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Fallen brothers of kingdom

Novel By: Shadowstep
Fantasy


Two brothers ready to kill each other for a kingdom in sky View table of contents...

Chapters:

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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 76    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


1

The start of battle

Some

people say that death is a man, and others say that death is a spirit that cannot be seen, but my father used to say: “that death is something you’ve seen your hole life but never expected to strike you, and it some times shows up as a thing or a spirit or even a man you knew like your brother”.

My

father always told me the story about how he ruled the kingdom of Ariston(The biggest kingdom in the sky),how two brothers fought against each other to rule!!

Ariston

was once ruled by the most powerful wizard in that time, he was so powerful that he could create a whole new world! Some people worshipped him, and others hated him.

One

 

day when he was lying on his bed he asked for his sons; Daren and Ronan, Daren was the Good kid who always obeyed his father, he was blessed with the power of light and strength, but Ronan was the bad kid who listens to no one, he was cursed with Dark and magic. Duran was one year older than Ronan, any way, the father(Clarion) called for his kids and they arrived, Clarion said: “I am leaving this kingdom of sky to both of you” Daren asked: “why? Are you going somewhere? Clarion answered: “yes, I am going to heaven, leaving the eastern of the kingdom to you Daren, and the western side to Ronan” Daren said: “but father I thought that you were an immortal, and you are a very powerful wizard, cant you revive yourself or something?” Clarion answered: there is no description for humans called immortal just for god, he can take any soul he wants, and he wants mine, all I can do is to oblige” Ronan kept still thinking how will he rule his kingdom, he wanted to rule the world he was thirsty for power, Ronan left his father and brother to prepare his rule, Daren said: “how did you give the western side to Ronan you know he will try to rule the world?” Clarion answered: “yes, all according to plan” Daren asked: “what plan? Father answer me. Huh father! Father!! May you rest in peace.” Clarion left the kingdom to the greatest war between two powerful brothers.

 


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not bad i thought it was quite good

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx again mohammed



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