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Novel By: Sharon Rose
Fantasy

I totally don't know where I'm going with this yet; and I'm basically improvising the whole thing.

But I hope you enjoy.

Synopsis:

Rick and Eliza get lost in the wilderness after an attempt at a prank that has gone awry. They find a key on the forest floor and find themselves stuck in a world that’s oddly familiar but not as friendly as they remember. They try to make the best of situations as they try to escape a world that they might not get out of. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 Reads: 39 Comments: 1 Likes: 0

Chapter 1

You’d think that I would have learned my lesson by now. But I seem to always go back for more.

You basically have no idea what I’m talking about but hopefully it will all clear up as soon as I tell you how I got into this mess.

It all started out with the first day of high school.

Yes, I know. How cliché. Bear with me.

It gets worse.

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Comments:

IaMitchell

Way too short for me to consider it a chapter.
This is more of an opening paragragh for a chapter. Take your next three chapters and edit them into this one, then perhaps you will have enough for a decent start. Not a bad opening start though.

"More!' he shouts. "Must have more!(and longer too.)"

Posted: Aug 14, 2008