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Novel By: puddleofink
Fantasy


Ribbon is a girl who lives with a group of vampires shes can phase and go invisable she has a huge adventure hardship and all that jazz NO I DID NOT STEAL THIS FROM poolofink BECAUSE THAT IS MY OTHER ACCOUNT I CANOT ACCESS FOR SOME REASON SO I CREATED THIS ONE AND AM TRANSFERING MY WORK TO THIS ACCOUNT View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 8, 2008    Reads: 66    Comments: 8    Likes: 0   


A week goes by after our tagging of the billboard, it was on the front cover of the paper two mornings after, we were rapt and in histerics everyone called the officers Psychos now, we were so proud.

Izzy comes home after school today with Nicole, Nicole is blonde with blue eyes and a killer smile she can also create fire. They make a snack in the kitchen and sit in the lounge to eat it. Me and Jude are already sitting on the three seater on each end watching the rock musicchannel, Nicole decides to sit in between us, Izzy sits on thelazy-boy.

"So Jude is it? Hi imNicole"

Jude gives Izzy a glare "Oh hi Nicole, yeah its Jude" Hemumbles. Judehates thisI think to myselfhe hardly talks to me let alone someone new.

"So your a jumper" she giggles, Oh god shes flirting.

"Mmmm" Jude replys

"Thats so awesome you must have the most fittest legs to jump so high..." She says

"Suppose" he says blushing

Oh god you fool I think to myself.

"Leave him alone Nikky" Izzy says smiling and shaking her head,

"Why hes so good lookingI cant help it geez" she whines

I get up offmy seat and walk to the kitchen area, we have a open plan kitchen and lounge with abar/bench type thing seperating the two areas.

"Jaz sed were going to Lillys t'nite Ribbon" Izzy says to me,

"Ribbon, thats your name... how stupid and weird..." Nicole says pointing at me.

"You knowwhat, thats not actuallymy namemy middle names evenmore stupid" I lie

"whats that?" Jude says taking Nicoles arm off his shoulder,

"Nicole!" I say angrily and walkto the front door that leads to the kitchenI open it,go outside and slam the door after me.

Its cold outside on the front steps I sit down on the top of the stairs and lean my head against the cool brick walli'm not jealousI lie to myself, i'm not. I grab a pair of Izzys boots and put them on over my thin socks to keep my feet warm. Thedoor opens and my bag lands beside meI turn my head to see Jude putting his boots on, Hegives me a green hoodie of mine anda black scarf.

"Lets go for a walk, man that Nicole is so annoying" He says offering me his hand to help me up I take it and westart walking towards the bus stop, Realising im still holding Judes hand I let go and shove my hand in my hoodies pocket.

"Still wanna catch that movie?"Jude asks

"Mmm, yeah" I reply with a sniff after

"Coolthe half four bus should be here soon" he says looking at his watch while sitting down at the bus stop,the bus stops only five houses down from our house.

"So the other guys are going to Lillys t'nite?" I ask Lilly is code name for Feed Zone, Feed Zone is a underground resteraunt for those who live on blood.

"Yeahfrom five till nineish" he says brushing a lock of hisstraight light brown hair off his face,

we sit in the cold bus stop for five minutes and a equaly cold bus turns up the door opens.

"this is the mall bus" theold bus driversays and we get onand payour three dollar fee, we find a seat away from the seven other travellers towards the back.

"So" Jude says pulling out a coin,"Heads thens its re-run ofthat Jackie Chan movie andtails itsre-run of that zombie one" he flips the coin andhe misses the catch,

"Jackie Chan" we say at the same time, we laugh,

"thanks" I say.

"For what" Jude says looking at me with his hazel eyes.

"taking me away from that bitch Nicole"

"Id rather have you flirt with me than that stupid girl, she was so annoying"

"Hah me flirting with you god that'd be the day" I say blushinghe puts his hand in my hoodies pouch and takes my hand in his,

"Im serious" he says we ride the bus like this hand in hand for the rest of the way till we reach the city.

Its five when we do, we get off the bus right outside themall.

"C'mon lets get inside its freezing" Jude says taking my hand and walking us to the entrance, Its atleast five degrees warmer when were inside.

Jude pays for our tickets when we finally reach the counter afterwaiting in line for five minutes,

We watch our movie in bliss unaware of the terror thats about to happen at homethe movie finishes and we hop on the bus.We get off the bus at eight fifteen to findPsychos surrounding our house,

"oh god no please no!" I say and start running towards the house Jude stops me, "Dont please let me go first" and Jumps off onto to our neighbours roof,I just stand there with my hand on my mouth stunned. A hellicopter flys over head and starts shootingatJude

"No!!" I scream and runto the house,a Psycho stops me in my tracks for a split second andIturn invisableIbite him he lets go andIreach the house I findthe twins dead on the footpath that leads to our house.

"Mutant shes a mutant!"a leaderPsycho yells at his men

Irun up the stairs without phasing and get shot in my side, Istop for a breif momentI hear Izzy screaming in pain soI carry on, I find her in the bathroom holding her side shes weak,

"Ribb....Ribbon?.....you..hav...have to ge.....get out ....of ....here .....me..i..im imnot go....gonna..." she stops and looks at my side

"they......go..got..you....h...ho...how?...everyones...every...eveyones...go...gone"she coughs up blood

"We have to get you out of here now come on"I say crying Igrab her from under her arms and start to lift her.

"ple...plea..please....let...me...let...me...I.....ca...cant...make..it..let....me..let...me...go.....lea..leave...me...here..plea" she coughs uncontrolably

"No Izzy Please you have to be ok you have to be come on!" I lie her down

"tha......th...thanks.." she says her eyes rolling up into her head, she starts shaking and fitting theres blood everywhere, all from her.

I take myhoodie of and place it on herI brush her hair off her head and leaveready to take down all the PsychosI can, I findJazz and Connor with bullets in there heads. Dead.

"Aaaaaaaaahhh!!!" I cry and turn invisable and phase through everything and everyone and run outside I keep on running down the street until I reach the park, I clutch my side and walk to a low hanging tree Icurl up under it on the ground I stay invisable and somehow manage to fall asleep.

MY COMMENT::::::

Wow that was a short chapter but the next one should be way way longer, um yeah i tried my best to make it imaginable but meh i tried any who comment me if you want to i no this chapter probably wont be the best but i promise you the next will be way longer and better and less blodier.. and cuter..hehe ok ciao


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Comments:

i like this chapter and i wasn't expecting this ending at all. i hope to see more soon!

Posted: May 5, 2008

Author Comment:

hay thanks i havent been in booksie in a long time and i will definitley put up another chapter soon

Wow. Absolutely awesome! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hay thanks i should have the fourth one up withing a week so yeah thanks heaps i will definitley read your stuff now cant wait!!

It's a pretty good story so far.

Needs a bit of work on the formatting, but otherwise, it's got potential.

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hay thanks yeah its still kinda in a raw state but thanks for reading and commenting on it!

Pretty good. Only one thing. Watch your spaceing. you have many word put together and its kind of annoying. But i really like this story and i can't wait until you post more
=]
-Ally

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hay thanks for the comment yeah i was trying to edit it the otherday now its all spaced propa

Hey, awesome novel, can't wait to find out what happens. Keep writing. Pleeease.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe thanks um i wont be adding anymore for a while ive gotta figure out sum stuff in the next few chapters first so ya thanks for reading!


this is pretty kool stuff
cant wait for more ^^

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thanks

Aww yay for Jude and Ribbon!
But i really hate those PSYCHO guys.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

yea well theres gotta be an evil thing/charactor/scientist in every book hehe thanks for the rad comment!!

Very interesting... Hmm... What will happen next??? I'm going to find out!

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

yay!!



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