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Immortal World:life of an immortal girl

Novel By: Mia2515
Fantasy


The life of a girl who was turned immortal and finds a life with her biological brother and other immortals they run across. View table of contents...


Chapters:

1 2 3 4

Submitted:May 9, 2009    Reads: 117    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Prologue:

            "Ruth, you can tell me anything!"               "I love you."

Chapter 1:

             "Ruth?Ruth wake up!' That was what awaited me after the dreadful prosess of becoming immortal.It happened in 1806 when my father

met  the best `doctors`,immortals, who said they had a cure for my uncurable disease.I was absolutely elated.I had no idea that my whole life was

about to change.My creators were trying to make s superior race,ones that can even withstand vampires.

              As the hours turned into days I now knew what real pain was like.The men who created me, stuck a huge needle that had plant fibers

from South America.After that I layed limp on something hard for quite sometime.It felt like I was getting frozen in a huge freezer and then it felt like I

was getting pulled out,having frost bite all over my body. This process happened about 10 times before i noticed that I was still in the freezer and

not getting pulled out. Then I gained conscienseness...theres no way I could have amagined this place before.

               I could hear my mom now.Why was she yelling?Then I could see what is around me and what is around me.I was in a dark underground

cave."Ruth, please wake up...your the only one who hasn't awakened yet.please?"Then i could hear her sobs.As soon as my mom stops crying I

will try to explain the impossible. I would say `mom we have just been put in the most horrific process in life.If i were you i would run for my life and

never come back.Don't worry about me i'll make it back in no time.`No, i wouldn't say anything.i couldn.t hurt her like that.i don't know what we are

so i can't tell her a lie.

              Now is the time to wake up,produce some tears,pretend to be confused and then find out what we are."Ruth are you awake?Or are you

dead.Oh no please say you aren't dead.Noooooo!!!!!"she screamed and then i sat up.that's when people started asking "what was it like for

you.how did it go.how much did it hurt?





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