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Chasing Rainbows

Novel By: Mellyface
Fantasy


It is a time of war between the Light and Dark angels up in the Heavens; it has been this way for many years. This once beautiful land of paradise is perishing, but there is a lingering hope for change in the air.

Meanwhile seventeen year old Rain Bryant, a seemingly normal girl down on Earth, is also having a war with herself. Secretly her life is an every day struggle, but that all changes when an Angel of light suddenly appears at her door, swearing his allegiance to her. Strange as he may be, Rain is glad of his company, but what is his purpose?

Chasing Rainbows is their story; a story of perservering through personal struggles, and staying true to the good in one's heart.

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Submitted: Jun 8, 2008    Reads: 322    Comments: 5    Likes: 4   


High above the stratosphere, invisible to the naked eye, lies the Heavens. An impossible improbable landmass suspended in air, surrounded by clouds which stretch far into the endless horizon. There all things pertaining to the earth are governed, though perhaps not always applied. Somehow it doesn’t matter; it never really has. Things are simply the way they are. It is the supreme watchtower of the earth.

There is no God. There never has been. For the Heavens does not create nor does it control the fate of the Earth and all its beings, but simply watches over them.

It is a paradise that’s impossible to find; one must belong there to ever be there. Even in that circumstance, it is the Heavens who does the finding.

The inhabitants of the Heavens are a race of winged beautiful ageless humanoids known as the Angels. They are the guardians of Earth. Once there was but one solitary race of silver-winged Angels, which were all powerful. They thrived in rapture for many ages, but somewhere lost in history diversity took over and two separate and weaker races emerged from one. They were the Light and Dark Angels.

The two classes prospered together whilst time took its course, but it was obvious they were different. Light angels were kind, polite, but strict. They believed in order, respect, and a nice quiet life. Their wings were pure crystal white. Dark angels were loud, outgoing, and daring. They were still a moral race, but were more prone to getting in trouble, and causing commotion. Their wings were deep obsidian black. Both were good at heart, yet opposite in every other way.

The Heavens, which was once a flourishing paradise soon became strained, and full of tension. Its lush environment was withering. The Lights couldn’t keep regulation and struggled to work with the lethargy of the Darks, who procrastinated on their duties in search for fun. The Darks’ reckless nature did not mix with that of the hard working Lights, and they too felt as though the other race had been bringing them down. It was only a matter of time before the pair broke out in arguments. They bickered over which race was better, and which would dominate the Heavens. As the condition between these classes weakened, so did the surroundings. Heaven was not so beautiful anymore; drought swept the land, and the flora which had thrived since the beginning of time wilted as had the peace which had prospered just as long. Soon rumors of war had scattered throughout.

But not all Angels thought badly of the other race. A slim few were opposed not to each other, but to all the arguing and prejudice which did not belong in this once flawless place. For a long time their voices went unheard, until it befell that two nameless figures in history took their rebellion further. They fell in love. It’s irrelevant whether the man or the woman was the Light or Dark Angel. In their minds they were both Angels of the same race, despite their appearances or prefixes. Few to none knew of their illegal affections until a child was born. She was a beautiful baby girl with silver wings.

An instantaneous chain reaction occurred from the moment of the child’s birth. Both races were appalled and all Chaos broke loose. Riots doubled. The land continued to wither. The couple was condemned. Underground peacemakers were hunted down. Amongst those peacemakers was the Light angel doctor who had secretly helped the couple through the birth of their newborn baby. In a massive uprising an unidentified group of Darks slew him, and after that the killing would not stop. It was official; the Heavens had gone to war.

It was a known fact that the Angels, their ancestors, had held a much greater poise and power than these two races ever could, and because of this the Lights and Darks fought over which side could obtain the baby girl and her emerging power.

The couple in an effort to save their daughter’s future channeled her powers and sealed her soul away to Earth before they were brutally murdered.

All hope was lost save one prophecy, one small silver lining, which emerged over the years. The two conflicting groups passed down this prophecy with the hope of being the race to find the missing Angel child, and awaken her power to conquer the Heavens once and for all.

A beautiful child:

Living in ugliness; blooming in drought.

She possesses a power, though it is shrouded in doubt.

What will awaken this power shall end this war.

In the aftermath, Rain shall fall, and be with us once more.


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Comments:

!minty~
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that was a great first chapter!!!!
*woot woot*


Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou anonymous person!

:]

Oooooh this is cool! It sounds really interesting. Just a suggetsion though, maybe since this is the first chapter (or prologue?) you really want to grab people's attention, so maybe put some dialoge in it or something. Like have someone telling this whole thing as a story to someone else. Just a suggestion though.

I really like the story though! I'll definitely read more and I love giving comments as well! So you'll be hearing a lot from me!! Keep up the awesome work!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much :]
your input and comments mean a lot to me c:
I'll try to think of some attention grabbers to spruce it up

...jawdrop...OMG i love this so much. It's so deep. It's like, my feelings written down. You're sooo talented. Could you read mine?

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou!!

Yes I'll read yours later in the day I PROMISE :]

I love how there's no black and white, good and bad line. Light and Dark have shades in between and everyone has good and bad sides.

And it makes me really, really want to read the next chapter. So I'll stop writing this comment to go do that now.

Posted: Sep 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Hahaha sounds like a plan.
Yes, I like that idea too; I think there are equally good and bad things about both dark and light that are sometimes overlooked.

Starbrightseeker
(not registered user)

Ah! So awsomeful!!!!! I wanna read more now. *u*

Posted: Nov 30, 2008

Author Comment:

:D



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