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Opposite Worlds

Novel By: NikiFM
Fantasy


Tags: vampires, romance

When Princess Lilly escapes from her side of the realm she sees that everything is not as it seems. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 212    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


Princess Lilly’s POV

I looked out my window at the other side of the realm, The dark side. It looked full of life and there were bright lights twinkling. I was so amazed by the other side of the realm that I didn’t hear my father come into my room.

"Darling you should be getting ready for your ball." I jumped at the sound of his voice.

"Daddy?" I asked innocently.

"What Darling?" He asked with a smile on his face.

"Why do I even have to have this ball? I mean it’s so old fashion." My father’s smile broadened. I’ve been trying to get out of it for weeks.

"It’s to announce you are of age. I also have a surprise guest for you. Come on get ready." He said turning.

"Wait, why does the realm have to be split?" He turned around, looking a little agrivated.

"Because those Vampires drink human blood and are uncivil and out of control. Now get ready, I’ll send Mckayla up in a hour to get you." With that he left the room.

I sighed wishing I could go to the other side. I headed over to my bed where my dress for the ball was. It was strapless and tight fitting on the top until it got to my waist. There was a lot of layers which made it puff out alittle. Then the whole think was covered in glitter and diamonds.

After I had it on I looked in the mirror trying to figure out what to do with my white, waist length hair, I decided to keep it down. While I was still looking in the mirror I noticed that all the white made my midnight blue eyes stand out more. They were the darkest in the kingdom and no one knew why. My best friend, Mckayla, teleported behind me before I looked away.

"You look lovely this evening." She said sitting on my bed. I looked at her. She had her light purple hair in a fancy up do and she had on a dress similar to mine but not as fancy and with straps that fell off of her shoulders.

"And so do you." She smiled at me.

"So are you ready?" Mckayla asked getting all excited.

"Almost I just have to put on my shoes and tiara." I went into my closet and put on my white ballerina flats and my tiara. I came back out saying, "Come on let’s go."

We teleported to the ballroom, me in front of my chair and Mckayla some where in the room. As soon as I appeared my father and mother stood up. "Ladies and Gentlemen." My fathers voice boomed around the room and everyone went still and silent. "My wife and I will like to present to you our daughter Princess Lilly and her suitor Lord Ian." Just then some one appeared beside me and every one started clapping. All I could think was, What the? I looked at the person beside me he had shoulder length blue hair and soft blue eyes, in other words he was attractive but totally not my type.

Ian turned to me and took my hand and kissed it. "You look lovely this evening. May I have this dance?" I glared at my father but all he did was smile and nod. He led me to the dance floor and we began to dance and so did everyone else.

"Why does my father want you to marry me?" I asked in an irritated tone.

"Because I have money and lots of it." I scoffed his arrogance. He pulled me closer and whispered in my ear. "Aw, come on don’t be like that. I’m sure I can pleasure you in more than one way." As he said this I felt his hand slide down from my waist and to my butt.

"GET AWAY FROM ME!" I yelled and pushed away. Everyone was looking at us.

"Come on bab.." Before he could say anything more I teleported to my room.

"I got to get away but where?" I said to myself. Then it popped into my head: The dark side...

 

 


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oooh i hope she gets the chance to deck that perv!
great start! cant wait for more :)

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

YAY! Frist post!!!
owwww....This is a really good start! I like Lilly already. God Ian's a prvert!!! I hope she gets away. PLEZ update soon.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

okay yeah i didn't want any one to like Ian thanks i really like lilly too wait till u meet Zane

ahh. man i was bet to first post.....

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

cool lol

that was awesumness...cant wait for more..update soon

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thnx

Awesome! this is funny, and really pulls ya in. lol
Update soom please!

+Hecate+

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Updated all ready ;)

Sweet. I'll definitely be reading more. I got a lot to read to catch up...

and I'll enjoy every bit of it!

Javelin

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thnx

hi! niki. this is a good start. lilly shows spirit. ian cannot impose himself on her. its time her dad realised it and left her alone. an enjoyable read. carry on. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thnx alot

That was a very good start to what I think should turn out to be a good story. I love her attitude but I would have put a little more back story into it. Putting a lot of action in the front of the story could lead to problems later on (just from one writer to another). I do like that you are very descriptive, that is an improvement from some of the stories I have read on this site.

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx and thnx for the advice



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