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the darkside

Novel By: kayoen freer
Fantasy


keita strey and her "boyfriend" deredra have to find a way to clear deredra's dark past they are vampires but deredra has the herona mark an anceint talisman of power soon after dicovering the mark keita spots a Telingar on her ancle another mark of power deeper then the herona what is going on? Can they resist evil temptations?? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 30, 2008    Reads: 95    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


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A scream was heard in the night and three dark figures made there way over to the tavern. Blood ran down my fangs as I turned to Misha and Lore if you haven’t assumed yet we were modern vampires. Three of a secret society of many more as you humans would say bloodsuckers. We entered the tavern and I looked at the usual crowd of low-life half-breeds. Then we joined the rest of the Full-blooded nobles on stage. “ah here is Miss Keista, never too early are we?” he added under his breath “never too late either” I replied, “We have all came here to here the disturbing news a vampire has revealed his identity you may suspect him as a fraud but his essence is too strong to be of humankind . He also has the mark”, I paused waiting for the utter and expected shock to die down. “Miss Keista?” someone spoke,” Do you believe that he may be one of us?” “Yes” I simply said a gasp came from the crowd. ,” Everyone show your right wrists!” I commanded every on showed there arm I noticed immediately that no nobles had exposed wrists, “I said SHOW YOUR RIGHT WRIST!” clearly appalled they pulled up the over-long cloak sleeves I studied their wrists closely “Deredra? Yo-you betrayed us?”
 
Deredra.


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:O!!!
wow intense!!!!

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you i try... but urs are WAAAy better

This is cool. Made me feel like i, myself were running with her. Keep it up and let me know when you wrote more!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

ok i willl!!!

CONTINUE THIS...IT'S AWESOME...

Posted: Dec 6, 2008

Author Comment:

ok! im working on the next chapter!

I likes it, but it confuses me a little.
Good, though!

Posted: Dec 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ok!! thnx



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