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Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 472    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


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Chapter 1

His Name is Brian Hamilton and he is the most handsome man she had ever met.
He was tall about 6’5 foot and had brode sholders with everything els complementing him, he was just dreamy…

Everything went fine for the first few monthes, he was charming and caring; you could say that he could give the moon and the stars to her if he could but things changed for the worst after that “When they said looks can be decieving, they realy ment it...”

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By her 20th birthday she was raped, abused and tortured behond recognition, her boddy was brused all over and had a few broken ribs and brused wrist and ancles

She was in and out of the hospital more than she could count on her hands and when ever they got sespicous he would tell them a radom and twisted story about howI was attacked by men on the street or I how fell off the stairs or so on ,so that they would belive him and when thay kept on asking he would take her to another hospital

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Zonica sat in her room, waiting for Brian to come home.
She made his supper two hours ago knoing that he doesn’t bother eating it she still had to cook it for incase one day he will eat at home again and not at one of his “girls” places were he would spend most of the night and half of the morning before returning home to her.
When he finaly came home it was about 11pm much earlier than she expected but noticed that he was in one of his moods again, and knew that she was going to get it, its like a roatean when one of his “girls” turnes him down and he doesn’t get what he wants from them, she would be his boxing bagbecause he blames her for all his problems

He knows that he can’t leave her because of her family being one of the most popular and richesed familys there and he gets a good amount from them every month and his reputation that he must keep … all adds up to his fustration.

ZONICA'S POV

I went downstairs to great him and asked him how his day was and that I was glad that he’s home so early, but inside I was screaming knowing what is to come,I offerd him some food and he declined and then I asked him what he was up to and if everything was all rightbecause he seemed a bit tence.

He turned around and grabed me by the neck, screaming “YOU WANT TO KNOW WAY I AM SO TENS … I’LL SHOW YOU WhY…!”
Then threw me against the wall and thenhe picked me back up by my hair and riped my shirt off with so much force that I gasped in horrer, as I looked at him begging and pleading him to stop made him even angrier and then he beates, me pinning me down and binding my hands together so that I cant scratch him.
He began to kiss me and lick me toutching me all over with such hunger and lust ripping of the rest of my clothes and forcing my legs open and I’ll just pin them back close, wanting him to stop but he looked at me with such anger and punched me through my face and draged me by my hands upstairs to the room
I was kicking and trying to scraem but with my boddy being draged and the pulled across the floor and up the stairs and hitting the walls I lost the air in my lungs by the time we got halfway up the stairs by the time we reatched the bedroom my boddy was to numb and sore, brused and bleeding from scratches and cuts that I got on the way …my wrists was bleading with purple and blue bruises all around and my vision blury ,the darkness threatning to consume me ,I try to fight and stop the two things that scares me the most;Brian and uncontiosness for both of them are dangerous.
I have no controle over my body when I am uncontious and Brian will do with me wat he pleases
But I am too weak and know whats going to happen, I have been there a million of times … when my body hit the soft bed with such a force that the last bit of my air that I had in my lungs escaped and the darkness has taken over …


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Wow a little tence but Awesome and dark!

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

wow.....tense.....once again im very curious where youre going to go with this....let me know when you update both of these :)

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Yea i know it is a bit tens,
but you'll have to wait and see...

wow...

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

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i love it

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Dear Nats

Hi there, I must say that you have a wide range of words that you are using and the discribtion is fantastic. I am just getting started on this website, so I will post my storie/novel that im busy with in a few days or so, its not alot, but we'll see how it goes from there, but you must keep on writing.

I do have alot of guestions for you about this site, but I will ask you later on.

Enjoy your day and hope to hear from you soon.

Renier

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

sometimes saying nothing and enjoying the read , is worth more than all the comments in the world .

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

*Smile*
Thanx =)

Death words
(not registered user)

WOW holy shit intense WOw wow wow damn you know what you doin dnt you this sounds there aint any words to tell you what i think all i can say is wow you so got me stuck on it if this was published i would so buy this book

Posted: Dec 20, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL =)
thanx alot for your comment I appteciate it

Glad you like it



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