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Seventh Heaven

Novel By: MiyaviManson
Fantasy


After the recreation of the world, humans develop into new races; Derphs, Nerish, Sophans. They agree to share the planet with Potestas, a powerful civilization whom were known as "Aliens" in the past. Potestas and Humans share most common traits, yet, the Potestas possess extraordinary and almost God-like powers. After one human reaches an unimaginable level of power, the Potestas fear he might adquire more power than their own. A story of fantasy, adventure, action and love will develop from this violent, magical world-wide war. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 27, 2008    Reads: 21    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


Chapter 1

The white heavens that surround me aren’t the heavens I had imagined. The light everyone seeks is the same light that’s blinding me. The reds of hell are gone and my blood is in fact, transparent. As it now runs through my dying body, I reach out my hand to him, why has he forsaken me?

A planet beyond the Earth it once was has fallen into pieces. In the year of 2465, the war within the planet’s countries had gone out of control where everybody hated everybody. Among the land of the dying, there was a young knight named Neryan, who was injured badly enough to hardly being able to move. He crawled away hoping for a chance to live. The corpses around him worn the faces of his friends and Neryan’s heart was so horrified that he no longer felt sorrow for his fellowmen’s deaths. Fading away, his consciousness shut off.

The few survivors of the war were taken to the nearest cities but in Neryan’s case, he was taken to Thezes, a green land which used to be called “The Valley of Life” and was now flooded by the cold rains of the new age. The dead bodies of warriors, women and children floated and seemed to emerge from everywhere in the valley.

Slowly regaining conciousness, Neryan opened his eyes and found himself hospitalized. He had passed out and didn’t know what had happened or where he was. He started yelling, hoping somebody could hear him.

“What’s the problem?” –Asked a nurse who had just entered the room unexpectedly-

Neryan as surprised, she looked worn out and had several wounds in her face, arms and hands. Neryan stared in fear and wonder, he finally asked –“What happened? Where am I?”-

The nurse gave him an unpleasant smile, which reflected no more than concern.

The nurse spoke again –“You’re in Thezes, you were one of the few survivors. You are going to stay here a little longer until you are ready to go back and fight, unless they call you out, you will go either you are ready or not.”-

“I can’t stay here,” Answered Neryan impatiently

“There’s no way you can get to any other place in that condition.”
“I need to reach Gabrielle City, is there a way I can get there?”

“The transportation is scarce, only a war tank would be able to take you at this moment. Plus, Gabrielle City is probably already destroyed since the enemies have already gone through that path. Please young knight, rest for tonight, who knows if this city is going to continue safe tomorrow.”

The nurse exited the room quietly. Neryan closed his green eyes in dismay, he put his white hands on his face and he suddenly began to cry. What purpose is there in life now that Gabrielle City is down in ruins? He had left his sister there, she was blind, she couldn’t defend herself, run or hide. Neryan had promised her that he would come back, but now everything had now become meaningless.

That night, the moon was darkened by the black clouds that sheltered the sky. The only light came from the few settlings set by the people who remained alive. Neryan heard a strange noise coming from the roof of the hospital, he became curious and slowly raised to follow the sound, but then it stopped. He remained quiet in case it was heard again, but no luck. Thinking it was just his imagination, Neryan walked back to his stretcher, but before he could lie down again, he heard the noise which now seemed to be louder. Neryan opened the window and looked up since he was on the higher story of the building, he saw nothing. He closed the window and quickly turned around as he saw a shadow passing by the door. He bravely walked after it but the halls were too dark the shadow could slip away without him noticing, or it could as well, attack, letting him defenseless. He went back into his room and locked the door but then he felt a presence sharing the same space as him. He looked back and there it was; the shadow with the shape of a human who seemed not to have noticed Neryan was there. Neryan reached up his hand to get his sword but then the shadow, now proved to be human, took out two sharp blade swords and slashed right in front of Neryan’s hand.

The moon finally came out; a silver ray of moonlight entered through the window and had illuminated this person who was wearing a fabric-made armor and a scarf that hid the person’s face. Neryan was shocked he could not move a muscle, he moved his hand back and crawled away slowly. A female voice coming from the intruder said; “Don’t you dare to go against me”.

Neryan’s voice was being held back because of his insecurity and shock, until he finally answered back to her, “I… I wasn’t…”, but before he could finish speaking, the girl interrupted him; “You were!” Screamed the woman, slashing her sword in the air, but then a strong cough stopped her. She threw her sword to the ground and put her both hands against her neck as she coughed loudly in pain.

Neryan stared and after a second thought, he gave her the water the nurse had given him.

“Drink it!” Said Neryan, the girl took the glass off Neryan’s hands and drank the water.
Her cough seemed to have ended; she said in an exhausted voice; “Who are you?”

“I’m Neryan, how about you?”

“Call me Thief”.

“Thief?” he asked curiously.

“You cannot know my real name, so say, you got some food?”

Neryan nodded his head and got an apple he had received from the hospital. He handed it to Thief, who ate it desperately after taking off the scarf that covered her face. Neryan noticed she was a very beautiful woman; he smiled and asked, “When was the last time you ate?”

“Yesterday, bread from a bakery in Etellia, I stole it. Good thing nobody noticed, hah ha. So, you got some more?”

"Not until you help me.”

"Huh? Fine, help you in what?”
”I need to go to Gabrielle’s City.”
"Did you know you need to cross Etellia in order to get there? I’m not going back in there, too bad sir.”
“So where are you going then?”
“Hell if I know! Anywhere I can hide from the police who have been chasing me around since I can remember. But hey, this isn’t that bad of a place if you ask me.”
“Don’t be a fool, this city will fall very soon, just wait and see, and we’re too close from the war.”
“Let’s do something, you helped me now I’m going to help you, how’s that sound? I owe you a favor anyways.”

Neryan’s face shone in joy. Before he could say another word, Thief interrupted; “We must get going before the sunrise if you don’t want to be caught, the entrance to Etellia is now strictly forbidden, but I know a way to get there unnoticed, just follow.”

That night, Thief and Neryan walked miles of the isolated and dark forest called Neebe, where the only sound heard was the blowing of the wind which hit the trees where not even an animal remained alive.

The temperatures began to fall. As night went deeper the cold became more intense, at midnight, a thin cape of ice was created on the very tops of the trees. Everything was so calm and quiet it seemed dead.
Thief and Neryan settled near two big rocks next to a lake they had found, they were so tired they agreed to rest for a while before continuing their trip. They sat down around the lake’s shore.
“These wounds won’t seem to scar, it’s weird,” Thief mentioned to Neryan as she slightly scratched her wounds.
“You need a doctor.”
“A doctor? Look at you! I’m surprised you are still alive!”
Both smiled.
“I wonder if I’ll make it alive to Gabrielle’s city, I would still need to cross Irama, a big enemy of ours, and that might mean the end of the trip.”
Thief stared at him with a strange look in her eyes, “Don’t be ridiculous! Nobody dies under my supervision.”
“I can’t believe what you’re doing for me.”
There was a long pause until Thief finally broke in.
“I’ve been living by myself in Etellia for months now; I got pulled away from my family because I was adopted and didn’t belong to their race, the government said that I couldn’t share the same home as them.”

Neryan stared with a sad look in his eyes. Thief continued.
“They took me to Irama, I lived on the streets, I had to steal food to eat, clothes to wear… until they finally caught me and sent me to jail. I was barely 16 when that happened, I was a helpless child everyone wanted to push around and take advantage of. I got sick of it, I felt like committing suicide, but then I finally managed to run away. They looked for me for three long years, I went from town-to-town, stealing and hiding until I met you, I didn’t want to be alone any longer, I wanted a goal to accomplish before they find me, and when it happens, I will die. But I want to die for a purpose and not for punishment for something they forced me to do.”
“I won’t allow them to hurt you; I’ll protect you no matter what. You got that?”

Thief smiled with tears in her eyes which she had held in for years, Neryan embraced her and covered her up with his cape, until they finally fell asleep on that ice cold night.

At the black city which used to be in England during the old times in Earth, a place drowned in agony, Gauna Lake Castle where ten of the most beautiful ladies from Gauna Lake Town were held prisoners by King Damian, the supreme ruler of the Gauna Lake region. They were taken by force, among these girls, a 13-year-old girl, Clover, shared a humid old cell with other older women who waited for their fate to be decided for them.
One of the guards of the castle opened Clover’s frightening prison door and with a deep mean voice he screamed; “King Damian shall pick five of you, the ones remaining are going to be held as slaves. Don’t dare to try escaping, it will not work. Whoever is caught doing something out of the allowed is going to be killed. Now prepare yourselves to meet the King.”
The guards forced the girls to exit the cells and walked them to the room where the King waited anxiously. They finally entered the room, there was a tense silence. The coldness of the 28-year-old king’s heart was recognized by everybody.

He was known as the most cold-hearted and cruel King that the world had ever had. He moved his hand across his face, with silver rings and bracelets around his arms as he smiled with sarcasm. His eyes focused on Clover who shone among the others for her indescribable beauty but yet, she owned the mind of a child.
Clover felt the heavy eyes of the King on her but she was too scared and nervous to look up.
“You! What’s your name?” – Screamed the king at the frightened young girl –
The voice of the king was terrifying, it caused Clover tremble in panic until she finally looked at him in the eye, those beautiful blue eyes which beauty disappeared before the possessor’s malice. She tried to answer but her voice wouldn’t come out. The king stared with anger in his eyes and yelled madly at Clover.
“What is your name, I asked?!”
“I’m… Clover…”
“When I ask you to speak, you speak! Is that clear?”

“Yes, I’m sorry!”

Clover’s voice dispelled, she hid her face and tried to hold her tears back. The King began to laugh. He laughed alone and gave away a feeling of insanity. The girls were confused but at the same time, appalled. The King continued to examine the others with interest, and then told the guards to take them back to their cells.
They received the news an hour later, the names of the five chosen girls were being called out, and one of those names was Clover. The chosen ones cried in desperation, they knew their lives were ruined; the King had now the freedom to whatever he wanted with them. Although they were going to receive all the wealth and luxury any person could ask for, it was nothing when what they really wanted was their freedom, which had just been taken away from them.

The morning’s warmth finally came to Neebe Forest when Neryan had opened his eyes before the sunrise. He hadn’t seen such beauty for so long. He turned to look at Thief but she was no longer by his side, she was now sitting near the lake shore, eating from Neryan’s food. Neryan yawned and then stood up and walked towards her.

“Good morning.” –Said Thief nicely as she saw Neryan approaching–
“Morning,” Answered Neryan, still a little tired.
“’I’m glad you’re awake. We need to hurry and get to Irama. We must be very careful once we’re there, I don’t want them to find me and have them knowing you’re with me. I don’t want you to get in trouble. However, we still need to grab some food from the market and…”
Neryan interrupted, -“You are not going to steal a thing! We need to stay away from trouble!”-
“So what then, you rather starve to death?”
“No.”
“Shut up, then!”
Neryan sighed and rolled his eyes in disapproval.
“Get your stuff, we must get going.”


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