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THE FORSAKEN TRINITY BOOK ONE

Novel By: LESTAT
Fantasy


A TEENAGE VAMPIRE BOY WITH THE HELP OF HIS SISTER AND BEST FREIND ARE THE ONLY ONES THAT CAN STOP THE WAR BEETWEEN WEREWOLVES AND BLOOD VAMPIRES AGAINST MORTALS AND OTHER CREATURES WITH THE POWER OF SIX AMULETS. WHILE HAVING TO GO ON THIS PERILOUSE JOURNEY THE YOUNG BOY COLLIN MUST FACE HARD OBSTACLES :THE LOVE FOR A MORTAL PRINCESS, BETRAYL,DEATH,AND HIS HORRIBLE PAST WICH HAS TORMENTED HIM EVER SINCE THAT DAY OF WHEN HE LEARNED THE HORRIBLE TRUTH View table of contents...

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Submitted: Dec 1, 2008    Reads: 13    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


                                                                                                                            THE FORSAKEN TRINITY  

                                                                   CHAPTER 1                   

   ON A FULL MOOON ...            

         WHEN AUTUMN APPROACHES AND DESPAIR HAS FALLEN ON US LIKE A BLANKET OF DARKNESS THERES NOTHING LEFT TO HOPE FOR. NEVERTHELESS A WAR HAS SPREAD LIKE A PLAUGE IN THESE TRAGIC DAYS.  YET,KNOWING THAT I CAN DO SOMETHING I AM PROPPED AGAINST A PILLAR WATCHING A FEAST BIENG HELD IN EMENGARD THE HOME OF THE ROYAL COURT. "OH! COLLIN I THOUGHT YOU WERE HOME." EXCLAIMED A YOUNG VOICE BEHIND ME . I INSTANTLY TURNED AND WAS FACING NANALLY MY FIFTEEN YEAR OLD SISTER. SHE WAS DRESSED IN A WHITE DRESS THAT REACHED TO HER KNEES,WICH WAS FLUFFED UP WITH LACE AT THE CORNERS . SHE WORE HER EBONY HAIR DOWN AND WAS COVERED IN JEWELRY. SISTER OR NO SISTER SHE LOOKED PRETTY CUTE. "YEAH BUT THE KING SUMMONED ME ON THE LAST MINUTE.SO, HOW DID IT GO NOT TOO HARD WAS IT? " I ASKED CONCERNED. SHE SIGHED AND LIFTED HER ARMS TO HER HEAD"NO" SHE SAID CASUALLY. BUT, THERE WAS SOMETHING IN HER TONE THAT MADE ME SUSPICIOUS. "OKAY! IT WAS EMBARRISING THE KING MADE ME DRESS LIKE THIS AND HE MADE ME DO LITTLE MAGIC TRICKS FOR HIS PEOPLE! ALCHEMY IS NOT A LAUGHING MATTER IT IS POWERFULL MAGIC BUT NO HESAYS IT IS JUST HARMFULL MAGIC. I'M A KNIGHT OG THE DARK REALM FOR GOODNESS SAKE!! AT LEAST WILL WAS'NT HERE TO SEE ME " I JUST LOVED TEASING NANALLY . I COULD NOT CONTROL MYSELF I JUST LOVED TEASING HER. SO, I LOOKED DIRECTLY AT HER AND SAID "HE WAS HERE HE JUST WENT TO GET YOU ROSES" I WATCHED AS HER FACE TURNED RED. " JUST KIDDING YOU SHOULD HAVE SEEN YOUR FACE !" I JOKED AROUND LAUGHING. SHE STORMED OUT IT WAS HILARIOUSE BUT IT COST ME A SLAP ...  OR TWO. AFTER SHE LEFT I LEANED ON THE PILLAR FEELING THE COLD MARBLE . I SOON REGRETTED COMING HERE. THE KING IS A FOOL I THOUGHT TO MYSELF .HE DID'NT THINK THAT I WOULD BE CAPABLETO CHARM A YOUNG WOMAN AND SINK MY FANGS INTO HER NECK. SWEET WARM NECTAR IT IS TEMPTING A VAMPIRE WOULD ALWAYS BE A ONE. WHAT THE KING DID NO T KNOW WOULD NOT HURT HIM. EVEN I HAD TO GET BLOOD AT LEAST ONCE A MONTH. ESPECIALY HAVING ME AS HIS DAUGHTERS BODY GAURD WHEN I CRAVED FOR HER BLOOD AND HERS ONLY. I WAS NOT SURE IF I WAS TEMPTING FOR HER BLOOD OR I WAS IN LOVE WITH HER. IT DID NOT MATTER SHE WOULD NEVER PAY ATTENTION TO A BLOOD THIRSTY VAMPIRE.THAT IS WHEN I HEARD IT A HOWL.

                                                                                                  


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Comments:

This is a very good start. You have a very nice story going here. My only issue is that you write in full caps. Aside from that i really like this story
please update soon

Posted: Dec 1, 2008



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