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THE year of the back sun book 1:isero

Novel By: kayoen freer
Fantasy


this is the story of a young elf, kayoen and her vampire love, faramir faced with the task of finding the sun shards to save their kingdoms an seal their marriage View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 24, 2008    Reads: 116    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


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The sound of the north wall filled the young elves with fear. I Kayoen Kala “elf-princess” Freer was afraid to walk among the guards outside the walls. This was my war. I simply refuse to marry “king” Ronald Kair he was-no is repulsive, obese, and disgusting, not to mention hideous, cruel, and rude. I HATE, HATE, HATE HIM!!!!! Why do two opposite kingdoms (Rose palace and Grimlin forest) want to start an alliance and why, then through me?! I awoke and laced up my bodice my father had already agreed to let me marry Faramir “Elf-prince” Como. Ronald is a mere fantasizing boy while Faramir is an intellectual man. I laced myself into my long white gown and placed my tiara upon my head. I slowly paced into the throne room where Ronald, Father, and Faramir sat. “Kayoen”, Faramir said breaking the silence,” I understand your choice to marry Ronald” “MY CHOICE TO MARRY WHO?? THE ONLY ONE I DESIRE TO MARRY IS Y-who told you I wish to marry him?” I inquired “why Ronald himself”, Faramir replied “RONALD YOU LOW-DOWN DIRTY STREET SCUM, YOU RAPSCALLIOU S FOOL!! SHOULD YOU LIKE I SMITE THE NOW?!” I fumed drawing my sword “lady Kayoen.” Faramir sad, “Do not dirty your blade with the filthy blood of a human. I shall duel him on the morrow if he shall accept. The prize is love... and life” “I Accept your petty challenge we shall duel at the village square on the morrow!!” he declared “Do not be sure of the prize Ronald.” My father said “Faramir possesses two things you may never have, a woman’s true love and immortality. Those two assets my mean your downfall. Fare well.” Faramir and I went to the dining hall “ Dost thee really love me?” he inquired “Yes tis true” I answered “Then I have reason to live so I shall win on the morrow!” he said,” would you like to take a stroll?” “Yes thank you kindly”, I answered standing “One moment”. Faramir said, “Dost thee like Ronald?” “NO YOU JEST IM SURE I HATE THAT HIDEOUS CREATURE HE SICKENS ME MORE THAN A GREETOB BOTTOM FEEDER!” I ranted “Then, milady, to thee I pledge fealty”, He said finally starting toward the courtyard.


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Ilove it and you are so vivid! I really really admire that!

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks call me o and dont use my name

this is great :) but im a little confuzzled

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

y r u confused???????

:) a rather good read I hope to see more. Vamp may be cunfuzzled(confused) because you did not break up what the princess and the others were saying.

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

OH! thanks for the comment i havent posted more cuz i thought no one liked it! ^_^

This is awesome. Love it!

Posted: Dec 18, 2008

Author Comment:

yay!!



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