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Ok this story was written out of shere boredom and I was too lazy to think of some knew names, you might recognize the following: Hallow, Tiel, and possibly Arien, which is spelled diffrently, but back to the story. This novel is about a young girl who has grown strong through all of the suffering she's had to endure. She watches over her odd friend Tiel, and later becuase of that odd friend she is nearly killed by vengful vampires. Yet what is their story, and what could her harmless pink-loving companion have to do with it? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 31, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


"Yes?" I sang recognizing it as Daniel.

"Hallow, and I have decided something." I rolled my eyes.

"What?"

"If you don't put yourself in line, Tiel's life will be at risk." I raised my eyebrows slightly. Where they threatening me?

"So your going to kill her if I don’t listen and obey orders?" I asked mockingly.

"Yes, we aren't playing around with you anymore!" I chuckled light to myself. Time for some vampire games.

"So, no more games?" I said slowly as I opened the cabinet, finding some scissors and a hair dryer in the back.

"No." I grinned plugging up the hair dryer.

"So Hallow decided upon this?"

"Yes, I am his messenger." I placed the scissors against my pointing finger and turned on the faucet before making a small cut, which began to bleed quickly.

"Is that right?" I grabbed the hair dryer in my other hand and smeared my finger against the door cracks.

"Yes, wait...hey, what’s that smell?" I grinned devilishly turning on the dryer and blowing it over the blood, which probably sent the smell flying.

"A-Arian...that’s..." I heard him approach the door. Wow he was like my little zombie now. Its amazing what good blood can do to a vampire.

"No, no, no, you can't get in here." I taunted "I have holy water."

Seconds later I heard a second set of footsteps enter the room. "Daniel what are you- what the-" I heard them running off. It wasn't until Hollow, of course he knew better then to get closer, ha he was probably already trying to get out of the house by now. Yet the funny thing occurred to me when the  facet stopped on its own. Yep it just cut off, that’s when I realized, the door wasn’t the only thing Hallow raced for. Oh, boy. I even forgot to plug the drain to save some. Talk about being a goner.  


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HA that is funny!!!!!!!!! Update soon!

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

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lol check up on "my news"

HA that girl is so evil she is awesome please tell me when u update!

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

sure.

dang it! lol, sounds like something i would do! ...forget to save the water... tehee
UPDATE!!!

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

ill see what i can do!



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