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Don't Leave Me Daddy chapter 1

Novel By: oliviathebest

A girl named Olivia has a dad. But this dad has just been selected for the g-9 unit. The g-9 unit is a obsicle course filled with death. Only one man will remain. Who will it be? View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jun 10, 2012    Reads: 15    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

Today is the day. Its the g-9 election today. Daddy says not to worry, but I still am. I get dressed in my most dazzling dress. we head to the courtyard.

Daddy takes a yellow strip and writes his name on it and drops it in a box.I hold his hand and go into the crowd. A lady with blue and black hair steps on the stage.

She says "welcome to the g-9 national naming cerimony!" The crowd starts cheering. She pulls a name out of the box that daddy put his name in.

She says " our g-9 repusentitive is: Richard Salazar!" Oh no. Thats my dad! The police grab him. I grab on my dads hand and the police pull me away.

"no! Daddy don't go! I need you! Please daddy say no!" I scream. He starts crying as so do I. He gets on the stage. He says nothing. I try to go up on the stage but the crowd is holding me back. I start screaming.

The police take me to a house and but a strange woman in there. Shes the person that is going to take care of me until my dad comes back. if he ever does.

I remember seeing people on t.v in that maze. It has crushing walls, and people that chase you around with chainsaws, and loins chasing you. I am watching the g-9 maze this year for sure.

Its not fair. I lay down on my bed and go to sleep with hot tears streaming down my face melting my every hope my daddy will survive with every movement.


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