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A Tender Heart

Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Alyssa works as a slave in a bar but Destany has other plans for her when she finds out secrets thats been hidden from her past and the role she has to play in her futcher... View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6

Submitted: Sep 2, 2008    Reads: 111    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Chapter 4
TICK…TICK…TICK…
Alysa looked towards the house to see Bruse stick his head out of the window
“If you’re going to the forest, don’t rome to far into it, its not safe and you never know what kind of wierd things are in there “Bruse shouted to her
“I won’t sir … thanks”she replied with a smile and started walking slowly to the forest’s direction
Right infront of the forest she stands still and hardly breathing having second thoughts of going in, but then decided to go ahead with it and she enterd the forest
Taking deep breaths and letting go of them
looking at her seroundings and memorising it as if taking pictures in her head, taking in every tree and flower till she heard something in the distance she stood still to listen to this unfomiliar sound …she takes a few more deep breaths and headed to the sound she hears
when she came to a compleat stop and gasp for air for this site of beauty that’s infront of her it’s a type of dam with a river flowing true … its just breath taking its so pieceful and the seroundings is so welcoming with the trees serounding it and the fog laying ontop of the water
It is ……. There is no word to dignefay the beauty of this sight
It almost looks like another place that I fagely remember, but am trying to forget …
‘’I can realy spend a lot of time here and clear my mind from everything and find some piece here “Alyssa said outloud and giggeld for talking to herself
She walked closer to the water and looks at all the life around it and in the river type of dam and felt a tear run down here cheak …she touched her cheek and stoped the tear halfway down and looked at her hand that had the tear on it now, till it dried up then layd down on here back looking at the sky
As Alyssa lies there in the grass on the bank of the pond/dam her mind starts running wild with all possible thoughts, why does life move on and she is stuck in this time were nothing changes for her? How did Bruse know that it’s almost her birthday and she forgot? How can she forget about her own birthday coming up in 3 weeks? Does she have a destany and if so what is it? …
Then here mind went still… a voice inside her head telling her that everything will be ok,and everything will come in time … for she need not worry about it now…
That voice ….. It is so familiar… I have heard it before….
The voice so deep but also so smooth it can even make the most fears beast calm
Shaking here head thinking that she had to much fresh air …she stands up and looks at the sky biding the moon fear well for now and welcoming the sun .
With that said and done she heads back home to keep her promise to Bruce.
Bruce welcomed her back from her return and said that he is glad that he can put some trust in her… for that he will grant her some freedom and will let her go on her walks every Sunday and every other day depending on her and how she behaves.


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Comments:

omg i love it ur great excellent fantastical lol

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL ,I am galed you think so...Thanx...

i love it update soon plez

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx

will do...

again like i said he's nice :) but i have a feeling something bad is gonna happen next chapter!

Posted: Sep 2, 2008



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