know.

Fanatic_66
(not registered user)

Lex is pretty cool he reminds me of Inuyasha only hes like a cat not some demon dog. Oh and for the third time i still love the book im definitely reading more

Posted: Nov 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol.
You shoulda seen the fight Lex had with my friend, Kiwi
She said Inuasha is better with his ears then Lex.
And when you mix a guy with anger management problems...
and an ax...
Things dont turn out pretty...



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