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My Mark, My Seal, My Destiny (My MSD)

Novel By: ohsodifferent
Fantasy


Claire is a girl that gets a weird birthmark on her left ankle. when she tells her mom, she freaks out. Claire doesn't know why her mom makes her hide her birthmark, but she'll find out when she meets a boy named Jay who is just like her, but also very different. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 21, 2008    Reads: 161    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


Prologue

When I was six years old I noticed a light brown birthmark on my left ankle. Well, it was actually in between my ankle and heel. Anyway, I told my mom, and for some reason she didn’t like it. I thought it was neat because it was in the shape of a star. We never really talked about it, and my mom told me over and over to never tell anyone. Everyday we would cover it up with makeup, even though my sock usually covered it. I think my mom liked covering it because it helped her believe that it wasn’t there.

I remember once in third grade, when I was around 8, we had a new exchange student from England. I noticed that she was very pretty and had on these weird sandals. While looking at her sandals I noticed she had the exact same birthmark that I did. It was the same shape, size, place, and a bit darker than mine.

That same day I talked to her at recess. “You have the same birthmark as I do,” I said. The girl looked a bit stunned and then replied, “There are many with the mark.”

“There are?!”

“Yes,” she smiled, somewhat amused. “Wow, how many?”

“Too many to count. One day we’ll all be together though.”

I smiled. Part of me didn’t like the tone she had, but deep down I was relieved that I would eventually be with everyone.

When I got home and looked at my own mark I noticed that it was the same shade as hers too. I realized that over the years it had become darker. I told my mom about the girl that night too.

“Mom! Guess what? I met a girl today with the same birthmark as me! She said that one day we’ll all be together.” I was really excited about this. I thought my mom would be happy for me, but instead she said, “What? Don’t you ever talk to anyone with the mark again! Do you hear me? Don’t even mention it!”

The next day I told the girl that I wasn’t allowed to talk to her anymore because my mom said so. She seemed to understand. I had no idea why my mom never wanted me to talk to this girl. I thought maybe my mom knew her mother, and maybe they got in a fight once. That’s what I thought. I didn’t get anywhere close to the truth.

Over time I forgot about the girl from third grade, and I never thought about my birthmark either. It was a daily ritual to put some makeup on it in the morning and never think about till the next morning. Things started becoming normal until 10th grade came. That’s when I finally found out the truth about my birthmark. My mark. My seal. My destiny.


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Comments:

OMG! Really good! Keep going! I so want to read more!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :3 i will definitely keep this one up :D
yays!!! my first comment ever!!! *hugs* thank you so much

Oooo! This sounds too good! I can't wait! Tell me when you post more!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

definitely XD

This has intrigued me and your edit is quite clean. I would be a shame if the main chapters were this short, however. I hope they are twice as long, at least. Let me know when you have more available, very good work. - D.Azir

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

why thank you ^-^
i will definitely tell you when more is up...the next chapter is already typed up.....idk. if it longer than this one...it might be....but i will makes sure the following chapters are longer.. thanks for the read :3
~Alira

:) Very good! Great job! ^^

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

why thank you
*bow*

omg i love it

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

Oooooh cool beginning! I'm going straight onto the next chapter :)

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

go right ahead :3

wow this is very interesting!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

why thanks :3
i'll take that as a compliment XD

You nearly made my heart stop.....
My daughter's name is Claire and she has a huge birthmark on her upper arm.

The story begins well, but you might want to go back and work on some of the typos.

For example, when her mom begins to friek out about the other girl with the same mark, check your punctuation.

The chapter is a bit short, not sure if that's what you intended. It's strong, though, and I like how it ended.

Will be reading more.

MA

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks....i will definately check for my errors. thanks for pointing them out for me

very strong foundation to begin with...its interesting

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

:D
thanks
i was striving for that...i didn't want the cliche vampire story or the story about a boy...and a girl...who fall in love...those are literary devices i believe...not the purpose of a story



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