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Seven Fairies of Power

Novel By: SnowQueen
Fantasy


Fay is a seventeen-year-old fairy living in the small city of Slevst. With her birthday coming up, she finds herself stressing about things that she had sworn not to worry about, especially on her birthday. But then, at the celebration, everything changes when a witch that only she can see tells her of her Fate and the power she holds. Suddenly, Fay is whisked away across the kingdom by her best friend who turns out to work for the Queen. Fay's mind is drilled with combat techniques, the ways of flying, and magic. Things couldn't have gotten any worse but then she reaches the capital, finds out that the Queen is actually her mother, and then everything that she holds dear falls around her pointed ears.

A story of romance, adventure and about finding out where your place is in life, this story will have you guessing every step of the way with unforgettable characters and situations that come from your most amazing dreams and your most terrible nightmares. View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30

Submitted: May 29, 2007    Reads: 596    Comments: 20    Likes: 4   


This story is dedicated to my faithful readers who inspired me so much in so many ways!  A few I'd like to recognize for their helpfulness is:  Marsprincess, Missbritian101, Poet3, Sandrastasyn, Chicka19, and, most of all, Tremaine Raisa.  All of you are so wonderful!!  I can't thank you enough.  I'm glad that you've enjoyed my story.  :)

 

Prologue

Kidnapping

 

 

 
 

Every night, the fairies would enjoy dancing and singing in their beautiful voices, but tonight was different. Tonight would hold the life-changing moment that would change the land. The mist that hung low to the ground would signify as ‘beautiful’ to any other fairy, but to the group of guards standing watch outside the main gates to Queen Tatiana’s castle, it meant danger.

Kalen, guard number eighteen, was having the uncomfortable feeling of doom. A knot was forming in his stomach, strengthening the unease. He gripped his spear more tightly and kept his eyes fixed on the forest not too far away. The breeze whistled through the trees, causing him to jump.

“I’m telling ya,” Alvin said. He was guard number seventeen and was standing next to Kalen, lazily yawning and closing his eyes. “Nothing ain’t going to happen. We need to get eh healer to take eh look at yeh. You over-react too darn much.”

Kalen ignored the jive and continued to watch. The guards around him shifted restlessly. It had been a long night and the twenty or so young fairies standing next to the gate still had several more hours left until they were relieved. Kalen came to attention as a twig snapped in the forest.

“Animals,” said Alvin dismissively. “Make noise all the time.”

Kalen again said nothing. He was not going to make a fool of himself like he did almost every time Alvin liked to flaunt his authority. Kalen marveled at the fact that Alvin had been able to make captain when he was so irresponsible. But Kalen couldn’t keep his suspicions in any longer.

“Something’s going to happen tonight,” he said aloud. “I can feel it.”

“Nothing is going to happen!” Alvin snapped at him.

“Let’s just keep quiet until we’re relieved, shall we?” said Marcum, a fairy standing a little farther down the row. “I’m getting a headache from standing here in the cold and you two bickering idiots don’t help any.”

“Why don’t you—“ Alvin started, but he was interrupted by one, long, musical note sounding from the guard post above.

“The heir has been stolen, block the gates!”

The twenty guards stood back to back, ten facing the gate and ten facing the forest, their daggers and spears pointed in the directions they were facing. Kalen’s stomach was flipping over and over again and his mind was racing. The heir of the throne has been stolen? He thought. But Queen Tatiana just gave birth!

They waited and then, CRASH! Yells joined in with the clanging of the gate as it flew off its hinges and into the night. The guards were catapulted in every direction, landing on the grass with sickening crunches. Kalen sustained no injuries but looked up in time to see a cloaked figure hurtling towards the trees. He tried to sit up but some invisible force was holding him down. He felt pressure on his chest. It spread to his mind and with one last look at the retreating thief, he fell into darkness.

 


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Comments:

oh snapppp

lol

that was aweosme

you rite really well

i lvoe fairy stoories, so i knwo ima like this lol

onto the next chappie

Posted: May 29, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm glad that you like fairy stories, I like them a lot too. I think that it's an easy submit to write about because I can find information about fairies and fable creatures online and but there's enough room to create my own thing.

marsprincess- I love your writing as well. Your stories are excellent.

OMGGG 5 STARSSSS

THAT WAS AWESOMMEEEE

I LOVEDDD ITTT

i love fantasy stories

love it

omg interesting

gotta go read ur next chap

lol
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Posted: May 29, 2007

Author Comment:

lol. So glad you liked it. I should be posting the third chapter soon!

ooh! That was really gud. Its a short chapter but I liked it most. I love fantasy and want to read more... Next Chapter...

Posted: May 31, 2007

Author Comment:

lol. It's really the prologue.

WOW
I LUV IT!!!
I LUV FANTASY!!
I LUV THIS BOOK!!
THIS IS REALLY GOOD SO FAR
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!

Posted: Aug 2, 2007

Author Comment:

LOL. Okay, I'll make sure to get more up for you. I haven't been writing this story for a while, but I'll get back in it, promise. I'm so glad that you like it.

-SnowQueen

great start. i need to read more now

Posted: Aug 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Well, Chapter 11 is up. I'm glad you like it. :)

-SnowQueen

i like this beginning alot. i write fantasy too and i will take time to read your story. y dont u take a peak at my beginnin of my novel that i wrote u might like it.i like fairies as well and i do have them in my story but they are towards the middle of my novel but take a look and keep up the good work.

Posted: Sep 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Cool! Sure, I'll look yours up. I'm really glad that you like my story. I'll try to get more up soon. Thanks big time for reading!

-SnowQueen

Adelyna
(not registered user)

Wow! that is really good. I love stories that are fantasy! (probably cuz i write those better)lol.
Can't wait to read more!!!

Posted: Oct 25, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm a huge fantasy lover myself. I'm glad that you're interested in this story!

-SnowQueen

Very powerful opening. It's brilliant! I definately am hooked.

Posted: Nov 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Yay! I'm so glad! Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it! I hope you'll stay hooked till the seventeenth chapter! :P

-SnowQueen

Ienne
(not registered user)

Wow, that was amazing!!!!

Posted: Nov 16, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well. Thanks so much for reading!

-SnowQueen

Ooooh, this is awesome! You are really talented. I'm definitely gonna be reading the rest, but I'm afraid it'll have to be tomorrow, because at the moment, I'm falling asleep in front of the computer. Haha. But anyway, great beginning!

Posted: Nov 22, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks! I appreciate your compliments! I'm glad to hear that you are going to be reading the rest of this story. Thanks for reading and commenting.

-SnowQueen

oooh, intriguing start. hope i have enough time to read all the chapters!

Posted: Dec 31, 2007

Author Comment:

:P The first few chapters aren't that well written. I'm working on rewriting them after I'm finished with the book. I'm glad you like it so far!! :)

-SnowQueen

That was really good! Thanks for your comment on my page. If your interested in my writing, I'm working on a novel called The Legend of the Golden Dragon.

I cannot wait to read more!

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

:) I'm glad. I'm anxious to read it. I'm glad that you like my story.

-SnowQueen

Oh, I LIKE! VERY MUCH! It's great to have a good prologue like this, that way you get peeps' attention! Good job of not making it boring or too . . .weird . . .
Keep it up!

Posted: Jan 15, 2008

Author Comment:

:P I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for your comment!! :)

-SnowQueen

Great story sounds really interseting.

Posted: Mar 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad you think so. I'll try to update quickly but I'm totally stuck. I hope you like the rest of the story as much as the prologue. :)

-SnowQueen

omg wow

Posted: Mar 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I hope you like the rest as much, if not more, than the first chapter. :D

-SnowQueen

Very attention grabbing. Who "stole" the heir? Do we get to see more of Alvin or is he just one of those one time characters? Why am I asking questions when you've got over twenty chapters posted? -.- Looking forward to reading more!

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

:P Nah. This is the very beginning and you'll never see Alvin again. As to who stole the heir, you shall see! I'm so very glad that you liked this and I cannot wait to hear your thoughts on the rest!

-SnowQueen

Great!
I love it.
I like Kalen and think Alvin is childish and a bit petty.
I'm off to read more!
Keepers' River

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it and yes, Alvin is childish considering that Kalen is actually doing his job, unlike the guy that is supposed to be in charge. I'm glad that you're off to read more! I'm anxiously awaiting your opinions!

-SnowQueen

Very cool! I really like it!!! I can't wait 2 read more!

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

:D I'm glad you enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what you think about the rest of the story. :) Thank you so much for commenting. I really, really appreciate it!

-SnowQueen

Good opening, I enjoyed it and look forward to the other chapters. I do hope something terrible happens to Alvin, he annoys me right off the bat, heh heh. ;)

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

:P Yeah. He is quite an idiot, isn't he? I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope that you enjoy the rest. :D

-SnowQueen

GREAT 1st chapter! If I don't comment on some, I'm sorry! But I'll try to comment on as many as possible! :-)

Posted: Dec 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey, that's okay! I'm just glad you're taking the time to read it. :P Thank you!

-SnowQueen



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