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Black Notes

Novel By: judy
Fantasy



okay thisis about a girl who has to find out that the world is not as it seems and even herself is someone she would never believe. View table of contents...


Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5

Submitted:Jan 9, 2010    Reads: 101    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Chapter 1

The blooded road


My heart sank, sitting there in my darkened room, alone and bored, as always. Same routine day in day out, no change what so ever.

In this half asleep state the room changed. It took me a while to relize that I was sitting in the middle of a dusty road, in the middle of a puddle of blood. When this happen I couldn’t help it, I screamed as loud as my lungs would let me. After I calmed down a little I looked up, to see a girl that didn’t look that much younger then me, she was standing a few meters in front of me. When she finally noticed I was looking at her she gave me a little smile.


“Who are you?” I managed to say.

Her smile just widened as she stared at me.

“Why are you here?” I spoke to her again.


After that her smile faded slightly as she turned to her side and pointed out into the distance. I followed where she was pointing, in my line of sight I could see a road. This road was the same as the road I was sitting on, dusty and old but after a while it hit me. The road looked horrific. There was blood on the road it was… was everywhere. If I looked closely I could see all the dead bodies that had been ripped to pieces and flung all over the road, there was arms in some places legs in others and piles of heads, it almost made me sick. The road with the blood and everything else made it look like a bloody river… a bloody killing spree river. At the sight of this I screamed again.

The girl, she turned around to look at me again, her smile had fully faded, but this time as she starred at me I noticed her eyes they where red… blood red, as she kept starring at me those eyes felt like they where sinking into my soul and made me feel like she was going to attack me… going to kill me… going to rip me into pieces like all those poor dead people on the blooded road. The stare frightened me. I flinched at the feel of it.


While still quivering I managed to ask again “who are you?”


She smiled again then took a few steps closer. Now I could finally see what this mysterious girl really looked like… her hair was a blondie-reddie-brown in colour. Which was curly and sat around her chest. Her face was pale with a few freckles on it. Under those blood red eyes were dark shadows that looked like she hadn’t slept in weeks. Then I notice two shiny white fangs that had just shown in her smile. I realized then and there that she was a vampire… and then I also relized that with out the fangs, blood red eyes and those dark shadows she would look exactly like me. It was like sitting in front of a vampireitic twin.

Okay this story was started by Nykira. She did have more then what I've got from her but it all got deleted so when it finishes of what she has done i will be continuing on from her...we hope you like itjudy xoxox




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